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Atalantea It's no problems also thank you for reviewing my poems, I hope you enjoyed them and keep up the good work, I hope to see more poems done by you on the guild.Shell Bell Your eyes so blue So pretty and true Your heart was once broken Maybe even twice But together lets build A life with in each others embrace Never parting Forever holding on Let us, our hearts entangle Let us forever smile And never frown Never let another tear fall upon your graceful cheek I shall love and hold you forever my shell bell. ~blaider
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Crappy poem I wrote :P
With this ring, I thee wed Put a bullet in my head never ever should have said those burning words within my head... lonely, lonely I'm lonely...someboyd kiss me somebody hold me... this love is untrue, and so are you...I wish I was throught with You
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-Cairi Flower-
Your poem says that you've either been hurt badly, or that you object to marriage, if it was written from your heart I cannot imagine what you've been through to make you write such a sad piece. Either way i don't think it is a crap poem.
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"Come ye one and come ye all to test thine wit against mine, lest thine be considered of little prowess in the field of battle for I have come and I have chosen the field for battle, knowledge and wit are my weapons can you best me upon these terms?" ~The Riddler The battle field: http://roleplayerguild.com/f5/riddle-alteria-8175/
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Well then my message got across. Thankyou Blaider ^.^
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