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    The Sket in the beginning seems off for some reason. At 0:54 would probably be better if you used a different piece, the transition between those seem too off and the mood wobbly. At 1:00 the Nichijou scene was very well done. 1:04 seems too stretched, the part where she just talks.

    Other than that, everything seems to be in order and well done.

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    Mm, I wanted more of a sense of motion with the 54s transition, since they're both riding and stuff. The talking part was just me trying out some lip-syncing.

    Does it fit the Nouta mood?

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    Hm...somewhat.

    Lacks some energy I'd guess.

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    It's hard to be serene when you want energy...XD

    Her chest opens
    A fleeting glimpse of a gloomy crevice
    Blossoming ribs in place of the heart she lost
    There's death's devouring nothingness
    An empty shell made to live
    An empty chest, without a heart.




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    YEAH! I know.

    Nouta's bipolar in all honesty. The lip sync ended up being odd so I guess if you could change it.

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    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ls1vSn2v3C8

    Here you go, Ale. Redid some scenes, used some more effects, went Timing LVL: Asian on the last part.

    Her chest opens
    A fleeting glimpse of a gloomy crevice
    Blossoming ribs in place of the heart she lost
    There's death's devouring nothingness
    An empty shell made to live
    An empty chest, without a heart.




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    Well played. This is all I ask for. I'll be back when Nouta hits another checkpoint.

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    Hmmm, turned out pretty well. I think if the music got a 20% sound boost it would be epic. For whatever reason, when the music is louder, it seems more fitting to the background.

    Thanks for the siggy Harby san. You definitely know my tastes.
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    Quote Originally Posted by LunaLight View Post
    Hmmm, turned out pretty well. I think if the music got a 20% sound boost it would be epic. For whatever reason, when the music is louder, it seems more fitting to the background.
    ... You know there is this little knob on your speakers, that when turned, raises the volume. Were you aware of this?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Zata View Post
    ... You know there is this little knob on your speakers, that when turned, raises the volume. Were you aware of this?
    My labtop is quiet. It is on full volume in both the video and my speakers. Leave me alone. But is nice to see ya Zata sama.

    Thanks for the siggy Harby san. You definitely know my tastes.
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