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    The Harlequin [Int. Check]

    Run.

    Once again, your shouting for help has done nothing. You have to keep running. Keep running or He’ll find you. And when he does... No. You can’t think about that. And yet your legs are tiring, your lungs struggling to bring in necessary oxygen. And as you grow more and more exhausted, His following footsteps ring out clearer and clearer. He draws closer.

    You can’t run any further. Gasping for air, you slide down a rough-hewn wall. It tears strips of skin off your bare back, but all goes numb as He turns the corner. With a religious fervour, you begin to look for something, anything to focus on before the end. Some small scrap of beauty in this concrete jungle, something to remember as you cease to exist. Yet all you can see is bleak monotony of concrete and the glint of moonlight off something metal as He reaches you. It begins to rain, but the rain is salt, choking you and filling your eyes. The last thing you hear is a singing blade, scything towards you.

    Silence.



    “In further news, yet another victim of the Harlequin was found in the early hours of the morning. The body bore the tell-tale signs of the serial killer: not only was the head of the victim severed and removed from the scene, it had been replaced with a wooden facsimile, that of a Russian doll. Fingerprint scanning has been unable to determine the identity of the body – as of yet, this latest victim of the Harlequin remains unidentified. Police warn all citizens to stay indoors during night hours – this has been the fifth murder this month alone.

    A monster is loose in Cardinal City.”


    The Harlequin

    The year is 2020. For the last four months, a serial killer dubbed ‘The Harlequin’ has plagued the streets of your hometown, Cardinal City. People are scared – despite technological breakthroughs advancing personal safety to the point that murder is a thing of the past, people are dying. Citizens have stopped going out at night, fearing for their safety. Knowing that their regular ‘Safety Equipment’ will not fulfil its role. The mayor has stepped down under an avalanche of abuse, as has the chief of police. The people are baying for The Harlequin’s blood, and as he proves impossible to catch, they turn their rage towards others. Cardinal City is a wasp’s nest: each murder a stone thrown, aggravating the inhabitants within. And eventually, they will not be able to contain this rage any more.

    You are an inhabitant of this city. Whether you’ve recently moved, or lived here all your life – it doesn’t matter. All that matters is you’ve lived here for at least the last half year, therefore having been witness to the whole of the Harlequin’s existence. Initially, the characters will simply meet under certain... specific conditions, and begin to face down the beast casting a shadow over their streets. However, there is more behind the murders than a simple serial killer. Behind the veil of blood, a sinister plot is at work – but will you be able to overcome it?

    Of course, this little tidbit will be greatly expanded upon if some interest is generated. Info about what's happened in the eight years since 2012, about the city itself, etc.

    I’m struggling to come up with a specific genre for this. It’s got aspects of a murder mystery (unsurprisingly), but that’s hardly the main aspect of it. It’s in a futuristic world, so I guess that makes it sci-fi. And oh boy, will there be action galore. Take what you will from what’s been written above, and label it as you please, because I’ve truly got no idea. All I know is that I’ve got the great bones of a story laid out, and it will be greatly influenced by the characters involved. I think it will be great fun :D

    So, any takers?

    Character Sheet:

    I cannot stress enough how important it is to take your time with these. I'm not a huge fan of the first-come-first-served basis. The better your CS, the higher your chances of being accepted - regardless of whether you were the first to post or not. However, longer doesn't necessarily mean better. Quality over quantity, people. If you can write long pieces of prose at a consistently high quality, that's fantastic. Go ahead and do so. However, if your quality of writing tends to slip as your piece goes on, I'd prefer it to be of higher quality and not-quite-so-long. So bear this in mind as you write.

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    Hey Krimpety, I'm a big fan of your writing.

    Definitely interested.

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    This sounds like it could be amazing fun. Color me interested!

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    Fantastic, you two. I'm thinking I'll probably end up with a maximum of seven people + me, so I'll wait for a few more people before beginning to type up the OOC. In the meantime, I could probably make some sort of CS template now, if you want to get a head start.

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    Head starts are good.

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    Edited the CS into the OP. And prettied it up a little too :3 Not really though. I'll make it all photogenic for the OOC.

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    I would like to join this, I'll work on a CS when I get home tonight.
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    This looks quite interesting. I'm down.

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    Hope this is okay?
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    All is going according to plan...
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    Really Hym? I didn't know they have doctorates in being awesome. (Double finger gun)
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    Basic Information

    Name: Benjamin Brooks

    Age: 23

    Gender: Male

    Profession: College student/Store clerk at local movie rental

    How long have you been a resident of Cardinal City: Three years


    Physical Aspects

    Appearance: Tall, dark, and handsome. Standing at roughly 6’2”, with a head of curly jet black hair and approximately 175lbs, Benjamin is quite the looker. His caveman side sometimes takes ahold of his facial hair when he is assigned with a big project and doesn’t exactly find the means to shave, nor get a haircut which can result in shoulder length. His curly hair frames a pale gaunt structure that exhibits dark brown eyes that are almost as equally dark as his brows. In the past he has been told that his thin pale lips serve well for kissing, and even though he is a computer geek his physique could be passed off as a high school jock. His wardrobe carries various sweaters, jackets, or hoodies. Hot or cold, Ben always prefers the comfort of something thick and protective. While liking to keep things casual, he often wears very nice shoes and jeans.




    Equipment: A heavy duty backpack is the means to most of his burdens. Mainly it consists of his laptop for college, notebooks full of notes, college books, and various writing utensils. In his slacks or jean pockets he always has his cell phone and headphones along with his wallet and keys.

