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    AfterEarth : OOC

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    With an engrossing, open galaxy and diverse storytelling, this is the dark, gritty and original Sci-Fi epic...




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    The Story

    Earth is long lost, yet its legacy has enveloped the stars. Yet despite this, its location and its history are unknown, and all that remain are scattered traces of seemingly lost stories. To most it is nothing but a fable, a lie you tell your children at night so they may slumber with smiles, but to some the belief in its existence is integral to their lives. The notion that all beings come from one area, the idea that the stars have a place for all to call home is...sacred. So much so that various religions have been founded studying and worshipping the prospect of it's existence. Theories abound as to why all of mankind arrived on thousands of ships, in systems they did not recognize, seeing star constellations foreign to all of their records. Reports vary about the origins of life, of our history and of our purpose. What is readily clear throughout these reports and studies, is that a substantial portion of our history and development has been removed from all record...and memory. We did not develop or grow...we simply were. With advanced ships, medicine and the technology to terraform uninhabitable worlds with landscapes that would suit our needs. If Earth ever truly was, then its scope pales in comparison to the breadth of the new worlds.

    As mankind discovered a new system, a sea of new worlds, a sky filled with new moons and new homes, we settled. Colonisation ensured survival; habitable worlds were enveloped for the sake of continuing a dwindling existence. We left our true home, to rest amongst strange stars and uncharted territories.

    Wars were fought for basic necessities; genocide was instigated for the sake of water and food, with men and women dying so that others could live. Borders were crossed; and divisions were made in the early days of our expansion. When mankind found themselves in the heart of a new body of stars, a dark, thunderous and visceral event riddled throughout our society. An event known by many names ‘The Collapse’, ‘The Chaos’ or ‘The Forgotten War’. Few details are known of exactly what transpired during the Collapse, what is clear is the affect it had on humanity as a whole. We arrived on primitive ships in foreign territory with little of our technology to share, scattered and scared of the path that lay ahead and given our need for resources, that fear turned into panic. And that panic resulted in slaughter.

    The larger and technologically superior vessels were presumably owned and operated by Earth's largest corporations, industries and enterprises with all of them reportedly having interests and stakes involved in every aspect of our society. As the myriad of governments realised their influence over their people had waned during the Collapse, they pleaded with their obvious superiors for help. When the Chaos caused by fear and confusion nearly reached it's breaking point, the corporate entities united their forces like a tide of overwhelming influence. Every single one of the economic leviathans joined to form a new governing body that would preside over all of humanity as we colonised the new worlds, this governing body came to be known as ‘The Imperative’. We built primitive settlements, temples and shanty towns out of newly transformed worlds, some of which still stand to this day. We charted our surroundings and soon we came to realise where we were in relation to the rest of the galaxy. We were at the center, right in the middle of an astronomically enormous galaxy. The first world to be settled remains the political and economical capital to this day, it is called Salvation.

    As our population boomed and more and more resources were required to sustain, we branched outward into further space. As the Imperative drove us further and further into the abyss, our resources dwindled and less and less time and neccesities were afforded to the settlers of new worlds. Some worlds barely even finished the terraforming process, leaving them as barren death sentences. The outer worlds came to be known as ‘The Frontier’, where the poor and down trodden now live under the shadow of crime and manipulation. ‘The Core' is the centre of the galaxy, a placed filled with pristine worlds dominated by the wealthy and political juggernauts of our new society. The worlds in between have been deemed ‘The Void’, the place between the other worlds, were laws were minimal and freedom was all but absolute, but political influence waned due to independent and efficient living, The Void was the victim of the desires of other worlds, cornered by the criminals and the politicians, they remain a conflicted people to this day.

    The divide between rich and poor has become galactic in scale, with mankind fastly becoming an exploitave and violent people. Our differences have become perpetuated by our desires as our technology has advanced. We built machines capable of performing our work for us, but that was an arduous process, a mechanical path riddled with failure. 'Drones', we treated them like slaves, Farming Drones, War Drones, Medical Drones and more, built for every task and abandoned after they did their work. Some have somehow managed to exile themselves, becoming a race in their own right. But the division between man and machine has not been the only seperation within our culture.

    Those that sought perfection through augmentation and physical surgery became obsessed with change, becoming something other than human. 'Alternates' they have been called, sometimes simply referred to as 'Alts', men and women who coloured their skin in alien tones by manipulating their cells and eyes into every shade of the rainbow, implanting their bones and muscles with all sorts of designs. Some have gone further than this, replacing entire limbs or other pieces of their bodies with mechanical, electronic and bio-mechanical alternatives. These cybernetic organisms have come to be referred to as 'Ciphers'. They both became cultures onto themselves and triggered yet another series of divides.

