Switch your total to six. :P
Looks good, Embested. There's just a few minor things.
First, all spirits, except a Knight's, are immaterial. If you want him to try and attack people nonetheless that's totally cool, just remember that it won't have any effect :P
The other things are actually to your advantage. You have 1 more stat point to spend as Rilla mentioned. Please throw it in something so we don't have to backtrack later.
Also you're entitled to 3 skill points. If you're not sure which skill you want to buy yet (list is in the OP) or want to save up so you can buy an expensive skill later, that's cool too. Just put 3 behind 'skill points'.
Last edited by Kestrel; 11-17-2011 at 04:35 PM.
ze vroeg ben je bang
maar hij was niet bang
alleen voor medelijden dan
voor medelijden wel
dan was ie liever dood
ze heeft hem zacht gekust
en toen heeft ze hem vermoord
met oogcontact van het eenzaamste soort
Switch your total to six. :P
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The Finely Endowed Lord Rilla Pythonicus, Archduke of the Black Coast and Lord of the Serpent Port."Your arms are too short to box with God"
Cool man, accepted on my part. If Rilla gives the green light too, you're in =)
(total is now 6 BTW)
ze vroeg ben je bang
maar hij was niet bang
alleen voor medelijden dan
voor medelijden wel
dan was ie liever dood
ze heeft hem zacht gekust
en toen heeft ze hem vermoord
met oogcontact van het eenzaamste soort
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[/COLOR]Name: Sean Barry Merister
Appearance: Tall and unkempt, his most striking features are the ugly burn welts down the left side of his face that he got in a fight and his Dali-esque moustache. His hair is black, and his one good eye is hazel. He normally wears gear similar to that of your typical stage magician, for some reason. He wields a baton, mostly for show.
Bio: Sean has been a mercenary ever since his recruitment into the Hub. Previously, he worked as a stage magician, and continues to wear his outfit. He once went on a mission to capture a rogue Bishop, and ended up with a burnt face for his troubles. A lack of respect for deadlines and some on-the-job laziness has stopped him getting promoted. Whilst he is a rather skilled Knight, and his ability at co-ordinating Steve in battle is exceptional, he is something of a slacker, and also has a tendency to be somewhat rude and snarky to those he does not respect.
Branch: None
Holder: Knight
Spirit: His Spirit is called Steve, and is similar to a very large and long ragworm, if one were to wear heavy bladed metal armour. The protruding blades can fold back against the body, and are normally like this. When he is surprised, shocked or scared, they reflexively spring up, normally terrifying his riders. Steve is a surprisingly intelligent and friendly creature for his rather frightening appearance, even enjoying having his underside stroked. He is also somewhat nervy and is quite easily surprised, shocked or scared. He is a pleasing shade of beige.
Weapons/Spells:
- Tunnel: Steve burrows underground, and rises up somewhere else in a burst of dirt.
- Constrict: Steve wraps the opponent in a loving embrace, stopping human sized ones from moving and slowing bigger ones
- Scissorface: Steve lunges at the enemy attempting to wound them with his large jaws
Skills: Skill points: (0): Stomp (level 1)
Stats:No code has to be inserted here.
Is this along the lines of a Knight?
Last edited by SIngemeister; 11-17-2011 at 01:50 PM.
Everything looks good, Rilla added you to the list (Embested too)
Also I like Steve. I like Steve a lot.
ze vroeg ben je bang
maar hij was niet bang
alleen voor medelijden dan
voor medelijden wel
dan was ie liever dood
ze heeft hem zacht gekust
en toen heeft ze hem vermoord
met oogcontact van het eenzaamste soort
Hang on, just editing some things about the lovable worm.
Wait... So the only bishop spells one can have are the ones listed? :/
Bishops can only have three spells
And they can get whatever Skills they want.
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The Finely Endowed Lord Rilla Pythonicus, Archduke of the Black Coast and Lord of the Serpent Port."Your arms are too short to box with God"
Well well... there I am!
Name: Salia Kyrie
Appearance: She is 19 years old. Stands at 166cm tall, weighs 56kg, and has a slim build. She's fragile-looking but healthy. She has some curves without being exuberant. She has very light brown wavy hair, down her mid back, and turquoise-colored eyes. Tends to wear fancy clothes. Her voice is high-pitched, without being squeaky. It is beautiful and rather smooth.
Bio: Born in a family with a fair amount of money, although far from being rich, Salia has lived a comfortable life. She was usually able to obtain what she wanted, but still learned that nothing in life comes without effort. She therefore has a certain personality conflict, tending to be spoiled sometimes, but still acknowledging the efforts of those who fight for what they want, as well as her own efforts. She is the oldest of two siblings, her sister being only 16, and lived with her parents until her mother passed away due to an illness when she was 17. At that point, Salia, her sister and her father moved with other members of the family and they lived there from that moment onwards. A year after that, Salia's father, never having overcome the disappearance of his wife, succumbed to an illness as well, and at that point, Salia decided to change her life and find a good job that would help her live on her own. It was during that time that she first communicated with her Spirit, which gave her comfort in those dark times by sharing his moral code with her. Seeing she was a holder of a Spirit that shared her view of her world was a reason to rejoice. However, upon being seen talking on her own on the street, she was abducted by the Library, which afterwards forced her to join their ranks. Seeing that as the only viable option, Salia decided to join them instead of resisting and suffering a fate worse than death. After joining the Library, her intelligence was recognised and she was assigned to the branch of the same name, as well as the Mercenary section.
Branch: Mercenary - Intelligence
Holder: Rook (was born as a holder).
Spirit: Arthur Pendragon. The righteous noble king of knights from another world. Has a strict moral code and believes in loyalty and leading a virtuous life. Respects any opponent's skills, and accepts his position as Salia's spirit as a knight's duty that he has to fulfill.
Weapons:Stats:
- EXCALIBUR:King Arthur Pendragon's legendary sword, the Excalibur shines with light, blinding the darkest creatures in the land. It is the fabled sword that took the King of Britain to the victory in countless occasions, thanks to its sharpness, light weight and material quality. Only Salia can use it.
- NIMUE'S SCABBARD:This scabbard was given to Arthur by Nimue, The Lady of the Lake. The Scabbard, accompanying Excalibur, is said to have powers of its own. Originally, it would prevent the user from losing blood when wound. Now it can return some spells due to its prevalent magic.
- RHONGOMYNIAD:The spear Arthur used multiple times. It was bathed in poison so many times that its blade can posion the enemy.
Name Class POW SPI AGI Total Skill List Salia Rook 4 4 6 14 0/11 BINOCULAR-1, HEATVISION-1, TELEPATHY-1
Last edited by Hedya; 10-24-2012 at 07:35 AM.
Hola chica, edits to it are looking good to me. After Rilla places his stamp of approval too, it'll be added to the CS list.
ze vroeg ben je bang
maar hij was niet bang
alleen voor medelijden dan
voor medelijden wel
dan was ie liever dood
ze heeft hem zacht gekust
en toen heeft ze hem vermoord
met oogcontact van het eenzaamste soort