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    Anthony Cowl

    The priest drew his cowl tighter around his throat. It had been a long night last night, and his head hurt though he was sure he had nothing to drink.

    "I'll give you twenty four hours to find me a murderer, and then I'll burn this village to the ground and let you all starve" such a great way to begin the day when you already had a mysterious hangover.

    So, the bastard had finally gone and topped it, well that was a dear shame, he supposed now he would be forced to give the man a proper burial, shame. His was a soul to deserve purgatory.

    With a harsh chuckle he remembered a fragment of last night, Marc should have just consented to the terms Toni had offered, Lord knew the cavorts the bastard had gone on, and as Zhago could attest, the priest had a way of delighting any he encountered, no matter their persuasion.

    With a sigh he rolled out of his bed and began to search for Alyss Cloud, duty demanded they perform the role of good men and women of the Lord, no matter the events of last night.

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    Leonard the Brooskby Tanner had not slept but he was wide awake. He was terribly hung-over but seemed to be more so focused on his work than ever. His hands were covered in warm, slippery blood almost to his elbows, but this was not unusual; Tanning leather was dirty work. A large, fresh, ewe hide was stretched over the thick wooden beam before him in his workshop, the tanner handling the blade expertly with his steadied left hand as it slid into the skin's inner workings, scraping off any excess fat and flesh. Usually when Leo worked he'd hum the Lord's prayers to himself, turning the words into song in his mind, but not today. Usually Leo wore plain black or blue robes; But not today. Today the tanner wore plain beige breeches and a grey vest over his flowing white shirt, and he worked in silence. The horn sounded and Leo almost jumped out of his own skin.

    Leo felt a thick layer of saliva build up on his tongue; Cotton-Mouth. Swallowing hard the man placed his knife on the workbench beside him and covered the sheep-skin with a large woolly blanket soaked in animal fat. He then made his way to the window, peering out shyly into the bright morning's sunlight. Townsfolk of all shapes and sizes were making their way past the tannery to the town centre, some still staggering off their intoxications from the night before. Most looked confused, but Leo sure as hell wasn't. Lord Robert had not rode his detail all the way into Brooskby to wish the commoners a good morning, that was for sure. Washing the blood from his hands in a nearby basin, Leo closed his eyes and inhaled deeply, the prayer he emitted with the exhale was seemingly instinctual.
    "In the name of the Father, and of the Son, and of the Holy Spirit. Amen."
    Leo's pale blues briefly washed over his own personal alter on the far back wall of the tannery's workshop, his hands touching the spots on his forehead and points of his shoulders respectfully as he spoke. He then reached out to grab his coat from it's hook and slung the garment loosely over his shoulders, hurriedly making his way outside to join the moving crowd as he did so. Some of the townsfolk were greeted by Leo with a soft smile and graceful inclination of the head but to most he stayed resigned. He was still a little embarrassed about his little 'bar fight' the previous night, among other things. The 'other things' were hastily pushed to the back of the tanner's mind.

    The town centre was filled with most of the village folk by now, all looking on curiously to the men on horses in the middle. Lord Robert was amongst them, his voice echoing out across the grounds, but Leo was too far back to decipher words within the sound. He had a fairly good idea what they might have been, though. Unlike a lot of the other hung-over men and women in the town, Leo's memory from the night before was practically photographic. He knew that he needed to hear what was going, so he began to gently push his way through the crowds, edging closer and closer to the front, the Lord's voice slowly rising into recognisable words.
    "...in twenty-four hours time or I will burn this village to the ground and let you all starve.
    Leo had made it to the third row from the front, standing to his fullest height to peer over the heads of those standing in his way. He was not surprised to see the body of Marc Bessom lying before him. He was, however, highly surprised to see that the Lord's Bastard had been mostly eaten away by pigs; The wounds and bite-markings on the boy's body unmistakable. But who'd fed Marc to the pigs? Who'd carried the body those three-and-a-half miles from the place Leo had last seen it to the Baker's farm, in the middle of festival night, no less? If the Tanner hadn't been confused before, he certainly was now. Not nearly as much as he was frightened, though. Was Lord Robert bluffing? Surely. Would he really burn Brooskby down to the ground? Leo had mixed emotions on the situation.
    "Good Heavens!"
    He breathed, realising that he'd been holding his breath a good few minutes now. His left hand was clutched tightly over his heart where his precious bible usually sat within the folds of his robes; But not today. He felt somewhat naked without it, but was comforted a little by the feel of rosemary beads in his right pocket. His fingers fiddled and fumbled the beads absently as the tanner stared on in horror at Marc's decaying body. He felt a sudden strong sense of grief; he had liked the arrogant little S.O.B, he found himself admitting shamefully in his deepest and most honest thoughts. Sure, Marc had been wild, loud, obnoxious, and a downright bully, but leo had always put all this down to being born into privilege. He supposed all men of noble birth acted in such ways, and so, for the most part, Leo had turned a blind eye to Marc's nasty streak. Until last night, that is.

