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Orbs Of Babylon
So yeah, I have had this idea for an anime in my head for about - eh, I'm not sure - a couple of months. I though it could be a good RP. I will run through the prologue now.
Prologue
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Lord, that was longer than I thought.
Orb & Crystal Info
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The 5 characters I am looking is a main character looking like Taiki from Digimo Xros Wars: The Young Hunters who Leapt through time (Why do Japanese shows always have really long titles?) and 4 others, one a blue and white character who is a insensitive loner, another strong yet slightly dumb character, a joker, and a girl. Yep, I went there. But those are not vital, I discussed this with a person called PoisonMaster988 on the Xbox360, so SPAM HIM! Nah, just kidding, also Skylinx looks a bit like this
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But with a black aura and glowing eyes, also hovering, speaking mentally. Vaven is the name of a creature, who's first stage is like this
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I made that, BTW.
I'm in the process of spriting the creatures evolutions and forms, so please help and feedback would be appreciated!
Last edited by Jamescax; 06-04-2012 at 01:46 AM.
Frodo: I can’t do this, Sam.
Sam: I know. It’s all wrong. By rights we shouldn’t even be here. But we are. It’s like in the great stories, Mr. Frodo. The ones that really mattered. Full of darkness and danger, they were. And sometimes you didn’t want to know the end. Because how could the end be happy? How could the world go back to the way it was when so much bad had happened? But in the end, it’s only a passing thing, this shadow. Even darkness must pass. A new day will come. And when the sun shines it will shine out the clearer. Those were the stories that stayed with you. That meant something, even if you were too small to understand why. But I think, Mr. Frodo, I do understand. I know now. Folk in those stories had lots of chances of turning back, only they didn’t. They kept going. Because they were holding on to something.
Frodo: What are we holding onto, Sam?
Sam: That there’s some good in this world, Mr. Frodo… and it’s worth fighting for.
Optimus Prime: One shall stand, one shall fall.
Megatron: Why throw away your life so recklessly?!
Optimus: That's a question you should ask yourself, Megatron.
Sometimes, I think I can make a change on this planet, but then I just look up something to do with Lord of the Rings and forget about it.
No feedback, seriously?
Frodo: I can’t do this, Sam.
Sam: I know. It’s all wrong. By rights we shouldn’t even be here. But we are. It’s like in the great stories, Mr. Frodo. The ones that really mattered. Full of darkness and danger, they were. And sometimes you didn’t want to know the end. Because how could the end be happy? How could the world go back to the way it was when so much bad had happened? But in the end, it’s only a passing thing, this shadow. Even darkness must pass. A new day will come. And when the sun shines it will shine out the clearer. Those were the stories that stayed with you. That meant something, even if you were too small to understand why. But I think, Mr. Frodo, I do understand. I know now. Folk in those stories had lots of chances of turning back, only they didn’t. They kept going. Because they were holding on to something.
Frodo: What are we holding onto, Sam?
Sam: That there’s some good in this world, Mr. Frodo… and it’s worth fighting for.
Optimus Prime: One shall stand, one shall fall.
Megatron: Why throw away your life so recklessly?!
Optimus: That's a question you should ask yourself, Megatron.
Sometimes, I think I can make a change on this planet, but then I just look up something to do with Lord of the Rings and forget about it.
SH! I'm still reading. >.>
So....If I was a necromancer before...Is this an improvement?
My challenge to myself from now on. I will accompany every IC post with a picture I draw, regardless of how bad it is. I may not be able to put one up if the potato I call my broadband acts up however.
xD OK, thanks for trying to read. I'm new at this, so tell me if I should include anything else.
Frodo: I can’t do this, Sam.
Sam: I know. It’s all wrong. By rights we shouldn’t even be here. But we are. It’s like in the great stories, Mr. Frodo. The ones that really mattered. Full of darkness and danger, they were. And sometimes you didn’t want to know the end. Because how could the end be happy? How could the world go back to the way it was when so much bad had happened? But in the end, it’s only a passing thing, this shadow. Even darkness must pass. A new day will come. And when the sun shines it will shine out the clearer. Those were the stories that stayed with you. That meant something, even if you were too small to understand why. But I think, Mr. Frodo, I do understand. I know now. Folk in those stories had lots of chances of turning back, only they didn’t. They kept going. Because they were holding on to something.
Frodo: What are we holding onto, Sam?
Sam: That there’s some good in this world, Mr. Frodo… and it’s worth fighting for.
Optimus Prime: One shall stand, one shall fall.
Megatron: Why throw away your life so recklessly?!
Optimus: That's a question you should ask yourself, Megatron.
Sometimes, I think I can make a change on this planet, but then I just look up something to do with Lord of the Rings and forget about it.
Ok, you got me. Dibs on the girl.
