You should totally get an imageshack account and post a picture of that, my man!
Also, for him not talking to anyone, that must get really awkward when you're forced to talk to those two guards to enter Riften. Unless you just kill them and make everyone in town angry faced at you. I've been trying to role play this version of Zaveed pretty close to life, too. Marassa's also doing things pretty close to life, following the coast, catching shelter where she can, and eating any animal that tries to do the same to her. Like a boss. Also, two axes and light armour actually make it really easy to dodge most blows and inflict a horrible amount of bleeding damage on people. Zaveed's a multitasking beast.
Loopy was the man. Quite possibly the best fleshed out character in the entire RP. Fo shu. I need to dig up that post...
But this scene does lead to something else, so it may get horribly interesting. Also, as a fun fact, it's possible somebody might catch an infection if they mess up this encounter. ISN'T THAT AWESOME?