    The tanner didn't need to hear anymore. People would soon begin to point their accusations, and Leo did not want to be amongst it. Plenty of the villagers, people who'd known Leo his entire life, had seen him argue with the Lord's son in the tavern last night. They also would've noticed that immediately after Leo took his leave, Marc had followed; Alone. The tanner was in a bad situation it seemed, so without making eye-contact with anyone, he made his way back through the crowd and hastily headed towards the tannery in those lanky, shuffled strides he walked with. He wasn't much noticed, and this suited the man fine. his ears felt so hot, he thought people might notice the steam rising from them, but his short neatly cropped hair hid this from the view of others. As soon as he was back within the temporary sanctuary that was his workshop, out of anyone's earshot, Leo let his thoughts air into the warm, quiet room.

    "But who fed Marc Bessom to the pigs? More to the point, was he still alive when they did so?"

    Until more truths could be revealed, Leonard planned to speak of his knowledge on the homicide to no-one.
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    Bronwyn

    Bronwyn knew the Lord’s man was saying something, she even knew it was something important but she couldn’t help but tune it out in the face of the drama happening in front of her. She watched, horrified as Carson struck Zhago. She’d known there was no love lost between them but to see it come to blows outside a bar-brawl was somehow shocking and she gasped. No sooner than the air had left her chest than the situation was escalated. Zhago pulled a knife. If there was one thing her Da had drilled into her head it was that knives had no business being out unless you planned on using them. The cold eyed look of Zhago spoke volumes about his willingness and it chilled her to her very bones. If she hadn’t known what happened last night then she might have believed he had done it. But then there was the matter of the pigs, how had Marc gotten there…. She took her wandering thoughts in hand and reached out and snatched Kit out of the range of danger. The girl didn’t want to let go of Carson and Bronwyn had to tug but she did. Once the struggling and whimpering girl was propped on her generous hip and secured in her arms she looked daggers at the two men.

    “What are you two thinking?” she hissed. “Kit doesn’t need to see that. She doesn’t need to see grown men acting like boys and she doesn’t need to see the one constant person in her life bleed.” She glared at Zhago. “I can’t believe you pulled a knife.”

    The girl had settled in her arms and made soft whining noises as her fat little fingers twined in the scarlet curls that hung over Bronwyn’s shoulder. She began to play with the colorful silk at Bronwyn’s neck as she peered at the men, four fingers of her other hand stuck in her mouth.

    Now that her fury had been vented Bronwyn was filled with fear. Fear for herself, fear for her friends and fear for this village. What was going to happen? Could she step forward and confess? She’d hit Marc with a rock, but had she killed him? She hadn’t thought so at the time but he was dead, maybe she’d hit him so hard he’d been senseless and stumbled into the pigs who had finished him off. She didn’t want to die for Marc, for trying to defend herself against his advanced. But the feel of Kit’s soft fingers playing at her neck made her remember it wasn’t for Marc that she’d die. She looked at Carson, at Zhago and knew that if it came down to it, she’d step forward and explain what happened and hope for Lord Robert’s mercy.

    She felt the small fingers pull and only belatedly realized what the girl had been up to. With a slippery feeling the scarf was pulled down to the girl’s crow of delight and cool air brushed the marks it had been hidden. The clear outlines of fingers bruised into her throat. For a second she was in shock and then she whirled, her hair flying about her much to Kit’s delight. With her back to them she moved towards the Tavern, panic barely concealed in her voice as she called back to them.