Also, moar flesh on the background please. What year is it, what sort of people are we expecting, what sort of technology can we expect and that sort of thing. And the creatures, finish it!
Oh and dibs on the blue orb. If there is one.
So....If I was a necromancer before...Is this an improvement?
My challenge to myself from now on. I will accompany every IC post with a picture I draw, regardless of how bad it is. I may not be able to put one up if the potato I call my broadband acts up however.
Thanks! I thought the girl would be the hardest to get. There is a Blue Orb with white secondary, beige and brown, red and black, green and - Hm... - purple? The girl's orb can be up to you. I will edit it now, but are you any good at Pokemon spriting? I will be able to make all the creatures if I have help.
Frodo: I can’t do this, Sam.
Sam: I know. It’s all wrong. By rights we shouldn’t even be here. But we are. It’s like in the great stories, Mr. Frodo. The ones that really mattered. Full of darkness and danger, they were. And sometimes you didn’t want to know the end. Because how could the end be happy? How could the world go back to the way it was when so much bad had happened? But in the end, it’s only a passing thing, this shadow. Even darkness must pass. A new day will come. And when the sun shines it will shine out the clearer. Those were the stories that stayed with you. That meant something, even if you were too small to understand why. But I think, Mr. Frodo, I do understand. I know now. Folk in those stories had lots of chances of turning back, only they didn’t. They kept going. Because they were holding on to something.
Frodo: What are we holding onto, Sam?
Sam: That there’s some good in this world, Mr. Frodo… and it’s worth fighting for.
Optimus Prime: One shall stand, one shall fall.
Megatron: Why throw away your life so recklessly?!
Optimus: That's a question you should ask yourself, Megatron.
Sometimes, I think I can make a change on this planet, but then I just look up something to do with Lord of the Rings and forget about it.
Sorry, I have no talent at all in sprites. >.<;
So....If I was a necromancer before...Is this an improvement?
My challenge to myself from now on. I will accompany every IC post with a picture I draw, regardless of how bad it is. I may not be able to put one up if the potato I call my broadband acts up however.
Well do u know anyone who could help me?
Frodo: I can’t do this, Sam.
Sam: I know. It’s all wrong. By rights we shouldn’t even be here. But we are. It’s like in the great stories, Mr. Frodo. The ones that really mattered. Full of darkness and danger, they were. And sometimes you didn’t want to know the end. Because how could the end be happy? How could the world go back to the way it was when so much bad had happened? But in the end, it’s only a passing thing, this shadow. Even darkness must pass. A new day will come. And when the sun shines it will shine out the clearer. Those were the stories that stayed with you. That meant something, even if you were too small to understand why. But I think, Mr. Frodo, I do understand. I know now. Folk in those stories had lots of chances of turning back, only they didn’t. They kept going. Because they were holding on to something.
Frodo: What are we holding onto, Sam?
Sam: That there’s some good in this world, Mr. Frodo… and it’s worth fighting for.
Optimus Prime: One shall stand, one shall fall.
Megatron: Why throw away your life so recklessly?!
Optimus: That's a question you should ask yourself, Megatron.
Sometimes, I think I can make a change on this planet, but then I just look up something to do with Lord of the Rings and forget about it.
Q.Q
No one.
So....If I was a necromancer before...Is this an improvement?
My challenge to myself from now on. I will accompany every IC post with a picture I draw, regardless of how bad it is. I may not be able to put one up if the potato I call my broadband acts up however.
Name:
Age:
Personality (Make sure to be pretty in depth with this one, you and your creature need to be able to link)
Appearence:
Orb:
Creature Personality:
Creature(I will make it for you, so leave this blank):
I think that's good enough. Right?
Frodo: I can’t do this, Sam.
Sam: I know. It’s all wrong. By rights we shouldn’t even be here. But we are. It’s like in the great stories, Mr. Frodo. The ones that really mattered. Full of darkness and danger, they were. And sometimes you didn’t want to know the end. Because how could the end be happy? How could the world go back to the way it was when so much bad had happened? But in the end, it’s only a passing thing, this shadow. Even darkness must pass. A new day will come. And when the sun shines it will shine out the clearer. Those were the stories that stayed with you. That meant something, even if you were too small to understand why. But I think, Mr. Frodo, I do understand. I know now. Folk in those stories had lots of chances of turning back, only they didn’t. They kept going. Because they were holding on to something.
Frodo: What are we holding onto, Sam?
Sam: That there’s some good in this world, Mr. Frodo… and it’s worth fighting for.
Optimus Prime: One shall stand, one shall fall.
Megatron: Why throw away your life so recklessly?!
Optimus: That's a question you should ask yourself, Megatron.
Sometimes, I think I can make a change on this planet, but then I just look up something to do with Lord of the Rings and forget about it.
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