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    Elegant Violence: The OOC of Lillian & Lyzan


    Risa is tall and slender with what would be a willowy build were it not so well muscled from her time outdoors. Her face is long with a wide curving mouth which is prone to smiling, a curved straight nose of which she is quite proud and wide brown eyes. Her skin is a dark gold with a spattering of freckles across her cheeks and some long claw scars across her abdomen. She dresses plainly in browns and prefers to go barefoot when she can. She has long brown hair with she keeps braided in a multitude of small braids over her head. When in the village she adorns the braids with small charms and bells so that she makes music when she walks.

    She is known to have a sharp tongue when irked but generally is pretty friendly if a little proud of her accomplishments. She is over fond of competition but not a poor loser but she can be pretty ruthless in her efforts to win.

    She lives with her grandmother Brenna, the village herb woman/midwife. Risa’s parents left to find work in the nearest city before she was born. Their decision was seen as something of a slap in the face of the village and its traditions and the shame took its toll on Brenna who became a bit waspish in reaction. When the trader’s caravan showed up five years later with a young Risa in tow and a note for Brenna that she couldn’t read, some small measure of the shame lifted and she set about making Risa a useful member of the village and a credit to her disgraced grandmother. They had a rocky relationship as Risa had a mind of her own and didn’t always take to the firm grip of her grandmother but as village life suited her she did take to learning the traditions. Their biggest fight came when Risa was 16 and announced she didn’t want to follow her grandmother’s trade but wanted to take up hunting. She was denied and promptly disappeared. People thought that she’d gone the way of her parents but she returned several days later with the skin and meat of a Dire bear whose hide was riddled with all the scars from past attempts by the men of the village to kill the beast. She simply dropped the bundle off at the head hunter’s door and went home to have the laceration on her abdomen tended too.

    Zarco


    Zarco was known for his intimidating demeanor. Standing tall and was rewarded with a physique of sinew muscles due to his rigorous training. His hair was a mess on top of his head and on each side was braided. 'Tails' of braids rested just over his wide shoulder. His skin was the hue of earth itself, tanned. His brow was in an angle that portrayed an angry look and his strong jaw displayed arrogance. However, his eyes revealed long years of sorrow and mirrored the glaring yellow of the sun. Across his broad chest was a nasty scar. From the top of his right shoulder to the bottom of his left chest and few minor scars scattered his back.

    A quiet man and seldom did he show the signs of having a decent conversation except for the sarcasm and acerbic words he threw to those he disdain. An ambitious character and showed determination in getting what he wanted even to the extend of risking his own life for it.

    Such attitude was the cause of the appealing scar. Staying with his weaponsmith uncle, Zarco was fond of making weapons. He knew that the best weapon came from a rare creature. Attempting to please his uncle, he sneaked out in the middle of a night and never returned. A search party were sent and tracked down his trail. They managed to find him sprawling on a branch of a tall tree. With fresh deep wound bleeding profusely. His uncle, Hawkins, carried the dying child to the village's medicine lady. Brenna mentioned that he'd a slim chance of surviving but was proven wrong by the stubborness and the strength of Zarco's will. This was where the once cheerful child changed himself. As if resurrected and had returned from seeing the underworld, he ramained quiet. He took the traits of his uncle and began smithing himself. In his free time, he trained his body rigorously resulting in having the wound reopened a couple of times. The defeat angered him and using the rage as fuel, he pushed himself in his training. Hoping that such a defeat would never happen again.


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    Steel, a tall and lean built man; athletic. With short unkempt grey hair which surprisingly hadn't made him look any older than he already was, nested his head. A pair of lazy emerald eyes on a stubborn looking face. He'd a scar under his chin, shown clear within the three day old beard he'd gain. His skin, lightly tanned for he seldom spend his time in the sun. Usually out at night in his long leather coat and tinted glasses. Wearing rugged jeans and combat boots.

    A man of few words. Keen in observation but seldom showed interest in anything. He liked things as it was but may take some time in adapting to changes. He'd the a habit of talking to himself when there's nobody around.

    He named himself Steel after he'd left the orphanage. His true identity was kept to himself with reasons unknown. Having numerous run ins with the law, Steel became well known among the authorities. His records dated back from when he was in his early teens. Each homicide case within the region of his stay were linked to him but held no solid evidence to have his neck roped. Resulting in having the pests of the government, knocking on his door everytime a murder happened. Most of the time it happened, his alibi -Father William- saved him from the rigmarole of interrogations. The priest found the boy and discovered his gifts years ago before he started to take Steel under the church's care. Teaching him and trained him to serve the church. In a way much different than any would have expected.


    Birdie

    Birdie looks small and frail, with slender graceful limbs and a petite frame. Her hair is a curly glossy brown that is kept in a close cropped cut that emphasizes her well shaped skull and graceful arching neck. She has enormous dark brown eyes framed by impossibly thick lashes. Her nose is a graceful and dainty arch over small but well formed lips. Her chin is just a touch stubborn and that is where her innocent face betrays her, all else looks of sweetness and innocence but for the chin. She keeps herself garbed in layers of clothing trying to bulk up her frail appearance, it generally doesn’t work. She isn’t as frail as she seems, with a wiry strength and an inner stubbornness that keeps her going long after she should have quit.

    Raised from the age of four by an elderly, shut in aunt on Government assistance Birdie pretty much had the run of things. As long as Aunt Gretchen didn’t get disturbed by the school or social workers more often than absolutely necessary Birdie could do as she liked. So she spent her younger years all but neglected, dirty and the target for bullies at school. But Birdie was clever and passed most classes with ease but she was bored and unhappy at school where she remained a target. She started skipping as soon as she could get away with it and she got away with it often because Birdie had help. As long as she could remember shadows had talked to her, some sweetly, some not so sweetly and if she ignored them they eventually went away. But if she talked to them or touched them they grew a little in power. She eventually made “friends” with a few of the clever persistent ones and they began helping her with some simple tasks. Petty things like homework to unlocking the door after curfew, to greater things like stealing money from tip jars and open till’s, to newer greater tasks like punishing the worst of the bullies. Birdie occasionally felt bad but the voices talked sweetly to her and she was soothed temporarily.

    She was caught “shoplifting” one too many times and escaped from a holding cell with far too much ease for a girl of seventeen. The tape of her escape was reviewed and inspected many times but the static and odd darkness in the footage was never explained and the reasons for her escape remain a mystery. Word got around to the correct ears of her unnatural escape and people began looking for the talented girl, people from different factions looking for a useful tool who was wandering the streets, alone but for her very interesting friends.







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    I'll leave the naming of them to you. Risa always just called his mother the fire woman. Would you put in Risa's mother's name, Willa in the OP. Thanks. I love having it for reference.
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    Haven't read your post yet. Just got up and still a little groggy. I'll put it up soon.

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    no hurries.
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    Excellent post, as usual!
    I've added Risa's mother and Zarco's parents in the first post. My apology for missing that out. Wasn't my intention to.
    Do feel free to add or suggest anything for me to put up in the first post. This is yours as much as it is mine, so please don't hesitate.
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    Don't worry about it, it was only in writing up the dream sequence that I remembered I'd named her. I then had to scroll through my posts because I couldn't remember the name, so no worries.
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    Just a quick question, (sorry I am running late with my reply) I was wondering if you wanted me to play the part of Turen's Mother the way you played Flint? Or were you planning on running that part? Either way is fine and I should have a post up for you later today. I hope your weekend is lovely.
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    It's alright. No hurries. Your posts are worth the wait. Yeah, you could play her like I did Flint. I'm not that good at playing a female character. My apology.

    My weekend's kind of boring.
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