Reply With QuoteI edited it. Is it better?
You're gonna have to do better than that, sorry :/
I edited it. Is it better?
Much better. Just keep in mind that I expect that kind of writing throughout the RP.
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Oh, and you have to make an other character too.
Okay, I'll make it now.
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Name: Saphinite Wolferian
Age: 20
Gender: Female
Species: Other
Zodiac animal: dog
Favorite color: the light blue, almost grey, color of the sea.
Counterpart: Open
Personality: Saphinite is always upbeat and bubbly, always. No matter how serious the situation she can always be seen with a large smile on her face because for some odd reason she is always able to remain optimistic on able to see the bright side of things. She is incredibly smart though, but is careful not to throw it in anyone’s faces because she cares about others as if they were family. This has led to her trusting the wrong types of people. She’s also incredibly good with her hands, able to create and engineer almost anything out of very few materials, but refuses to use fire because she developed a large fear for it.
Other: immortality
Appearance: Her skin is a vibrant sapphire that is made up of a thick fur pelt that reflects the sunlight. Her hair is a fluorescent, electric blue that is flows down to her shoulder blades, but is the same type of fur as her pelt. Her eyes are a shocking violet that intrigues those who see her and makes her stand out from the crowd, but it has led to some discrimination against her. Saphinite has long canine teeth that stick out from her lips where her mouth is closed, but they don’t cause her any pain. Her nails are short and hard claws that she keeps sharp simply because she enjoys a clean look. She is very tall, 6’ 0”, that she feels like she is always sticking out when she would prefer to blend into the background.
History: She has no family and she can’t remember what happened to them, she just woke up one day when she was 15 with no memory of her past. Saphinite continuously searches for her family and triggers to get her memory back.
Last edited by frozen rose; 05-02-2012 at 05:47 PM.
Sorry, but I promised Asu he could have the dragon. :/
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I prolly ought to update the list. That one was my bad.
Question!
Immortality?
That is all.
You know...You can get sawed in half but you won't die.
Actually, when I think about it, it's kind of a suckish power. Feel free to throw some add-ons in there if you want. Just run them by me first.
Okay, I made her a dog instead.
.................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ......................................The fuck man?Originally Posted by frozen rose
...............*cries to self*.......I wanted Dog.
Accepted.
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