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Old 03-25-2008
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Name: Atsureki, Koratsu
Nickname: He could care less.
Gender: Male
Age: 16
Height: 6'4''
Weight: 220 lbs

Hair: Short black hair that is always seemed to be spiked up no matter what he does. Even after he comes out of the water it is sticking up straight as always.

Eyes: He has black eyes but his eyes turn red when he is furious and or using his kekki genkai to its fullest potential.

Physique: He has what you would consider normal physique for a regular ninja. He is somewhat buff but he is not a stick. He has a little fat around his body. HIs right arm is all messed up and devilish look to it.

Traits: He has a scar on his left cheek because of some mishap that happen in the past but other than that he has no other scars.

Clothing: He has a black cloak over a white t-shirt with black pants and black shoes. He also has a sword carrier on his back with a holster on his right knee.

Pictures:

This picture depicts his hair and his clothes but the sword and the colors are different

Ranking: high chunin

Village/Country: The Village Hidden in the leaves.

Weapons/Equipment:

- Shougai x1 (This is Koratsus main weapon that he carries with him everywhere he goes. This blade is about 4 ½ feet long and is made of very rare metals and is difficult to break. It looks like the one in the picture except it is thinner and only four and a half feet long.Also known as souls stealer.)



- Kunai x15
- Shuriken x20
- Small daggers x5
- Exploding Sutras x40
- Empty scrolls x5


Fighting Traits: He is usually a laid back fighter and counters what the enemy throws at him. When he sees a opening he tries to put as much damage on the enemy as possible with is sword or his jutsus. He also uses powerful blows to disarm the foe.

Jutsu Type: Taijutsu and Ninjutsu

Sonic Blade
Type: taijutsu
Rank: C
Description: The user speeds up their body and attempts to attack the enemy in a vital point. If the move misses it can vitally leave the user wide open. His own created move.

Raid
Type: taijutsu
Rank: D
Range: as far as he throws his sword
Description: The user throws his sword like a boomerang towards the enemy and he can alter this move to anyway he can possibly think of.

Blade Key
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Range: 3 by 7 meters
Description: The user buts his or her sword in the middle of and attack and the blade has a 50% chance of negateing the attack. This only works on c and D ranked techniques.

Royal Gaurd
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: S
Range: none
Description: When the user puts his or her sword in front of an oncoming attack then the sword absorbs all the energy in the attack and starts to glow a certain color(depending on the element of the attack) then the user can create a beam or wave slash of the attack that has two times the power of the original attack.

Dark Core
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Range: 10m
Description: An attack that gather most of ones chakra to a hand then it is release in a burst of energy that is short range but has immense power. After this attack the user is usually immobilized because it uses up a lot of chakra.

Blade wave
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Range: 20m
Description: The move kind of speaks for itself but what happens is that the user slashes and a wave of energy is released toward the foe. When it hits a target it explodes.

Cloning
Type: ninjutsu
Rank: D
Description:user makes flawless clones to trick the foe but the clone last for about a minuete and are fack so they never hurt the oponent.

Substatution
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Description: The user switches his or her body with a log or any othe inanimate object in order to get out of a sticky situation.

(there are more jutsus but I cant think of them but I will notify you when I add some more)



Personality: He is one of the most random people in the world. Constantly playing pranks on people and having fun wit almost every moment of his life. But when things get serious and some of his friends are hurt he becomes very serious and has a dead look in his eyes.

History:

Koratsu was born in a small part in konoha near the rim of the city. He has no real gekki genkai it is just that he was born with very little chakra. So doctors tried to put chakra in him from as scroll. Stupidly they put way to much in him so they had to seal it with a ripple type formation on his stomach. LAter in his life he ia able to unleash the seals and open up alot of extra chakra. He has 3 seals in total but after a certain age he will learn that he doesnt need it.

He graduated the konoha academy at the age of 10. His given sensei to him was named Hayate (he never really cared for his last name). This is guy who got him to move really fast and taught him the move dark core where he would need it. On the day before the chunnin exams of his times they were coming home from a mission and they were attacked by very skilled bandits. He and his two other team mates got away but he has never seen his sensei ever again.


