Syrax's Statements

[Syrax]

Syrax's Statements

Need wording? That's basically what I do. At Syrax's Statements (for lack of a better wording), I can word posts, messages, user titles, and signatures. One of my favorite styles is irony, as demonstrated above.

Anyway! Here is the format of request that I require.
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Type: (user title, signature, post, VM or PM, other)

Material to work with: (whatever you want me to work with. If you have nothing, don't worry about it)

What you want me to do with it: (edit, rephrase, create, etc.)

How you want me to do what you want me to do with it: (add in a specific element, get your message across more effenciently, the general feel of what you want, etc.)

Any further details:
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Example

Type: User title
Material to work with: Nothing
What you want me to do with it: Create
How you want me to do what you want me to do with it: I want a title that is simple and shows a bit of violence. Please use a bit of irony with it too.
Any further details: None.

For this, I would try to make a play off of the user's name or avatar. For a very poor example, let's say the user's name is Syrax. There's not much I can do with it, other than use the name's roots and emotional feel and feel of the language any roots may be derived from. The avatar is just a lame waterfall. Still, I can use the fact that it's serene looking to my advantage.

After 5 mintues of consideration, I finally come up with two words "Dangerously Quiet".
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Hope ya'll are willing to give it a try!


EDIT: If you request any type of service, and I accept it, then I do ask that you use whatever I produce unless you have good reason to do so. If you don't like my work, please tell me straight up instead of saying "Oh, that's marvelous, thank you!" and then proceeding to ignore it.

If you don't like what I have to offer, I also ask that you tell me why you don't like it. Go ahead and be blunt. Again, it is better to tell me that you don't like it rather than say that you do like it but then not use it.

Thanks

EDIT: Oh, and I do not aid in contest entries. If you want to win one, be creative

[sao]

Type: signature
Material to work with: My signature
What you want me to do with it: Create
How you want me to do what you want me to do with it: I'd like some thing short, 2-3 words to fill the blank on top of their heads, could be a sentence but not too long.
Any further details: They're Marie Antoinette and count Fersen. In case you don't know them: they were in love, but she only met him after her unhappy arranged marriage. At the end of the story they were separated, he had to go back to his country before knowing that she was executed in the French revolution.

Thanks in advance.

ps: Oh, maybe I need a user title too, but the signature come first please

[Syrax]

Okay, here are some few-words to choose from:

Love in Vain
Joy And Despair
Fate is cruel.

A couple different sentences:

If love is so sweet, then why does it hurt so much?
True love goes beyond death.
Some things could never be.

And something in Latin if you want

Hic amor intermittet ob mortem non.
(This love will not stop because of death)


For your user title, if you wish to keep inside the same theme, you could use one of the "few-words" list. "Joy And Despair" would probably fit best.

Thoughts?

EDIT: These are the basic themed results I have. If you want, add in a couple elements and I'll work with it some more.

[sao]

Thanks very much. I really like these, especially the last one.

Joy And Despair.

True love goes beyond death.
Some things could never be.

Could you replace "Some things " with other words?

For the title, I probably go with "Fate is cruel.", it would feel like she (in the avatar) is saying it, and would match the signature: fate is cruel, so, some things could never be...

I was also thinking about "beauty and ? ", something saying she's beautiful, she's a Queen and she's unhappy...

[Syrax]

Beauty and Tragedy
Majestic Sorrow
Who said beauty was power?
Royalty doesn't change sorrow.
Beautiful, royalty, and still broken.

Some things could never be
This love could never be
The perfect life can never be
Conquering fate simply can't be
This sorrow can never be quenched
My heart can never be repaired
Why could this never be?

Love is lost, sorrow is gained

All good things come to an end
[not original wording on that one, taken from a popular phrase]

Forbidden love; loved by me, forbidden by fate.

[sao]

I've made up my mind

Fate is cruel for profile pic

Some things could never be for signature

Majestic Sorrow for user title

Thanks again, it's a great help.

[Syrax]

Great picks, and you're very welcome! I don't require posted credit, but if someone does comment on the words for any of those three I'd appreciate it if some mention was given about me. Thank you!

[Lyzan]

Interesting thing you got going here.. Just for fun sake (& probably a boost to my own self-esteem/ego), I'd like a request.. *chuckles*

Type: Post..

Material to work with: Me..

What you want me to do with it: First impression/describe..

How you want me to do what you want me to do with it: Something like What the LADIES say about me... (can be found at the bottom of that link in a spoiler)

Any further details: None..

Others: Take your time and don't worry if it's not accurate.. Negative remarks welcomed as well.. Thank you and hope you'd fun working on it. *smiles*

[Syrax]

Hmmm...a writing challenge, which I do enjoy. However, I do have little to go on. So should I ask for some material, or pretend that I'm a political campaigner and make something up?

EDIT: And do you want any specific elements? I can make it humorous, or perhaps flattering at first but actually not at all flattering when you think about it, or perhaps almost anything else. I can sound like a campaign, a book review, an adoring fan, or anything else really.

[Lyzan]

You can either use the resources from my VM wall, OOC/RP posts, search my name or you could definitely make something up. As I said, it's merely for fun.

EDIT: I don't mind.. Go at it as you see fit. *smiles*