Tenshi Jigoku Academy 4 OOC

[OverlordRoo]

I JUST FUCKED UP A LVL 16 PONY!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD

NICE! *brohoof*

[Goldilocks]

NICE! *brohoof*

Just one more and i'll be at 250 kills! ^^

[Captain Ivan]

Same, as in, I'm not allowed to have any type of fairy because there already is one?

And how the heck is Rebecca god-modded?

In order to avoid inconsistencies with races, the first person to make a specific one is largely in charge of the details behind it. You may have deviated from the guidelines for fairies. Find out if that's the case.

Also, ignore Kuroku.

[Amethyst]

Roo: if I take your parenthetical notations out of my character sheet, would you accept Anna?

[Goldilocks]

Roo, your pony got to be my 250th kill!!!!!!! ^^ even with the level up i still pwned your pony with a perfect health bar!!!! ^^

[Amethyst]

Roo? Please?

[OverlordRoo]

Roo, your pony got to be my 250th kill!!!!!!! ^^ even with the level up i still pwned your pony with a perfect health bar!!!! ^^

Um...Yay, I guess...

I should probably get finishing my HW so I can work on posts....

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Roo? Please?

What? *has not been paying attention*

[Amethyst]

K edited all of your parenthetical notations. This one or Rebecca, please?

Name: Anna Grace Victor
Age: 14
Gender: female
Race: Pixie
Personality: Very upbeat and outgoing. Anna will always be out floating in the sunshine during the spring and summer. She really likes to talk, and is annoying as hell when she starts twittering about something, especially if its a rant or emotional conversation.
History: Anna grew up as an ornery child, and would probably be classified as a sociopath. Her favorite thing to do was stick thorns in her sister's hammock, and her second favorite thing was probably pulling all of the leaves off of a tree. Her parents had home-schooled her, labeling her as a threat to society, but when she burned the family juniper bush to ashes, her mother and father sent her here, saying that the strict headmaster would sort her out.
Appearance:
Other: uhhhh.....is there such a thing as pixie dust?

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Name: Rebecca Johnson
Age: 14
Gender: female
Race: human
Personality: Upbeat and out going, but don't tick her off. She very often will blurt something completely random during math or science.
History: Rebecca lived with her parents and sister Amanda in Maine for the first 5 years of her life. When they moved, Rebecca couldn't fit in at school. She wasn't sure why or how, but no one would befriend her. After being bullied for months, she was transferred. Again, she couldn't fit in. She had been suspended 27 times (for violence as a victim of bullying) and transferred 28 times before her mother found the academy.
Appearance: ignore the cat.
Other: Rebecca has a dog named Rosie.

There roo. Is that better?

[Goldilocks]

If Roo approves I'm sure your characters will/would receive a very warm welcome to the school, I have a character or two that could show you around... ^^ (tries to decide between Romano and Buratta...)

[OverlordRoo]

Okay roo. Last time.

Name: Anna Grace Victor
Age: 14
Gender: female
Race: Pixie
Personality: Very upbeat and outgoing. Anna will always be out floating in the sunshine during the spring and summer. She really likes to talk, and is annoying as hell when she starts twittering about something, especially if its a rant or emotional conversation.
History: Anna grew up as an ornery child, and would probably be classified as a sociopath. Her favorite thing to do was stick thorns in her sister's hammock, and her second favorite thing was probably pulling all of the leaves off of a tree. Her parents had home-schooled her, labeling her as a threat to society, but when she burned the family juniper bush to ashes, her mother and father sent her here, saying that the strict headmaster would sort her out.
Appearance:
Other: uhhhh.....is there such a thing as pixie dust?

Deep breaths, Roo. We don't need you snapping tonight....

Contrary to belief, I would not unaccept a CS just based on the fact people can't clean up the CS Skeleton. Yes, it makes the CS look much more professional, but primarily what I look for are writing ability and originality.

Originality. Let's say for example;
•A whole new race from the 4th Dimension
•A family of beings that can take the shapes and memories of anyone they come in contact with
•A shadowy, sadistic villian who has come to the school to finish off the remnants of war
•The god of the universe, who happens to be a catboy
•A biologically enhance subhuman from the circus
•A wolf who gained legendary powers by obtaining a rare bloodtype.

I could go on all night. But in short I will say it again; your characters are bland, and pretty much a bunch of Mary Sues. You show little potential for contributing any significance to our plot, and frankly looking over your posts in other threads it doesn't look like you have the writing quality I expect.

Feel free to grovel, call me mean or whatever else you'd like, but in my opinion you're really just not cut out for TJA.