Jirays offerd to teach him the move rasengan but jiraya had a better idea after that he decided to mix it up a bit. But reversing rasengan to suck instead of push e could absorb large amounts of power to one place. Then since Koratsu is a very good sealist he can store and release loads of energy very freely and thus the move Royal Guard. After the age of 15 he began to hone his skills and master most of his move but he still has a long way to go.
(his move that he created are mentioned in here everything else was taught to him.)

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((He sounds incredibly powerful. I'm sure he has weak points that you have thought up, though, so you're accepted. You can now make an intro post. Oh, and thanks for being so descriptive. I really get a feeling of what your character is like.))
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Ryutsuki turned and smiled, "Ryutsuki Shinzui, pleased to be working with you." he said, extending his hand in a gesture of peace. "And before you ask, yes, I have no sight in my eyes. Trust me, I can see more like this than you ever could imagine."

Congradulations Ryutsuki! You have a teammate, now you just need a third team member. Unfortunately, we ghosts cannot help you there... Ryutsuki heard the voice of his grandfather's words, everyone else would have heard a moaning wind, "Well, now we need one more..." Ryutsuki said calmly, rolling his shoulders...

(And this is where your intro post can be made, you get demoted or something and sent to our team, or you're just in our team for the chuunin exams for kicks.)
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Meanwhile koratsu walked in with a huge smile on his face and looked wowards the two gennins."Hello my name is Koratsu Atsureki and i am your teamate for the chunin exams. I already am a chunin but scince im joining the othe villages are alowed to add chunin too. Kiraya sensei also told me that we should find a team leader and devise stratage to hone our traits so we can work properly as a team." He sat down and waited for the other two two to follow."I am Koratsu amd i am more of an offensive ninja and my polocy is that no team mate dies unless i die first...and you guys?"
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Ryutsuki looked at the chuunin, "I'm more of an infiltrator slash reconnaisance, so you could call me an offensive ninja. Ryutsuki Shinzui, last surviving member of the Shinzui clan. And... oh... you probably can't see it behind you." he said, indicating what he thought that he alone could see behind Koratsu. "I can really screw people up with my clan's genjutsu and ninjutsu though."
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Name: Kohosi, Kita
Nickname: Whatever they want to call her!
Gender: Female
Age: 17
Height: 5'4''
Weight: 125 lbs

Hair: Long black hair, shoulder length, usually worn in a low half-ponytail or freely.

Eyes: Her eyes are a soft green. They look like they glow in the dark.

Physique: She's very lithe and has a curvy figure, not too much but not too little! =3

Traits: She has two black ink stripes, one on each eye heading down vertically. They are thin and are in the center of the eye, the lines usually lead people to her eyes.

Clothing: [See Picture/Appearance please!]

Picture/Appearance: [She's a bit older than this picture....but I love the outfit.]

Ranking: Jounin

Village/Country: The Village Hidden in the Mist.

Weapons/Equipment:
- Kunai x10
- Shuriken x20
- Explosive tags x45
- Molotov Cocktails
- Sui Hanone [Acid Fang] - A snake sword with the ability to expand and contract at will. Kita performed extensive research to find a suitable weapon to aid in her in battle. She based her design on an Asian multi-segmented whip.

Fighting Traits: In battle she is very tactical, precise, and uses her powerful legs to damage the enemy, accompanied by her acceptable agility and stamina she's very difficult to beat.

Jutsu Type: Genjutsu, Ninjutsu Supplementary

Name: Kidate no Fukushuu (Nature's Revenge)
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: D-C
Range: 10-20ft.
Description: With the assistance of nature Kita can manipulate any plant to attack or trap an opponent. It uses minimal chakra due to the extreme ease of assistance.

Name: Boko no Enjin (Hollow Circle)
Type: Genjutsu
Rank: C-B
Range: About 10-15ft.
Description: Kita's eyes fade to a void-like black when she successfully captures the victims eyes. They see themselves for who they truly are, a thing she had worked on since she was little because sometimes people did not know who they were. Usually what or who they see is so terrifying the person is left in shock for four months minimum.

