Wow i leave this thread for a day and already it explodes. I may have hit somthing good with this idea. I love the way it's going. BTW I'm not really emo but with my background (Char background not mine) he's a little depressed. My last post shows him starting to warm up a bit .

Like I said, I like where this is going, but we need more humans in the story. Particulary a Human sympathiser. Someone who likes Ferals and wants to be friends. This person will obviously be hated by Angela and called a traitor, but you get the idea. Anyone up to the task?

As for direction, I'll like any direction you like to go in. I'd like to play on this Feral resistance idea that Angela is a part of. Remember this is a Sci-Fi story so think big. Angela has a 'breakable' screen, yet others have holographic screens. I guess the breakable kind could have incredible resolution compared to a fuzzy hologram and could be why it's so expensive.

For those who still want to join, Try and get more Humans, but if you really want to be a Feral, there are other animals than dogs and cats. I was hoping for a bird type, fish, or even insect type ferals to introduce themselves. Monkey's anyone?

The point of view doesnt have to stick to Donta and his group. Perhaps Angela has her own lackies that she hangs around with. With the way things are going, I expect the story to turn into a Feral vs Human battle regardless of the Equality act.

Keep it up!

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