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Thread: Alma inspired (Creepiness + Dolls)

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    Sobbing over Pizza Mairzy Doats's Avatar
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    Yeah it makes sense for the doll not to act right away, especially in broad daylight and especially in a public place. Sometime when Jay is alone, like when his parents leave the house or something. True horror movie style. Maybe Damien can tell Jay his feelings about the store on the way back home.

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    That post was so cool. Of course I'm just feeling around here but I love Greeneyes bit and how he feels thinks about the malevolent force and how he can't even think for himself, hehehe. This will be fun to work with.

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    yeah I figured the best way to do it would be him being alone with the voice so long he can't even tell what's the voice and what's him. I also originally had him referring to himself as 'it' during the writing from his perspective, but then I thought it'd work better and make him seem more divorced from humanity if he did it for everybody else

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    haha likewise, I love the false memory thing you did there

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    Hey man, sorry about the delay.

    It's graduation week where I work and it seems every day has some new hurdle.

    Should slow down soon.

    ~Mairzy

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    that's fine dude, just get back when you can

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