    “Kit should eat, and so should you both. You are welcome to join me if you promise to behave.”
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    Duncan Holdon

    Duncan wiped the vomit from his mouth and shrugged his dad's hand off of his shoulder. He didn't really understand what the men on the horses had wanted but he knew they where Lord Roberts. He remembered how his uncle had explained what a Lord was to him once. "A Lord," he'd said "is kind of like a father to all the people and the King then is like all the Lord's fathers. They have to look after the people but the people have to respect and obey them." He didn't ever remember his dad dragging mangled corpses through the street.

    But it did strike him that he still shouldn't lie to his Lord, before he told the Lord his sins thought he should tell the Lord. He looked around for Father Toni, "Father," he said running across to him, "Can I give my confession early this week?"

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    Carter

    He spilt his fingers in time to listen to the Lord's huntsmen, peeking through them as he saw him point out that dear, sweet girl, Lorelei. Moving his hands away from his face completely he gazed in horror at the girl, blood staining her clothes and her skin, shaking his head he whispered. "No." His eyes went back to the huntsmen, the scuffle between Carson and Zhago were blind to him and fortunately, Bronwyn had that situation handled. His soft, blue eyed gaze hardened at the man in Lord Robert's employ. How dare he call her out first, how dare he call out any of them. Marc was a bastard, in every sense of the word but none of them were fool enough to provoke the wrath of Robert to act upon a just revenge for all his terrible deeds.

    Carter's eyes drifted over and he saw his beloved nephew, though his father was standing there beside him. They didn't get on well, his father thought Carter was a bad influence. Bad influence? Making the boy feel normal was bad? As much as he wanted to go to him he didn't, but he was beginning to pull himself up to his feet. God must have been smiling on him this morning, meeting his gaze on a window ledge was a half filled mug of ale from the night before. Smiling, he took it and brought it to his lips then flung his head back and let it flow down his throat. A little courage now, dampen the flames of rage burning in his heart.

    Slapping the mug back down, he wiped his mouth with those scraped hands and walked towards Lorelei. Close, he put his hand gently on the timid girl's shoulder as not to startle her. No one else was stepping forward to her aid, he looks up at the huntsman and offers him a warm, cheerful smile despite the situation of grim dread. He then turns his head and leans down to whisper in her ear, she was a teller of stories she could read between the lines of his words. He prayed. With all this sudden chaos, fingers pointing, she was fragile... she must not confess if she weren't guilty. But he wanted to lace his words, in case the huntsman's ears were as good as he expected. In her ear he whispered, "You, beautiful flower, your tales are your own. No man can scribe them for you. Let them not drip venom on your tongue, nor poison your mind with their own ending. This story is now of truth... your truth. Do not sway... do not wilt.”

    Removing his hand from her shoulder he once again looks up at the huntsmen, again smiling warmly as he steps forward. Though not for a confession. “Huntsman, Sir! Yes, my name is Carter Lambrick, Town Healer, at your service,” he then over exaggerates a bow, making sure to stay enough distance to avoid being kicked in the face by the man. Swaying as he stands straight he goes on in usual Carter fashion. “Though I know not who has done this... terrible, unspeakable deed and I apologize for interrupting your beginning interrogations, I offer you my aid in your conquest of truth and justice in our Lord’s name!” It was hard not to choke on the words he described Marc’s death with. “Huntsman, Sir, I’ve studied many methods pertaining to healing advancement in our humble village. I believe I may have just the method that can aid you in discovering without a doubt... whom killed our Lord’s son. Or at least a short list of suspects. Though I ask... request, that our beloved Marc’s body be taken to my home so I may perform my studies.” Finishing his words, he bows again, smiles and steps back a few paces. All he hoped to do was eliminate those he cared for in the town, which was every single one of them. If no one could be proven the murderer, then it was obviously a happened traveler and Robert surely couldn’t punish them for that.

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    Lorelei

    Lorelei had hardly begun to work her way through the crowd when she heard people whispering her name. “Lorelei—Lorelei.” She hadn’t stopped moving until a hand had gently lit upon her arm. It was a familiar face that looked to her, concern written in her features. “Lorelei, he wants to speak to you.” The woman nodded her head, gesturing up towards the middle of the town square where the game warden stood. She helped to turn Lorelei, who was frozen in place, and gave her a push in his direction. “Go ahead, yer alright, now.” The voice encouraged, and then the woman and those around her backed away, murmuring amongst themselves about the girl with the blood-stained dress.