    But something else is stirring in the hearts and minds of men as of late. Something is changing amongt the stars.

    Something wicked this way comes.







    Rules:
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    • No Godmodding.
    • No Speed Posting.
    • No Flaming.
    • No Trolling.
    • No One Line Posts.
    • Make an effort to interact with other characters.
    • Almost all mature writing allowed, except for descriptions of gratuituous sex, per site rules.
    • Post at least once a week.
    • No Spam.
    • You are only allowed to control one character and a possible companion, NPC's not included.
    • Have some method of Space Travel, even if it's public transport.
    • Don't tie others up, let us know if you can't post for whatever reason.
    • Most importanly, have some well written fun. The galaxy is yours.



    Posting Etiquette:
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    • One paragraph minimum (average of five sentences) or higher, otherwise known as Guild standards.
    • Let at least 3-4 people post before you post again.
    • If your character absolutely has to be alone for whatever reason, he, she (or it) must be undertaking something relevant to the plot and or the mission at hand or at least have some knowledge of it.
    • At the beginning of every post, you must tag it with your location in the galaxy. Due to this world's enormous size, we must make efforts to detail our whereabouts so we do not deviate too far from one another within reason. We have to be able to find one another. This location must be colour coded as well, with respects to the colours representing the Frontier, the Void and the Core. There are however exceptions to this. If you absolutely must keep your location a secret, then you can simply list the area of the galaxy you are in (Frontier, Void, Core) and post something beside akin to 'Lost in Space', 'Somewhere in the Frontier' etc. etc.
    • Correct grammar and spelling are expected to be of decent to high standards, per the Guild Norm. We need to be able to read and understand your writing.
    • If you are in a scene with another character, one that isn't connected to the others, with lots of back and forth dialog, take it to PM. Then after you have RPed out the scene in PM the conversation or scene can be posted as a whole by one of the players. This makes for nice banter and keeps from losing the feel of the conversation when it gets broken up by other people posting. Be mindful if you do this, so that you don't tie up a player for too long. The collab post should be wrapped up quickly, say within a day or so.
    • If you are inactive for one week, you will most likely have your character turned into an NPC, making your death or other forms of manipulation (thievery etc.), all the more possible. Unless you have a valid excuse, which of course will be accepted.
    • Make an effort to utilise all of the information I and others provide for you. Think of this world like seeing Star Wars for the first time, titles and certain words are important to understanding things. What if you didn't know what 'the Force' was? Or a Jedi? Or even a Wookie? Familiarise yourself with everything.
    • Please be sensible with the amount of money and equipment your character has in their posession and their inventory, per the No Godmodding rule.
    • The worlds, colonies, moons etc. that are shown on the Galaxy Map merely list notable planets, it is implied within the mythology that there are in fact hundreds of populated areas. If you want to make up a world for whatever reason, you are free to do so, it is an open kind of world. The map I've provided is just a guide.
    • If you have any questions, comments or even concerns then please post them here. If you feel you cannot, then PM either me or whoever else I ask to become Co-GM of this story.
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    I really love and respect the writing process, especially when it's a collaborative one, just like how I intend for this one to be. This is the sort of platform we can use to get to know one another, by recognizing one anothers styles and levels of skill and of course our personalities reflected in the things we say and the desicions we make.

    I particularly love it when that kind of experience is one with a friendly atmosphere, one I hope we can all share here through this strange universe I've manage to scrap together. So don't hesitate to banter with one another and discuss whatever pertains to the RP, heck we can even give eachother pointers.

    For the purposes of this RP I'm going to be really customizing the plot relating to who comes aboard, so there will be a decent pause between OOC and IC as I take the characters and players and tie them all together. So you know, bare with me.

    When you're finished with your character, post it here. And if you have any ideas or opinions you think would be great for the RP, don't hesitate to PM me or throw me a Visitor's Message. Let's have some fun folks!
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    Dramatis Personae:
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    1. Raziel Played by Kaeb
    2. Natalya Ravenwood Played by Nevada
    3. Francoise Dominique Played by Shon Harris
    4. Dr. Penbrooke Covington Played by RioDragon
    5. Angel-7 Played by OrangeInk
    6. Blair Woods Played by Belladonna
    7. Naminé Played by Butterflyocean
    8. Obberon Played by Panquake
    9. Javelin Played by Ozerath











    Last edited by Kaeb; 08-07-2012 at 04:09 PM.