Name: Wangetsu Kongou Ken Dageki (Crescent Diamond Blade Strike)
Type: Ninjutsu/Taijutsu
Rank: B-A
Range: 17ft approximately.
Description: This is a set of complicated moves with Sui Hanone. It is able to summon a devastating reign of needle-sharp diamonds. It takes a large toll of chakra. But then again, it's worth it.

Name: Nyuumetsu Kusabana Kasou (Dying Flower Masquerade)
Type: Genjutsu
Rank: C-A
Range: Eye-sight. [In other words...FAR]
Description: She captures her victim[s] in this Genjutsu and in it they suddenly see flower petals that are razor sharp are attacking them. If they freak out it actually cuts them in reality and eventually they die. Hence it is called the Dying Flower Masquerade.

Name: Haiiro Namida (Ashen Tear[s])
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: D-C
Range: The faster the wind the farther it goes.
Description: She molds her chakra into a powder and mixes it with ash, blowing it towards a person she's fighting. They get overwhelmed with sadness and break down crying, eventually crying themselves to sleep.

Name: Kigen no Nai [ Rise of the Dead ]
Type: Genjutsu
Rank: C-B
Range: 15ft and under.
Description: This Genjutsu cannot trap people who have not killed or seen people die. It traps it's victim in an Illusion and makes them see all of the people they killed and or watched die. The dead say negative things to them and weaken them mentally, all while doing something similar to Fukyuu no Nemuri, where the 'dead' kill the victim of the Genjutsu.

Name: Fukyuu no Nemuri [ Eternal Sleep ]
Type: Ninjutsu.
Rank: B
Range: 16ft-21ft
Description: Forming her chakra into a fine powder she keeps at her waist and she casts a spell on them that send them into an immediate sleep. She goes into a trance and is then vulnerable in reality, leaving her open for damage or worse. There in the dream realm she can do anything, such as stabbing, kicking, and it will create damage in physical reality. So if the victim or opponent is killed in the dream, they are truly dead.
Chakra: Medium to extreme depending on what she does in the dream realm.


Hinotama Bakuretsu Dan no Jutsu - (Fireball Bomb Jutsu)
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Range: 15ft
Description: Kita's own creation, the waterproof fire ball. This was the original form so it costs less chakra then forming it. She can throw them as far as 15ft and it uses a mild amount of chakra.

Hinotama Shurikens no Jutsu- (Fire Shurikens Jutsu)
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Range: Approximately 6ft.
Description: Made out of waterproof fire [well...for the most part.] She manipulates them into small shuriken that can attack the opponent. It is a costly move, but highly effective. If her adrenaline gets to high they start to duplicate and she cannot control the duplicates. It is very affective, especially with the additive she created as mentioned below.

Retsu Ru Hinotama Shuriken Ba-Suto no Jutsu - (Burst[ing] Fire Shuriken Jutsu)
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Range: 6ft
Description: They are the same waterproof fire shuriken as the jutsu above but once they get close range they burst into tiny little needles of fire that stick onto the opponent.

Personality: She's a tad bit hot-headed mentally. She's usually very calculating and she has trouble showing any emotions other than her happiness. Other than that she keeps her trademark lop-sided grin on her face, not wanting people to worry about her.

History:
Kita was born and raised in The Village Hidden in the Mist, raised in an average family.
Her parents died in a fire when she was six, her grandparents taking her in until they died two years later from old age.
She had lived by herself since the age of eight. She soon dropped out of ninja school and holed herself up in her home, only coming out when she needed to restock on food.
She encouraged herself to get back into the ninja school. She soon received her headband and was given the title of Genin, but at a terrible price, she and been the only one to survive out of twenty in the final test to become a Genin, she had offered to help the others but they refused, all of them either disabled severely or killed through the maze. The Mist Village is known for it's harsh ways of creating teams, but they never expected this to happen. She had quickly been taken into an older group's team and had risen to the rank of Chuunin soon after.
Soon after that she went went on many dangerous missions, sometimes barely getting out with her life. Over time the respect from other people in the village grew until she rose to the rank of Jounin. She continued to do missions but she began to experiment on making a few genjutsu's creating the ones you see up in her jutsu area.
She left the Mist Village at the age of 15 and began to wander from place to place, not wanting to be in that deadly place of mist stained red. She has been nearing the perimeters of Kohona, but she is not sure if they will accept her, seeing as the Mist and the Leaf villages are on bad terms.

