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*giggles and blushes* Oh you.
Such a sweet-heart Nitekreeper.
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 ^^ September 12th, Sydney...I was there!!!
Whatever, I say? What a wonderful philosophy ya have. 
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Indubitably, now post before I break out Mr. Whip. :P
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Yes massa! I post for you! Only best quality! Half-price for you massa!
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^^ September 12th, Sydney...I was there!!!
Whatever, I say? What a wonderful philosophy ya have.
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Half-price?
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Name: Tia Badaeu
Age: 19 Sex: Female Hometown: Ysat'el'ya Weapon(s): Short daggers useful only for close combat. Isn't proficient in sword fighting knowing only last defence strategies when her magic fails. Any offence is often brash and unplanned. It is generally luck as to where and if the strike makes contact. She does however have knowledge of the human anatomy due to medical experience. It is because of this she knows at least the vital areas to strike if she is forced to kill. Understanding of Magic: Extensive knowledge in the art of raw magic. Generally thinks prayer is superstition and any effects gained from prayer can be attributed to other things. Even within herself however she is not fully convinced and occasionally prays out of habit. She specialises in healing, air and water in raw magic almost fluent in the ancient language that surrounds those elements. She is weak with fire, she believes this is due to her natural ability in water and has little knowledge with earth. Her prayers are attributed to the Goddess Renfri (life = healing >.>) and tends to pray more when she is around patients and is trying to ease suffering. Description: Long sleek hair frames a pale face, although it is usually tied back into a pony tail. She has piercing blue eyes and pale cherry lips. She has a tall and petite build, but athletic (probably from running after people and caring for them all day). she has a scar that runs from her shoulder blade over her shoulder to her collarbone obtained in an incident she has no memory of. Her clothes are generally fitting to her figure, remaining skin tight in her upper torso, as she doesn't want sleeves and material getting in her way, but becoming more flowing at the waist into something similar to a dress/tunic cutting off at her knees. She wears skin-tight pants underneath for warmth and comfort. The only jewellery she wears is a silver locket with her mother's name engraved on the back and a simple sapphire stone (the same colour as her eyes) within the locket, symbolic of her father's favourite saying that the most precious things are within. Bio: Having been brought up in a high class society it was expected she marry richly and early. Despite many offers from many titled families Tia continued in the study of magic and continued to offer her services at a local hospital. Her family engaged her interest in the goddess Renfri when she was younger and she loved the stories told, but as she grew older she began to associate the stories with fiction, but never totally discrediting it in her heart. It was only recently she began to have dreams of the gods. Every night the same thing over and over. At first she dismissed them, however with each passing night she becomes more inclined to believe them a message. She is scared however at how real those dreams feel and always wakes in a cold sweat. Her family, having slowly dwindled down to a few members wish her to take the estate, however it is not what binds her to her hometown. It is the fear of leaving everything she knows behind. (so perhaps with a tiny push she'll go XP)
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Acccepted.
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Name: Zelos Ongee
Age: 20 Sex: Male. Hometown: Ysat'el'ya Weapon(s): None. Understanding of Magic: Proficient in prayer, but excels extremly in hand-to-hand combat. Description: He stands at average hight for a boy his age, and is very well muscled. His hair is spiked like Weiss' from Dirge of Cerberus. He usually doesn't where a shirt, and wears baggy black cloth pants with 'flip flop' sandals. Bio: He heard of the gods as a young boy and was mezmorized. He took a likeing to the idea of Halt, and attempted to sculpt himself into the image of the god. He went to a monastery for most of his young life, training as a Monk warrior. His physical discipline has been his master's favorite area of bragging for a long, long time. His master claims that he could punchhis way through a stone wall. Whether or not this is true has not yet been revealed, as he doesn't care to showboat his abilities.
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Approved, but many typo's. Drop the E add ING. It rhymes for gods sake, how can you NOT remember it!
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Name: Bluespine
Age: One hundred years. To the day. Sex: Not applicable Hometown: Telag, however Bluespine is a roamer and therefore does not have a hometown per say Weapons: In addition to sharp talons and curved beaks, the Malekral have long, swordlike feathers extending from the wrist and ankle. Their tail also acts as a whip. They are capable of scaling sheer cliffs. Understanding of Magic: The Malekral's shriek will terminate any magic in earshot. That is, all mana levels go to zilch. This is an instantaneous, though not permanent, effect. Prayer spells are unaffected. In addition, Malekral have regenerative capabilities that cary in intensity with their distance from the powerstones. Other then this, the Malekral have no magic. Description: Bluespine, named for the single bright feather in his otherwise crimson crest, is a Malekral. Malekral are avian humanoids, with quill-like feathers that cover all but the black-scaled legs and arms. Their hawk-like beaks are obsidian in color, as are the tips of their powerful talons. The long, thin tail is covered in short pikes of dense feathers, able to rend a man from three paces away. Bio: When Renfri began her spell, Malek was quick to act, and began formulating a powerful curse of his own. Six by six soldiers did he make, each a machine of death that could not die. Unfortunately, he was absorbed into the mother goddess before he could complete the curse, so the beings were left with knowledge only of what they were called. Naturally, thirty-six beings without any memory whatsoever just appearing in the Telag mountains was an unusual occurrence. After a bit of panicked infighting, the one that would become Redcrest managed to get them all in some sort of order, saying that there must be some reason for their existence and they'd better figure it out ASAP. As if in reply, the six powerstones appeared. After a quick rush to the dark corners of the cave, the Malekral returned to examine the objects and decided it was their duty to prevent them ever being taken from this place. Thirty seven years later, a young woman wandered into the cave. They were preparing to kill her when she begged to be let free. Bluespine pointed out that as long as she didn't actually take a powerstone, she wouldn't have been a threat. Redcrest agreed, but his second in command, Greenscale, did not trust her not to tell the other outsiders. As a compromise, Bluespine volunteered to watch her until her death to make sure she did not reveal her secret. The Malekral grudgingly agreed, and Bluespine spent the next forty-six years in the presence of the human. His time with her revealed to him the wonders of civilization. He was astounded at how the humans had developed, learning all he could of their machines and creations. He was also bewildered at how they reacted when they saw him, so he used his natural stealth to mostly remain hidden. The woman he was guarding he came to regard as a friend, and assisted through many trials. When she died of old age, he was reluctant to return to Telag, so he took a sewing machine with him. Recently, he has felt a surge of... something. Correctly identifying it as having to do with the powerstones, he races back to the cavern, where he will be told that they all just flashed. What this means, the Malekral do not know, but they are now, more then ever, ready to defend their treasures from the outside realm...
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Assuming the power stones are the 6 fragments of divinity, I must say that Renfri delivered them. That is why she left the human race, to place the "Stones" in the caves. Assuming that power stones are your own, and that you introduced them, I must say renfri would have dropped a large orb. That you would most likely have picked up, becoming the first of six gods reborn.
Until you verify and fix (Both are incorrect at this stage) I cannot approve you. Last edited by Nitekreeper : 07-25-2008 at 10:38 AM.
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