    “Continuous eloquence wearies. Grandeur must be abandoned to be appreciated. Continuity in everything is unpleasant. Cold is agreeable, that we may get warm.”
    — Blaise Pascal.








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    First Also the space for my character sheet >.<


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    Raziel
    {Razz-eee-ell}

    Age : 32
    Sexuality : Heterosexual
    Culture : Human
    Homeworld : Providence
    Occupation : Bounty Hunter
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    Distinguishing Marks :

    Deep scars carved across his entire back,
    Prison Ink etched into the back of his neck,
    Burn marks in the palms of his hands,
    Fingertips have been chewed off,
    Various shallow cuts across his arms.


    Skills :

    Capable Piloting,
    Expert Marksmanship,
    Hand-to-Hand Combat,
    Navigation,
    Tactics,
    Tracking,
    Plays the Guitar Badly,
    Moderate Survival training,
    Basical Medical training,
    Basic Engineering training,
    Expert Card Player,
    Years of Field Experience,
    Knowldge of History and Philosophy.


    Gear :

    Custom-Built Military Grade Blaster Pistols x2,
    Armour-Padded Black and Grey Clothing,
    A Dozen Throwing Knives,
    Serrated Edge Combat Knife,
    Smoke Grenades,
    Flashbangs,
    Gas Pellets,
    EMP Grenades,
    Frag Grenades,
    Pack of Dream laced Deathsticks,
    Military Grade Tactical-Readout Masque.

    Masque Capabilities :
    • A Rangefinder attatched to the helm,
      can track up to twenty targets.
    • The dark macrobinocular viewplate
      offers a variety of vision modes, including infrared.
    • A pineal eye sensor on the helmet
      combined with an internal overlay display
      to provide tracking information within
      a 360-degree radius.
    • Motion sensors.
    • An encrypted internal comlink.
    • A broad-band antenna complets the helmet's devices.
    • All of which can be linked to the wearer's
      weapons or their personal starship.


    Ship :



    The Obsidian Crow
    {Retrofitted Cargo Freighter.}


    Identity :

    A man of fierce conviction, Raziel is one of the most well travelled and experienced men in the galaxy. He has little interest in religion and political intrigue; by his own admission, Raziel only feels truly alive when fighting, travelling or making love. Moderately handsome, with sapphire eyes and a crooked smile, framed by a trimmed beard, means he hasn't had much trouble with the opposite sex. Despite this fact, he is not a man in posession of any kind of ego, at least not one of considerable size. His crooked half smile has been described as 'deadly', by those who have encountered him. He generally wears dusty grey clothing, complimented by dark black garb and a perpetual miasma of cigarette smoke framing his stature. Early in life, Raziel came off as arrogant, amoral, and dishonorable, living his life for nothing but coin and credits, disregarding beauty and affection, forgetting the future and killing with merciless effiency. He took whatever jobs he could get, turning a blind eye if he could to the legality of the job and the risks involved. However, his time in prison and his encounters with others across the stars, changed all of that. He became a man of compassion (refusing jobs that would involve him in slavery, for instance), with a strong sense of nobility. He especially swore against the apprehension and killing of children, striking down anyone who would detract from his one rule.

    This new lease on life filled him with an existential stance on the stars, thinking of most conflics as petty and inevitably pointless in the grand scheme of things. He began referring to his targets as ''grave makers'', miserable ingrates whose selfish acts turned them into criminals, desired for nothing but death. He began mocking anyone he encountered who dared do the same too him, becoming an incredibly guarded man, with an incredible wit and prevelant self-awareness. He most of all mocked the various forms of organised religions that have been perpetuated throughout the galaxy, referring to them as ''children who don't understand the stars, so they call them gods''. He doesn't find himself caring or dwelling on the loss of earth, he considers everything his home. He believes the stars belong to us all. Despite his passion for philosophy and his heavy views, he's prone to bouts of humour, even getting into the occasional barfights out of boredom and disillusionment with the mundane nature of things. He is a damaged man, with a vast understanding eclipsed by a need to press on no matter the adversity that he encounters. He is an anti-hero in the truest sense of the word, he needs no victory or dominance, he just needs to...continue.


