Mm, I wanted more of a sense of motion with the 54s transition, since they're both riding and stuff. The talking part was just me trying out some lip-syncing.
Does it fit the Nouta mood?
The Sket in the beginning seems off for some reason. At 0:54 would probably be better if you used a different piece, the transition between those seem too off and the mood wobbly. At 1:00 the Nichijou scene was very well done. 1:04 seems too stretched, the part where she just talks.
Other than that, everything seems to be in order and well done.
Mm, I wanted more of a sense of motion with the 54s transition, since they're both riding and stuff. The talking part was just me trying out some lip-syncing.
Does it fit the Nouta mood?
Her chest opens
A fleeting glimpse of a gloomy crevice
Blossoming ribs in place of the heart she lost
There's death's devouring nothingness
An empty shell made to live
An empty chest, without a heart.
It's hard to be serene when you want energy...XD
Her chest opens
A fleeting glimpse of a gloomy crevice
Blossoming ribs in place of the heart she lost
There's death's devouring nothingness
An empty shell made to live
An empty chest, without a heart.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ls1vSn2v3C8
Here you go, Ale. Redid some scenes, used some more effects, went Timing LVL: Asian on the last part.
Her chest opens
A fleeting glimpse of a gloomy crevice
Blossoming ribs in place of the heart she lost
There's death's devouring nothingness
An empty shell made to live
An empty chest, without a heart.
Hmmm, turned out pretty well. I think if the music got a 20% sound boost it would be epic. For whatever reason, when the music is louder, it seems more fitting to the background.
Thanks for the siggy Harby san. You definitely know my tastes.
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Thanks for the siggy Harby san. You definitely know my tastes.
★A blog, gallery, hangout, wall, forum-game-containing, advice-giving, multipurpose thread★
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