Ive read yours, Kilana, Im pretty impressed with all of that. And, Bonkutsu, Ill add in those apostrphes, Ill always leave those out : / "Ignore it. " was a statement, it wasnt in dialogue. And "~~" signalizes thoughts and the swords dialogue, not spoken words. And I dont really have this in chapter format yet, Im just putting down what comes to me and then posting it here. Ill group chapters together as I see fit. Still needs a title. Ill probably have that figured out when I write more.
Last edited by Ninaura : 06-05-2008 at 01:10 PM.
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