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Thread: WOTM #13 Vote (Casual)

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    WOTM #13 Vote (Casual)



    Theme: Inside the Mind

    • Explained: Write a story about someone who is travelling within their own mind, or the mind of someone else.


    Components:

    • The protagonist uses computers to access his/her own mind.
    • The story doesn't involve dreams, or nightmares.
    • The protagonist is physically disabled (blind, paraplegic, missing one or more limbs, etc.).
    • The protagonist is not alone as they travel.
    • The antagonist is an abstract thought or idea, not something physical.



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    Theme & Components Provided By:
    Brovo, Dudel, & Contra Fates


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    Tau Commander Brovo's Avatar
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    Good luck to everyone who participated!

    ...It's days like these that make me wish I could deliver constructive criticism to such good work, argh, damn impartiality clauses.



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    Desour is my Queen wXw's Avatar
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    In order to write a decent review I will try to figure out how and why, but as far as I know now, entry two kept me reading out of this sheer curiosity that I had to know its end. I confess I was disappointed by its conclusion, nonetheless, it glued me to the screen. Well done!

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    We look forward to your further comments, wXw.

    We also look forward to hearing from Glitchybugger & kizubu.
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    100 Man Slayer kizubu's Avatar
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    Well I chose number 3 simply because I thought it was beautifully crafted and written. Great concept shown well, be surprised if that one doesn't win.
    Confidence In Ones Self...
    "Don't believe it's not possible because it is hard, but know that if it is humanly possibly then it can be achieved." - Marcus Aurelius.

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    I'd say that number three was the best out of those. To me, it fit the requirement the best, was the most beautifully written, and the most interesting.

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    Overly Active Imagination Dudel's Avatar
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    Oh wow, everyone who's voted has commented. o.O Makes me proud to see!

    I really like the simplicity to #1. That, to me, is a very good thing. It's a lot more difficult to pack something like that into a small bit of words than it is to stretch it out. It's to the point, and conveys a message, but doesn't stay long enough to be annoying. Got that right amount of balance, this does.
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    I don't have much experience critiquing things, but, I shall attempt it! (Later today.)


    WOTM #25 Voting Threads are up! Come vote for your favorites in the Casual and Advanced Voting Threads!!

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    Overly Active Imagination Dudel's Avatar
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    Quote Originally Posted by Kagamine View Post
    I don't have much experience critiquing things, but, I shall attempt it! (Later today.)
    Don't have to "critique." Just state your opinions. If you liked something, or didn't like it. Why? Why not? Etc.
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