    Me? Me first? She had been chosen, the most unfortunate number pulled in a terrible draft. Lorelei felt her heart racing, rattling out a deranged percussion against her chest. WHY me? Heavens, please.… She wondered if they could hear it, the people around her, if they could hear the beating and know how afraid she was. Where were her mother and father? She longed for them in this moment, where she felt like she was walking into the mouth of terror. She longed for anyone to be there with her as she walked up to this stolid and petrifying man, and every step she took felt like the world might open up beneath her. Looking up to the sky, she half expected the blue to shatter, and collapse into pieces, piercing the town. If you’re going to fall, fall now, She thought.

    She was close to Alain when she saw a familiar form in her periphery. She coughed out a cry, a momentary blip of relief, when she saw that it was Ioan. Her friend, he was not letting her go up alone. Lorelei tried to recognize his presence. Their eyes met for a moment, and she opened her mouth in a downward sort of movement that resembled a fish, gaping its mouth wide. It might have been a smile, had it not been so brief and her eyes not been laden with distress.

    Finally she was there, at the end of what seemed a treacherous trip, standing in front of the game warden. She could not meet his gaze—his penetrating green eyes. It felt like they could pierce her, like he could look right inside of her and see all the things that happened the night before, everything she couldn’t remember and everything she’d rather be untrue. Instead, she looked down. First at her dress, but the telling red streaks were there and made her cringe. She decided that the ground was best and settled on his shoes, looking at the way the dirt caked around the edges of the leather.

    “Yes, Sir?” Lorelei had just spoken these words when she felt a hand touch her shoulder. Looking up, she was greeted by a pair of tired blue eyes—Carter’s. She listened to his words—what was he telling her? To lie? No, to tell the truth. But not their truth—her own truth. But, what was the truth? Lorelei wasn’t sure. She vaguely remembered what she did, but was frightened: what if telling the truth meant that she told them she was guilty?

    However, it seemed that Lorelei would not have to answer just yet. Carter had stepped up to the warden, and began speaking to him, giving her time to think, to settle down. In that moment, Lorelei was more grateful to Carter than she had ever been. He was a great healer, she thought. She hoped that, somehow, he could have a remedy for this town's ill, too.
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    Carson

    Carson glared at Zhago and put his hand on his own neck. His fingers felt for the place where the steel just pressed. He gathered the choked up anger and spit it on the ground close to his own feet but in Zhago’s direction. His intense hard eyes glanced to Cristobel noticing she was watching. He let his gaze soften a bit and he lowered his head. He looked up again and tired to catch her eyes. He wasn’t sure why but he wanted to tell her something. No he didn’t, never mind, he hung his head back down quickly.

    He looked up again to see Kit in Bronwyn’s arms. His eyes lost most of their anger as he accepted her hits. Bronwyn had a guts and the ability to smack Carson in ways no one else could, with her true sharp tongue. When he watched Kit get lost in the swirl of that trademark hair of hers, Carson kicked the dirt and then followed.

    As he past Zhago he hissed, “Behave!” and moved on. Carson didn’t understand why everyone loved Zhago so much. But in his mind they did. Everyone wanted to sing with the guy, dance with the guy, hells even sleep with the guy. Carson didn’t get it. But he had been surprised that the soft flowery fellow pressed a blade with that much quickness and force. Carson would remember that. Zhago reacted with the skill and the emotions that could have killed someone. Maybe Marc. Could he convince anyone of that?

    He wove through the crowd following Kit and Bronwyn finding it easy to trail her bright blowing hair and the sway of her hips. He glanced at the faces as he passed by. He didn’t want to wait for the lackey lord’s hound dog to point any finger at him. If he was lucky he could slip through the crowd and not have to face the goon. He knew of Longshot but he didn’t think the man really understood the village. With a bit of luck he won’t get to everyone. What would happen if the guy didn’t managed to stumble onto the murder? What would happen if he did?