Pet/Scroll Summon

Inside Scroll One:
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Name of Pet/Summon: Kyouko

Owner: Kita

Breed: Three tailed demon Fox

Physical Description: Bright red-orange fur, is usually the height of 1 1/2ft when not in battle, he transforms to at least the size of an average horse. He's engulfed in a mist while he transforms. He's built with a powerful frame and has elongated canines.

Picture: [I'll get this on eventually...the person on him has nothing to do with him.]

Personality: He's a bit stubborn...okay...Really stubborn, but that's only because he cares and has his own way of handling things, he loves children.

Special Abilities: Besides the ability to transform to the size of a horse he can breathe underwater, due to a seal Kita placed on him that was permanent. His fur is very sleek and covered with a waterproof coating that can make him glide through water fast while Kita distracts the enemy.

History: Into the beginning of her journey she encountered a dead female fox and immediately began to search the surrounding area for if she had any kits. Low and behold she found two little kits hidden in a den a small ways into the forest. There was a boy and a girl fox kit. She named them Kyouko and Mizu.
When Kyouko was taken under Kita's care he had an accident in a training routine, his tail got separated into three strips so they healed into three separate tails, making people think he was an evil demon fox. But rest assured he's not, he's on the good side!

Inside Scroll Two:
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Name of Pet/Summon: Mizu

Owner: Kita

Breed: Demon Fox

Physical Description: Bright red-orange fur, is usually the height of 1 1/3ft when not in battle, she transforms to at least the size of an average deer. She's engulfed in a mist while she transforms. She's built with an aerodynamically slim but smaller frame than Kyouko and has elongated canines.

Picture: [I'll get this on eventually]

Personality: She's very serious in battle but otherwise she's very shy and tends to bite people if they don't approach her carefully.

Special Abilities: Besides the ability to transform to the size of a deer, if she can gain enough speed she can hover above the ground lightly and she has the ability to melt into shadows and become one.

History: Into the beginning of her journey she encountered a dead female fox and immediately began to search the surrounding area for if she had any kits. Low and behold she found two little kits hidden in a den a small ways into the forest. There was a boy and a girl fox kit. She named them Kyouko and Mizu.
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((occ:glad to have you along puppet fox its me dragon...anyway hey im comfused what rutsyuki talkin about))
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((PuppetFox, you're accepted. Some of your character's jutsu sound a lot like Hanako's Kekkei Genkai. *laugh* By the way, the molotov coctails are fine. Err... Dragon, my character isn't a genin, she doesn't even have a village. I'm not offended or anything, just thought you should know.))

Hanako turned to Koratsu. "My name is Hanako. Nice to meet you. I guess you could call my fighting style ninjutsu, but it doesn't really use chakra. It's hard to explain, you'll get it when you see me fight." Hanako didn't mention that she was studying genjutsu, as she only liked to use it when she had to. "Anyway, I guess we have a squad, even if it's temporary. Why don't we go outside and train a little? It would be good to get to know each other."
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Kita looked around from her place in the middle of a field. She was laying down in the tall grass just staring at the sky. Cloud watching was one of her old past times, especially when she used to be depressed, she closed her eyes and sighed happily as the breeze played with her bangs.

'I should be moving soon.....' Kita thought and pushed herself up into a sitting position. She looked around again and listened to her surroundings. Nothing except for the swaying noise of the grass. 'My life....is.....boring.'

She let her head hang low and sighed in defeat. This was going to be another long day....
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((sorry role play confusion =\))

"Alright then lets go see what you made of" he said as he got up and made a gesture to tell him to go outside.
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