My CS's-criticisms welcome
Avatar RP (in progress)
Name: Rilyn Naor
Appearance: Rilyn is about five foot eight, average height. He has dark brown hair, green eyes, and a slim, muscular build. He isn't however, as muscular as many earth benders of his age are-due to his lack of bending, he doesn't focus on training the same way that they do.
Home Nation/Origin: Earth Nation, Ba Sing Se
History: When it was discovered Rilyn could not bend, his parents wanted him to have some other way to keep up
Skills: (keep these reasonable, if you're a bender you should have a basic foundation at best)
Special Equipment: (Again reasonable, none of you should be armed to the teeth or anything crazy)
Aspirations: To prove himself worth of the attention of his peers, and to prove he can keep up with those who can bend.