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So I take it the general consensus is pleased thus far with this RP?

Character Name: Elliot Vent

Age: 19

Gender: Male

Physique: Thin, tall and wiry

Occupation: Author

Short Bio: Elliot left home at the age of fifteen, living on the streets of New York, drifitng in and out of the various gangs of the city. He met his first and only friend, Mouse, an enormous grey dog who is fiercly protective of him. He and Mouse gained a reputation as a pair of cold and highly intelligent criminals.

During his time on the streets Elliot saw the desolation of the lower class, fighting for survival every day and this inspired him to write stories. Scribbled on pieces of paper and even trash he wrote of a world after civilisation, when man had destroyed himself and only a few bloody remnants survived.

A publisher took interest in his submitted work and he was pulled out of the slum-life of the New York lower class. Now he lives in middletown, away from the noise of the city, with Mouse, his Gang days seemingly forgotten, quietly writing his stories.

apparently the intro goes in here...Now to wreckin my brain >_> o wait... can u approve my chara first? it's edited into the first post of mine.

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I accept all characters instantly, so long as they are human, not zombies, and are realistic.

Oh, okay. Thanks!

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Name: Mark Savets
Age: 26
Gender: Male
Physique: Athletic but not overbuilt.
Occupation: Martial Arts Instructor (Krav Maga)/Army National Guard ((if that's too much I will fix it.))
Short Bio: Feeling like he needed to give more back to his nation so he joins the National Guard and teaches Combat Krav Maga too the other Guardsmen. While the Guard being a part-time job he is a full-time civilian Krav Maga instructer.
Introduction: Mark was commuting from his Guard training to his day job as a Martial Arts instructer. He is about 5'9" tall, by no means a giant. He has dark blond hair in an army style cut. He has a fit build from his Martial Arts and National Guard training. He has a slight limp from an injury obtained from His Guard training, but for the most part is in peek condition. He has blue-grey eyes that seem to always be in a watery state.

Before he gets to his Studio Mark is approached by a teenage boy in a hoodie sweater, groaning and stumbling with every step Mark comes to the conclusion he is either drunk or high. The young man grabbed Mark by the elbow of his uniform and tryed to reach for his face. Mark reacted by swivling and strikeing the top of the boys wrist with his forearm and wrenching his elbow out of his grip simultaneously. Taking hold of the boys wrist and the shoulder of his sweater and kicks out the back of his leg while throwing him down. Struggling on the way down the boy lands at a bad angle causing his neck to bend with an audiable crack. As he starts to get back up Mark takes a step back, "W-what the hell?!" with more groans and moans comeing from various directions, Mark bolts for downtown. And so begins his nightmare....

okays - done, short intro but like its 2.30 am I can't think of anything better right now lol

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Is my character realistic in his skills? If it's overdoing it I can adjust.

Wow, epic pic, sorry. I'll be editing the intro in a bit...just saving my spot.

Character Name: Seth Pryor

Age: 23

Gender: Male
Physique:

Occupation: Mechanic

Short Bio: Seth spent much of his boyhood in Middleton, and remembers it fondly. His mother dealt with the Seth's father's by having a string of loser boyfriends and chemical dependencies. Last week she OD'd, landing herself in the hospital before dying at the ripe old age of 45, and Seth drove from Oregon to be at her funeral and arrange her affairs.

Introduction:

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