    Carson shook his head. It would be better for someone to just step up and save them all this grief. Who didn’t want the bastard dead. Couldn’t they just find some sap and stick the finger at him? Everyone could thank him and secretly praise his effort. Be done with it. But not him. Not Carson. He had Kit. He had his horses. They needed him. Zhago. It could be Zhago. No everyone loved him, remember.

    He looked around again thinking of who could save them all.
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    Alain Longshot

    With a neutral expression, Alain watched the woman ... and then the other man approach him. He hadn't even started yet, and he already hated this. At least when he caught a poacher, it was obvious they'd been poaching. They might have a hundred excuses, a family to feed, a sick baby, a starving grandma, but Alain took them in, one and all, knowing most of them would hang for thieving from Lord Robert's lands. Sometimes they ran, and it got ugly, and Alain was forced to end it all there under the trees.

    But it never sat well. Not a bit. He'd been a poacher once himself.

    Silently, the games warden listened to the good doctor, hearing every word with his sharp hearing. This man was one of the clever types, Alain could tell. Made sense he'd be a healer, the huntsman supposed. If he had a wound, he'd want a clever man tending it. But clever men could spin clever lies.

    Alain stared neutrally at Carter a moment, then shifted just his eyes to Lorelei. The girl wouldn't meet his eyes. Wasn't much of a good sign for her. Alain put his searching eyes back on the doctor and wondered: Is that why you came forward so quick? To protect this pretty face?

    The huntsman spared a considering glance at mangled Marc, then finally he thought he had ruminated enough to make a decision.

    He looked back to the two in front of him, namely Carter Lambrick.

    "Get some men to help you take him where you need him. Before the flies get him. Don't know what all you can glean from that sorry bloody mess, but I'm apt to hear it. I'll be around to check up on what you uncover."

    And you can bet I won't believe half of it.

    And that was as much as a distraction as Alain was willing to entertain at the moment. His sharp green eyes found their way back to Lorelei, and he cracked a dangerous question loud enough for all those around the scene to hear.

    "How'd you get that blood all over you, girl?"

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    What was he even doing? Why was he going to help her like this? Today of all days at that. There was still a bitter taste in his mouth that he couldn't quite pinpoint its source. It had a few of them if he was honest with himself. And not all of them were unrelated to Lorelei. But he couldn't stop himself. She needed to be protected, even if he was a little upset with her. He couldn't let her go to the hounds on her own. She needed him, even if she didn't...want him. He just kept telling himself he'd do that for any girl. If it had been Browyn who'd been called up first he'd be right there for her too. Yes, it was just the right thing to do.

    The healer stepped in before he could, and Ioan could feel the flash of anger course through him at that. But he said nothing, did nothing about it and let him go. By the time the huntsman looked back to actually speak to Lorelei, he was at her side, taking her hand in his like an older brother would to his little sister. That's all, just friends, he thought to himself.

    The man's question had him looking down at Lorelei for the first time really, seeing the state of her dress. What had she been up to? That wasn't blood, was it? And who said it was Marc's? Even in a fit of rage she just didn't seem the type to be that violent. She couldn't have possibly done what this man thought that she had done. Could she?

    Blinders, they hid so much from his sight, perhaps he was wrong about that too. But he couldn't just back away now. But could he lie for her? Maybe not just yet, but he could throw in doubt. "Who said it was blood?" he questioned before anyone else could speak, stepping closer to the girl, like he was about to step in front of her to hide her away from prying eyes. "Blood dries darker than that, doesn't it? It's too bright."

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    Fayette

    Fayette had stopped to watch the seemingly, strangely paternal events of a blood-streaked girl unfold between everyone else and the huntsman. It was a small circle within the crowd and some of the lesser interested villagesmen started to filter out and go on with their lives, taking care to hold their heads up and meet everyone in the eye when they spoke. The air was tense and everyone seemed to have all names but their own quick to the tongue, dancing in the mind.
    Not much business will be made. She was sure the butcher would suffer for this. Who else would have the quick cut knives and intimately know the vulgar and near sinister nature of underfed pigs?

    who said it was blood
    She could hear the scrambling in his voice louder than rats on a loft beam.

    "Beets?" She quipped, unable to help herself. She had a bad habit of letting the rude fling out of her head. Blame the silent cows she spends most of her time with, who allows her verbal abuse with not so much as a heavy swivel of a dirty ear.

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