Great posts everyone!!!
I was thinking the characters just throw in ideas and create a plan but then I realized there is always the anal boss who does everything by the rules and the co captain who loves to break them, maybe Erk could do one of these things. Hi Kilanabeautifulsky, maybe you could be one of them too. I thought up an opening of police-agency liason. That's the person Kundiman was talking to.
Hi, sorry for that intro, I posted the wrong thing, sigh, I had the edited version ready and ended up posting the scrap. Sorry! Fixed it already though...
I think the characters should move to get dinner and talk about the plan there... or take out food. It all depends on the next poster...
What should happen in the next posts besides you introducing a little bit more or a lot of your characters are the following:
1. We find out that the witness is staying at a shelter for pregnant teenagers
2. We all go undercover in the area. (Kundiman will pretend to be a pregnant teen).
3. We all do our roles, i.e. research what we need to, break in to get the files we need, identify what killed the victim, acquire the weapons we need.***
4. Divide into three groups eventually. One that guards the witness, another that will ambush the creature and a third who’ll look for the creature’s lower half.
Oh yes, and please describe the office for us. Ask me to describe a fantasy world and I can give you a vivid picture but this mundane office is out of my league. Help.
That’s it for a kind of outline. No one kills the creature until everybody gets a chance to post okidokie? And it’s a rule that the agents never go and do anything alone. When you sneak in an office somewhere, you’ll have someone with you. Always, no exceptions.
Kundiman’s going to be assigned to guarding the witness by the way, it’s most logical since she’s pretending to be a pregnant teen. The witness knows we’re guarding her. Hmm... anyone who does a mistake because they didn’t read this will get licked by the monster... or more. Haha.
And if you have monster suggestions, please post them here, we’ll vote on it... It’ll be the third adventure.
And please, make your posts at least ten sentences and three paragraphs long. I’ll let the monster take a chunk out of you if you don’t follow... O_o ... it occurred to me that someone might like getting bitten and or licked by flesh eating creatures, in which case you don’t have to break the rules here for it to happen, you can just write it happening.
Happy posting! Tell me if I’m getting too anal about things...
***apparently, the only thing that can cut the tongue is a scythe... and what hurts it most effectively are whips and the spine-tail/backbone of a turtle.
Oh and I'll wait for the rest before posting again.
. Whoever the anal boss and the not so anal boss will be will come in as a new comer to the agency, meaning we're not used to them etc. So there.