Which one? o.o
I am impartial but I read the fight a couple of times, I thought I saw an advantage you failed to exploit.
The writer who cares more about words than about characters, action, setting, and atmosphere is unlikely to create a vivid and continuous dream; he gets in his own way too much; in his poetic drunkenness, he can't tell the cart- and its cargo- from the horse.
-John Gardner
"Grieve not, wise warrior. It is better
to avenge one's friend than mourn too much.
Each of us must one day reach the end
Of worldly life, let him who can win
glory before he dies: that lives on
after him, when he lifeless lies."
I cannot tell you, like I said I had to re-read it a few times to spot one. But I think you're actions are gonna force him to do something hastily.
The writer who cares more about words than about characters, action, setting, and atmosphere is unlikely to create a vivid and continuous dream; he gets in his own way too much; in his poetic drunkenness, he can't tell the cart- and its cargo- from the horse.
-John Gardner
"Grieve not, wise warrior. It is better
to avenge one's friend than mourn too much.
Each of us must one day reach the end
Of worldly life, let him who can win
glory before he dies: that lives on
after him, when he lifeless lies."
If you understand Snell's law you will see the opening.
The writer who cares more about words than about characters, action, setting, and atmosphere is unlikely to create a vivid and continuous dream; he gets in his own way too much; in his poetic drunkenness, he can't tell the cart- and its cargo- from the horse.
-John Gardner
"Grieve not, wise warrior. It is better
to avenge one's friend than mourn too much.
Each of us must one day reach the end
Of worldly life, let him who can win
glory before he dies: that lives on
after him, when he lifeless lies."
If I understand appropriate wiki usage, you say? On it boss xD
Yep, no, I'm lost. xD Kinda
Bro I cannot tell you, but the opening is there, it just requires out of the box thinking and some very good writing ( Which you are good at, and I know you will kick yourself when you realize it)
The writer who cares more about words than about characters, action, setting, and atmosphere is unlikely to create a vivid and continuous dream; he gets in his own way too much; in his poetic drunkenness, he can't tell the cart- and its cargo- from the horse.
-John Gardner
"Grieve not, wise warrior. It is better
to avenge one's friend than mourn too much.
Each of us must one day reach the end
Of worldly life, let him who can win
glory before he dies: that lives on
after him, when he lifeless lies."
I was gonna try to blind that ass. xD
Or move well enough to have the light bent around me to make me somewhat invisible
You're learning padawan but there is another thing possible with the environment you are given.
BtW the fight is an interesting read, both have done some good things and both have created opportunities not exploited thus far. I am liking it and Tiko and Klikxx is a good read as well.
The writer who cares more about words than about characters, action, setting, and atmosphere is unlikely to create a vivid and continuous dream; he gets in his own way too much; in his poetic drunkenness, he can't tell the cart- and its cargo- from the horse.
-John Gardner
"Grieve not, wise warrior. It is better
to avenge one's friend than mourn too much.
Each of us must one day reach the end
Of worldly life, let him who can win
glory before he dies: that lives on
after him, when he lifeless lies."
Probably position myself well enough to have the light, as he looks at me, magnified by the glass enough to cause severe burns to him.
Or, maybe, have the light reflect my image around the place.