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Writin' letters and stuff.
((nevermind))
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It isn't too bad actually, I have the prologue to my novel idea in the gallery as well, to love thee father it's called, romance angsty novel idea lol.
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Nice narrative! I like where you're going. However, we've got some SPAG issues.
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All in all, interesting stuff! Keep going, keep going.
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Ive read yours, Kilana, Im pretty impressed with all of that. And, Bonkutsu, Ill add in those apostrphes, Ill always leave those out : / "Ignore it. " was a statement, it wasnt in dialogue. And "~~" signalizes thoughts and the swords dialogue, not spoken words. And I dont really have this in chapter format yet, Im just putting down what comes to me and then posting it here. Ill group chapters together as I see fit. Still needs a title. Ill probably have that figured out when I write more.
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Participated Roleplays: Legend of Zelda: Joined Destiny Zombie Survival: Charshire Three Wings guild: part I - Sky Wolf Pack Battle Last edited by Ninaura : 06-05-2008 at 01:10 PM.
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Participated Roleplays: Legend of Zelda: Joined Destiny Zombie Survival: Charshire Three Wings guild: part I - Sky Wolf Pack Battle Last edited by Ninaura : 2 Weeks Ago at 03:13 PM.
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