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Hey guys im going to make a in character when ive got 3-5 players
this is my first RP so be nice lol (although any hints/tips could be helpful)
first of the setting as you can see fro the title its during the SEED Destiny series and i am placing it right in the middle of the second Bloody Valentines war.
The forces are Z.A.F.T (Zodiac alliance Freedom treaty), O.R.B (i dunno) and the Earth Alliance (im pretty sure thats what they were called that or Blue Sun)
Z.A.F.T is at the moment on the defensive as they have had nuclear warheads fired upon one of they colony stations luckily averted by one of the defencive weapons that were created in peacetime. ORB are neutral and are pretty much attacking if they are attacked, Blue Sun is on attack they have a lot of hatred towards the Z.A.F.T forces.

ok the rules....
No godmodding with out characters player consent.
No killing another character with out consent.
usual forum rules.
NO GUNDAMS... they are only like ten or something in the series so just no

mobile suits can come from SEED or SEED DESTINY era a pic would be nice)
(if you want to know more please check up on nearest anime retailer and/or wikipedia/ youtube thanks)
(different weapons can be Laser Gatling guns, laser cannons laser rifles rail gun, missile launcher, and on special misions from myself tact. nuke launchers. etcetc


character sheet
Name:
Age:
Bio(optional):
Historyoptional)
weapon(s):
Friends (if its some one in the rp they have to give consent; you are allowed to have a friend from the other factions)
Mobile suit:
Mobile suit weaponry:
Mobile suit defences:
Ship launched from: (as in what ship fires you out first person to post decides for his her faction)

in my case....

character sheet
Name:Miserius
Age:16
Bio(optional):Got through the academy at an early age due to remarkable abilities with the ZGMF Zaku Gunner type.
Historyoptional). He came from the Z.A.F.T station Julius, he lived his life dreaming to be a Mob. Suit pilot, when the war started and he graduated he achieved his dream.
weapon(s): combat knife pistol
Friends (if its some one in the rp they have to give consent; you are allowed to have a friend from the other factions) his brother aboard the Julius's primary Defence ship the Argonon
Mobile suit:ZGMF Zaku 1000 Gunner Type
Mobile suit weaponry: Beam Cannon, Laser Edged Axe.
Mobile suit defences:Shield (held shield not energy)
Ship launched from:Argonon

I will only step in to introduce a significant character or event in the RP
when it starts you all start off in either the Ship,Colony your from or the earth... thanks guys

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OK! Here are the major, what I call, 'RP preventions' that I found:
1. Proper grammar and spelling. People don't like it when you have a lot of typos in your work, for it makes it hard to read and understand.
2. Expected knowledge. You expect everyone who reads this to know exactly what Gundam SEED is and what's inside of it. You need more explanation, like history, time, setting, etc. You should always assume that there are some people out there that don't know what this is, which prevents them from joining.
3. The Mobile Suits. What are the models? What do each one look like? To the normal eye, 'ZGMF Zaku 1000 Gunner Type' looks like a bunch of random gibberish. If you're gonna make a Gundam RP, then at least do some work and get pictures of the models for everyone to see.

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The blanket of darkness had touched me - caressed my innocent cheek. The warmth it offered felt gentle, kind.
I plunged into the darkness, wanting only the love it offered. I wanted to be loved; for someone to think I was important. This was what I had dreamed so long for.

ah right sorry i knew i forgot something... ill get links to websites i know have pics and etcetera but tommorow as its like 1oclock at night here thanks mate gnight

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