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Thread: The Elder Scrolls: Voice of the Sky (OOC)

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    Krogan Hasashin Dervish's Avatar
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    Better, just a bit more stuff in the back story would be good. For instance, why would he have followed the man? What incentive did he have? Remember, the more stuff I have to work with, the more things can pop up in the RP that involve your character, and thus, subplots when appropriate.

    Also, do a quick read over and a spelling and grammar check. It gets distracting.

    To clarify, the RP starts off in Skyrim, or more accurately, in the mountains between Riften and Wildhelm. Your characters don't know that yet.

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    Allright but I cant at the moment. I will do so later.

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    Dervs: Are all of our wordly possessions kept in some variety of evidence chest, or are they still on our persons?
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    Quote Originally Posted by vTempest View Post
    Allright but I cant at the moment. I will do so later.
    Are you sure you've played Skyrim?



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    Oh wait, read the opening post again. Word. Nevermind.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Chanda View Post
    Dervs: Are all of our wordly possessions kept in some variety of evidence chest, or are they still on our persons?
    Right now, you're stuck in a cell in some odd, scratchy robe covered in odd runes. Your inventory is in the room specified down the hall haphazardly left wherever in various piles or chests. El douchenozzle was planning on selling it or re-purposing it, since you weren't exactly meant to get out of there alive.

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    Oh, and if I spell any words wrong, it's because I want to accentuate the s sound, as is common for Argonians (I think). Necessary --> Nessesssary. Semblance --> Sssssemblansse
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    Quote Originally Posted by teddybarehead View Post
    Are you sure you've played Skyrim?
    Yes, and I still own it. As I have been saying I thought it was set in Skyrim. Originally Akari was born in Solitude before moving to Winterhold. They were attacked close enough to Winterhold for Akari to run to it. I changed it so that Solitude became Imperial City and Winterhold became Chejdenhal. I simply forgot to change one of the Winterholds I wrote into a Chejdenhal.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Chanda View Post
    Oh, and if I spell any words wrong, it's because I want to accentuate the s sound, as is common for Argonians (I think). Necessary --> Nessesssary. Semblance --> Sssssemblansse
    Ten pointssss to Syliiitherliiiiiinnnnn

    Oh, heads up: Zaveed's sitting at a table, not standing. And he's currently not holding weapons. Unless food and a book can be considered a weapon. It is in some cultures. Hmm.

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    YESSSS! Woo-hoo! Now we're talkin'.

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