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Back to the brown tinged sky
the cracked black streets
and the fetid stench of the lonely
My Home Sweet Home
Back to where souls die
their wretched lives puttering
the wretched ashes
of Home Sweet Home
Back to crime
nickels and dimes
the torturous passage of time
the retarded wrapping in rhymes
Sounds like Home Sweet Home
No more sunny days
or happy faces
or easy jobs
in my Home Sweet Home
Only, terrible tests
and ridiculous tribulations
the prove the mettle of those
living at Home Sweet Home
Not bad for freeform poetry, but...
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Generally I'd put a random, pointless, waste-your-time comment here, but I felt I might as well just say that I liked it.
On a similar topic I wrote a sixty stanza ballad a week or two ago.
ANGST ANGST ANGST ANGST ANGST ANGST ANGST ANGSTQuote:
Originally Posted by Jorick
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Jesus, that took me like an hour, that must have taken you forever. I'd love to read it if you're willing to share.Quote:
Originally Posted by Antarctic Termite
lolpoems
lolenglishmenQuote:
Originally Posted by Ozymandias
Sorry for a late reply.Quote:
Originally Posted by Turtlicious
I'll let you read it, but probably tomorrow (because I have to present it then and that way if it's terrible I'll find out before sending it to anyone). It's a school projecty thing.
Who are you calling English?! D:Quote:
Originally Posted by Herzinth
Do you not speak English?Quote:
Originally Posted by Ozymandias
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As your primary language that is.
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