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Bunnay
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Original Gangsta | | Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: Fremont, CA
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|Bunnay's Official Critique Corner| CLOSED UNTIL FURTHER NOTICE (:
ALL SPOTS FILLED. Critique Corner If you wrote it, I'll read it. What is this?
I've decided that as a past time, I'd like to develop my own little Review business, where I'll read and critique anything you write, and the only thing you have to give me is the promise that you won't take anything I say offensive, because after all-- I'm trying to help you, not hurt you and I believe everyone has room for improvement, even myself who makes plenty of mistakes on my own. How does it work?
It's very simple actually. All you do is post here with the link to whatever you want me to read and whenever I next check this thread I'll go and read it, and write you a nifty little review that I'll post here, and alert you when it's ready. All you have to do is be patient because this is just a past time and I've got my own writing to do after all. I'll also be doing random reviews that weren't requested on whatever I feel like reading.
WILL ONLY TAKE 10 REQUESTS FROM 10 DIFFERENT PEOPLE AT A TIME. What kinds of literature will you Critique?
-Roleplays
-Poetry
-Song Lyrics
-Short stories
-Character Sheets
-Specific posts (out of roleplays)
-Plots
If there is something you'd like me to review that isn't listed, then just ask. I will not critique art work (sigs, banners, drawings, ect) because I feel that if you are going to give structural advice on something, you should at least know something about it yourself-- and my forte' is writing, not visual art. Warning
What I write in my reviews is purely my own opinion based on what I've learned in the last 6 years of my active writing life. Some comments I write may not be pleasant and this is my warning to you: if you cannot handle the criticism of others and are only looking to be praised then you've come to the wrong place. While what I write is my opinion, it is also honest to the best of my knowledge and I will not tell you that your work is perfect. It's very easy to understand; if your work is good, I'll tell you so, but if it sucks don't expect me to lie. Rules and Regulations
1.) Link me all of your work from wherever you posted it originally. Do NOT post the actual writing here. If you don't know how to do this, look in the spoiler.
2.) Look below to see how many of what I'll review at a time. Do NOT link me to all of your CS's at once and tell me to go at it. If you want me to do them all, you'll have to wait for them one at a time unless they are a series like posts, but if it's Character Sheets, you'll have to wait.
Character Sheets: 1 at a time
Posts: 3 max
Short Stories: 5,000 words max
Novels: 1 chapter only.
Roleplays: 1 roleplay at a time
Poems/Lyrics: 3 max
3.) Don't send me hatemail because I hurt your feelings. I don't wanna read it.
4.) Don't post flames here or I'll report you.
5.) Do NOT post spam here. If you wanna say Thank you, VM me or PM me. Don't post in this thread unless it is related and important, or more than a couple words, because I want to keep this thread clean. Personal messages to me can be delivered via PM. VOLUNTEERS:
(For those who are currently helping me out with any reviews, thank you so much)
-Sophistikit
-Lord Dragonfly of Dawn GRAPHICS:
(For those who've made banners and graphics for the Corner, thank you! (: )
GENKAI;    
SEPHORA; 
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