Reply With QuoteSix comes across a lot better if you use different voices for each animal. But yeah, the rhymes are a little fucked.
My reviews.
1: I am sorry. It didn't interest me particularly much. The poem had me lost towards the end, and I didn't exactly know what about the image I was to be impressed by. Sorry.
6: I apologize. This didn't cut it for me. The idea was fine, but no. I believe it failed for me the moment my head could not make "you" and "use" rhyme. After that, my head just hurt. Sorry about that.
Edit: No, wait. It failed the moment I read the word "morn". That isn't a word. It is something forced there to rhyme with born. But that isn't a pretty sight to my eyes. What are you trying to teach these children? Slang? I know a few parents that wouldn't appreciate that.
2: Well, it was an interesting little tale. But in my head the conversation got rather awkward, I didn't exactly understand why, either. But it indeed was an interesting concept. The ending came so fast compared to what it felt it would.
5: I like this painting. It seems really well done. It has created a certain sense around it that... well, I like. But I must apologize. Compared to the rest, it currently feels incomplete due to lack of text. I am sorry.
3: I liked this one a lot, actually. The description was made to be a description, and I really felt the depth of the endlessness described, and the things that just weren't. I probably would not have understood if I hadn't seen the image overhead, but... Heh. Then it all turned back to that man. It reflected well on the difference between two times, I believe. But, no, no vote for you because...
4: Gosh. That poem was beautiful. And... was that doll made FOR this competition!? Congratulations, you convinced me. The poem really caught me and tagged me along in a way no poem has done before, and I really liked the pattern. Actually, I don't care what that doll was created for. It fitted beautifully in an awesome image anyway. If you created it for this, then you are sixteen times as awesome. But you'd still get my vote regardless. It is awesome. Really.
Last edited by PlatinumSkink; 04-27-2012 at 03:43 PM.
Six comes across a lot better if you use different voices for each animal. But yeah, the rhymes are a little fucked.
I guess I gotta vote for six.
The storybook idea was clever and cute, and, while maybe not ALL your rhymes were perfect, there were quite a few rhymes needed, and I can only imagine how hard it would've been to come up with all those. So, props for trying.
This poll will close on 05-09-2012 at 06:35 PM
Probably that same day or the day after at the latest.
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Fixed.Originally Posted by mdk
Comments are allowed, but let us try and avoid swearing directly at the submissions.
This is the point where I poke at those who have voted and not commented.
AM Oneechan, Neko, Tatoba, wXw & xDyScOrDiAx
At the very least, answer this question for me: Why did y'all vote for the one y'all voted for?
Forgot to add a comment here...(apparently its requested and Kaga will chew my head if i keep forgetting this ><'' so... Sorry)
Anyway to answer that question. I voted for that one because i liked the idea itself...don't wanna keep repeating what has been said already about the "reminds me of a child's storytelling sketch book" thingy but yea... that was the main reason...it's colorful, the idea is simple and smart and the drawings look cute so...
To put it simple i voted because i liked it ^^''
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