    Skills/Hindrances: While his physical attributes look lean and strong, Ben hasn’t had to pick up anything other than his backpack for years; as a result Benjamin is lacking in strength. While not strong, he is quick, never even picking up anything that produces smoke, Ben’s lungs are reliable, and he was on the track team all throughout high school so he has a decent endurance even though it hasn’t been exercised since aforementioned high school. Having absolutely no battle training, and unexercised muscles, Ben will find himself trying to think himself out of situations or run away. Benjamin is also extremely scared of heights and clowns.



    Psychology



    Personality: Benjamin aims to find fun in anything he does – if not he’ll simply get bored and not do it. He prefers to be a joker when he can think up witty things and has the gut to say them, but sometimes his jokes set him up in bad positions. He would never blatantly insult or bully anyone however; as Benjamin has had too good of an upbringing for that, and knows what it is like to be picked on. Being a logical thinker, Ben often finds it hard to do things out of the kindness of his heart if it doesn’t benefit him in some way. He blames it on being lazy, but sometimes he will not help another out just so he can get ahead of the game. No one knows many aspects of his personality; for he is quite shy and on the exterior he likes to keep up the nice guy persona. This could be far from the truth however; because there is a sadistic side to him. Benjamin also cherishes his isolation, and hates having a roommate even though he plays friendly with them.

    History: To sum up Benjamin Brooks’ history, you would say average. He lived in an average home, with an average neighborhood, along with an average upbringing. His parents provided him with the necessary means along with the occasional spoil. Ben did decent in school, and had an average amount of friends. Being the only kid of Randy Brooks and Helen Brooks, they were proud of anything he accomplished. Yup, Benjamin Brooks was just an average kid in an average life.

    That was until his junior year of high school came. Being on the track team, everyone thought that was what the kid had a knack for. In truth everyone just said that because they believed the guy was too average. And if he wasn't too average in something, he was too lazy to show anyone. This was far from the case however; it was simply the matter of his parents not paying attention to him when he showed his true potential. Ben has played around with computers all his life, and excelled in them greatly. Having a history buff father that teaches middle school kids, and a mother who runs a cleaning business, they have absolutely no knowledge in technology aside from cell phones, so when they saw their child clicking away at various things and weird screens popping on the computer, they just thought it was normal. It wasn’t until Ben received an A+ in a computer course that his father asked Ben’s teacher just how good he was. His teacher replied with, “I can’t believe the kid has been studying this material for years, usually this is an advanced course for kids in high school.” So his father investigated this, Ben has always been known to get C’s or possible B’s, but an A+ he was skeptical of, and he knew that Ben wouldn’t take the time of day to do a course online before he was forced to take it in high school.

    So his father approached Ben with the question, “you wanna tell me how you got this A+ in computers?” He asked.

    “Well it was really easy, I had a lot of kids call me a genius in that class, but I didn’t see the big deal… I just enjoyed it so I got the things done… Plus a little extra.” Randy gave his son a firm pat on the shoulder, smiling radiantly. He was proud of his son, he always knew of him to be the leisure type, the one who only does what they are forced to do. After patting his son and congratulating him he turned around to walk out the doorway. Benjamin stopped him. “Oh yeah dad, check this out.” He flashed a white piece of paper with a printed number 175 on it.

    “What’s this?” His father asked questioningly.

    “Well… the kids called me a genius, so I wanted to check and see if they were right.” Benjamin said kind of bored and slightly shy.

    “And..?”

    “They were right.” It clicked. His father turned abruptly and rushed out of the door. His son was a genius. After quickly telling his wife, he called as many numbers as he could to get it verified. All of this time he had only received aforementioned grades because they didn’t pique his interest, and after taking multiple other test, Benjamin got a full ride to a prestige college at Cardinal City.

    When he got to Cardinal City and settled down, Ben was forced to stay in a dorm with a lousy roommate. He is currently working at Movies Movies to try and get his own place, but has found it hard to apply himself to something as simple as grab a movie off the shelf and take three bucks from the customer. There is also the underlying issue of a killer on the loose. Ben hasn’t paid much attention to it, but is vaguely interested in how the Harlequin works. The logical thinker inside him has half a mind to figure out this guy’s game plan, but he hasn’t quite had the motivation to do so as of yet. Nonetheless, he makes sure the store is locked tight when he is running a late night shift at the rental.

    All went well for Benjamin after that day. He applied himself deeply into his computer classes, and did the bare minimum for any other courses. Professors eventually caught on to this, but some still frowned upon him. Ben is still greatly enjoying writing out thousands of lines of code on his laptop, but recently he has found yet another calling: hacking. He dug deeper into this than he should, but the amount he has to apply himself, and the thrill behind it keeps him extremely interested. Benjamin has never actually committed a noticeable crime with his skills, but he is certain he could be making bank.

    Strengths/Weaknesses: Benjamin is very intelligent – genius level. His mental thought process is beyond others, and his creative capabilities are top notch. His work ethic and grades wouldn’t demonstrate this however; as Ben can be a heavy slacker. All of his life he has been in front of the computer. He has taken various computer classes since his junior year in high school, and can code various software programs on a professional level. Benjamin can also be semi-manipulative if he bothers to do so; in response he isn’t bad at making friends, but can also be quick to lose them.

    Other:He loves any kind of noodle dish or pizza, his roommate is a 24 year old male named Dave.

    Last edited by Tyler; 04-29-2012 at 09:08 AM.

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