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Old 06-17-2008
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It's no problems also thank you for reviewing my poems, I hope you enjoyed them and keep up the good work, I hope to see more poems done by you on the guild.


Shell Bell

Your eyes so blue
So pretty and true
Your heart was once broken
Maybe even twice
But together lets build
A life with in each others embrace
Never parting
Forever holding on
Let us, our hearts entangle
Let us forever smile
And never frown
Never let another tear
fall upon your graceful cheek
I shall love and hold you
forever my shell bell.

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Crappy poem I wrote :P

With this ring, I thee wed
Put a bullet in my head
never ever should have said
those burning words within my head...
lonely, lonely I'm lonely...someboyd kiss me
somebody hold me...
this love is untrue, and so are you...I wish I was throught with
You
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Your poem says that you've either been hurt badly, or that you object to marriage, if it was written from your heart I cannot imagine what you've been through to make you write such a sad piece. Either way i don't think it is a crap poem.
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Well then my message got across. Thankyou Blaider ^.^
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