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Old 03-25-2008
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(no problem, but may I point out one spelling thing that's been bugging me? Rouge=red, Rogue is the one you're wanting)

Ryutsuki stretched, yawned, and fell into his room. Then he remembered, "Crap! Chuunin exams are in a week! And I'm still not on a team... dammit... the team I was with got cocky and then impaled... what was the ninja's name... Za-something... oh well. I need to train...." he muttered to himself, he looked outside. The sun was rising.

Ryutsuki got up from the floor he had fallen to and strapped on his sandals, then he leapt out of his window and made his way to the Hokage's office. He didn't bother knocking or even opening the door. "Shinzui Sanpo no Jutsu.." he muttered, then walked through the door. "Hokage, I want to be in a team, and just to prove that I can see better than anyone here... The top left book on the shelf, Hand-signs for simpletons. The bottom right, wow... that's pathetic... If you give a ninja a shuriken... that's a kid book... Oh, and, on your desk, the top paper says something along the lines of there being a sensei who's open for a team. Tada. Oh yeah, someone's coming." he said, now getting obsessive about the details...

(Shinzui Sanpo no Jutsu translates roughly to Spirit Walk Technique)
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