I like the fist one, Hung from the heart, I like the coffee to go line. It really does sound like a song. Although maybe Coffee To Go as title will be better? Hehe. Kidding. Probably wouldn't sound Blink182-y or something.

I like the dancing song too. It's almost like, just reading the lyrics, there is a certain musicality to it already. Haha.

Keep writing.

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