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This sounds like an extremly good roleplay, i hope my bio is good enough. Even if its not, i will keep up with this one, and see how it falls thorugh
 Name: Xavier Age: 26 Sex: Male Hometown: Danatra Weapon(s): Several throwing knives. Understanding of Magic: Almost no physical ability at all, other than his basic throwing and his extended endurance. Xavier makes up for this with his highly advanced magic. He has a natural affinity for Raw magic, ecspecially in electricity and spells in the Physcic nature. He Prays more than needed to the goddess of knowledge, Jianne. Description: He wears a Black cloak that obscures many of his features, although his natural white hair can be spotted along with his slightly tanned body. His eyes are a blue, and upon closer inspection you can almost feel knowledge flowing out of them. Although he would be considered beautiful, somthing about him gives him a dangerous air. Bio: Xavier truly has no home, he is a drifter, going in and out of several towns in secret. He often goes to libraries and checks out a couple of books, mostly about language. He almost never gets around to returning the books due his wondering, and most likely never will. He constantly commits theft to survive and has became more skilled in the art, not often caught. He is quiet, but if he does talk, he is stubborn and head-strong.
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"Oh what I would do to have The kind of strength it takes to stand before a giant With just a sling and a stone Surrounded by the sound of a thousand warriors Shaking in their armor Wishing they'd have had the strength to stand..." 
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Approved, just a note: Physcic, I'm assuming you mean Psychic?
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Um, yes. Sorry about that, i have always had a hard time spelling that word.
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"Oh what I would do to have The kind of strength it takes to stand before a giant With just a sling and a stone Surrounded by the sound of a thousand warriors Shaking in their armor Wishing they'd have had the strength to stand..."
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Thats cool. Hope you enjoy the RP.
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Of course.
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"Oh what I would do to have The kind of strength it takes to stand before a giant With just a sling and a stone Surrounded by the sound of a thousand warriors Shaking in their armor Wishing they'd have had the strength to stand..."
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I'd like to point out you never quite explained HOW the divinity came to the mountains. I assumed Renfari bonded it to herself, but after she realizes she was going to die, placed them in stones which she then transported to Telag.
She didn't actually have to be there for them to appear, did she?
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Quite. I was thinking it would be a suprise. That the divinity was a large glowing sphere, but there you go, you just killed the future of my RP :'(
Anyway, you're approved, I can change it to Renfri lived after expelling the orb and revisited, that seems to fit in. But can you change your power stones to the orb?
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Why would you keep all that divinity in one orb? It belonged to six people, after all....
But alright, it's the orb, not the powerstones...
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Cheers, approved. She absorbed all of their power and nearly died, to have released it would have even further effects on her. So she released it all as a whole, including her own, into the orb.
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