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    Cressida's Corner

    I write sometimes.
    But I cleaned out my gallery because I got paranoid about people who steal writing on the internet.
    So.
    Yeah.
    It's gone now.
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    I like this *Subscribes*

    Keep it up, nice and descriptive, imagination is through the room(Good thing) and I'd like to see where this goes ^__^ well done Cousin
    "This is my escape. I'm running through this world and I'm not looking back.
    'Cause I know I can go. Where no-one's ever gone and I'm not looking back.
    But how will I know when I get there? And how will I know when to leave?
    We've all gotta start from somewhere. It's like that for me!
    The possibilities are, never-ending!
    I see it! I see it! And now it's all within my reach! (Endless Possibilities!)
    I see it! I see it now! It's always been inside of me! (And now I feel so free!)
    Endless Possibilities."

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    YAAAAAAAAAAAY
    *blinks*
    Wait you read the whole thing already?
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    Quote Originally Posted by Cressida Hawker View Post
    YAAAAAAAAAAAY
    *blinks*
    Wait you read the whole thing already?
    Chapter 1 = Yes... I'm a very. very fast reader.

    Chapter 2 = I've not even started yet little one... But when I do, I'll let you know what I think ^__^
    "This is my escape. I'm running through this world and I'm not looking back.
    'Cause I know I can go. Where no-one's ever gone and I'm not looking back.
    But how will I know when I get there? And how will I know when to leave?
    We've all gotta start from somewhere. It's like that for me!
    The possibilities are, never-ending!
    I see it! I see it! And now it's all within my reach! (Endless Possibilities!)
    I see it! I see it now! It's always been inside of me! (And now I feel so free!)
    Endless Possibilities."

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    Working Title: Transformations

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    I enjoy the good use of first person as well as the creativity used in chapter 1. I found that the story was both interesting and allowed myself to be absorbed into the story. Obviously I was confused by how old he was but still I liked the descriptions as well as the inner dialogue. Additionally I saw you spelled plate incorrectly, but that's not important. Overall, I'd say 9/10, it was a nice introduction, and I found myself absorbed into the story. The only thing I was confused about was the age and then the tantrum kind of put me off, but that's just me. It's like watching the goonies, it's a great movie, but the screaming pisses you off.

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    Calling it a spelling error if you like.

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