I have to say, that one part that doesn't flow is the part where Dr. House goes to check on the interns and Dylan and Kinga are both signed in. Yet Dylan went out to get the Indian food?
In my last post I had put for Kinga to ask Dylan for advice but I had accidentally used the wrong name. I fixed my post so it makes sense now but I think that it doesn't run very smoothly.
Drg, its OK if you don't have time. But if you don't have time to properly read through the previous posts just wait until you do. This thread isn't a super fast one and we'd rather have well developed paragraphs than have you posting just to make a post. Just relax, it isn't a race =)
And sorry if my grammar isn't the best. I read through my posts and try to fix the mistakes but my English isn't what it used to be since I've been living abroad. I actually joined the site to get it back up to par before I take my SATs.
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LiZi wuz hurr. (Don't you just HATE gangster talk?)
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