    History :

    A smouldering flame burned through the stars, soaked by endless rain, howling winds and opressive shadow. It sliced through the midnight sky over a slumbering Providence as the darkness drank the light of the crashing fire. The moonlight seemed to frame the source of the embers for a moment, as the shadow took the form of a dying vessel, fractured and damaged beyond repair. The falling ship was lost, rescue was impossible, marshalling to render aid was pointless. The people of the sheltered world of Providence were forced to spectate without action and without word. The metal hull grinded thunderously under the pressure of the fall, locked in a tremendous duet with the sound of the shrieking, magma coloured flames. Inches before the surface of the world, time seemed to come to a complete stop as the vessel was suspended in the view of the people. All of them heard the sound, but none dared to believe it. It was impossible, how could such horror be allowed to take place around such an innocent thing? But they knew it to be true, their senses had not betrayed them. It was the sound of a screaming newborn. Time resumed as the craft plummeted into the world, erupting in an explosion of biblical proportions, deafening them to the cries of the innocent. The heat seemed to reach the cities in the distance as all of Providence held it's breath. The rest was silence.

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    Hard to top that description ain't it? The Providians always where a methodical and poetic people, although a little rough around the edges. The verse you just read was quoted to me a hundred times as I was raised on their our, world. It just so happens, it's exactly what happened the night I was born. Some farmers were out laying crops in dead fields, marvelling at the clear skies that revealed the stars to them. Clear skies were rare on Providence, but daylight was even rarer than that. The farmers were about to return to their lovers and children before I had to arrive and ruin their night. The crash was epic in proportions, like nothing any of them had ever seen before and some of them had served in the Imperative military. Hours after the explosion, the scrambled through fire, brimstone and debris to seek out survivors. Or at least that's what they told me, I always had a sneaking suspicion they were just scoping for salvage, Providians aren't the wealthiest people in the Frontier. But then they heard my screams again, like the moment they described to me before the crash.

    They found me in the arms of my bleeding mother, without a scratch on me. We were in the cargo bay, sealed behind some crates filled with bullets, alongside some other containers packed with deathsticks. Not the cleanest place to birth a baby, but neither was doing it onboard a crashing spaceship. They salvagers deemed it a miracle, a message from the lost Earth that not all was lost amongst the stars. But any decent man worth their salt in vessel experience could tell that sealing yourself behind crates built for containing such profitable cargo, was the equivelant of being in the palms of a god. Mother was smart, she always was. I never did find out why we ended up on a crashing smuggling ship full of dead men, but I guess I never asked. I found it more fun to make up my own stories as a child. That my mother fought off an army of robots, with me in her womb. Or that she was a secret government agent. Or an angel. But she was just my mother. Just human. Just a survivor.

    We were welcomed into the arms of Providence like wayward children, given food and shelter in the bowels of their enormous Satellite Cities. I was a bit of a problem child, fell in with every wrong crowd that would take me. I was only concerned with being loud, disruptive...explosive. It seemed fitting afterall, given the state I was born in. My mother got around, seeking comfort in the arms of farmers, mercenaries sometimes even their wives. She grew distant as I grew up, she became quiet as I got louder. We loved one another, there was no doubting that but there was this unexplainable void between us, like all the love had been taken away. There were nights were I'd return home as a child, drunk on the joy of burning crops and stealing food. I'd find her in the eastern lands, resting amongst roses and staring at the night sky. She was longing for something, missing something. I always thought it might have been my father, but I never asked. I respected her too much to question her. Even on those nights where we'd stare at the stars together, it was our home in a way. It was where our relationship began, amidst fire, metal and blood.

    I never got to say goodbye. There was no grand farewell, no last dance, no curtain call. She just disappeared without a trace, without a midnight kiss on my slumbering forehead. I awoke on the roof our our city, beneath the shadow of the domineering satelitte, to find her absent from our home. Nobody had seen her and nobody ever did again. There were days were I found myself wishing I'd find her body, because then at least I'd know that she was gone. It was the not knowing...the uncertainty, that was hardest part of it all. A vanishing love is a wound you just can't heal, and it never has.

    I ran from the settlements, stole all the resources I could before abandoning the people that had sheltered me for my entire childhood. I left them with all they'd taught me of life, of our history, of our philosophy. I stole my own life from them, a life they cherished as if I was their own child.

    If I thought the crowds back home were bad, the circles I travelled afterward were nightmares. Pirates, thieves, murders and miscreants, all pandering to the needs of lost children. I smuggled myself aboards ships travelling throughout the stars for months, until I ended up in the Void. I stole for organised thieves, smuggled for mercants avoiding Imperative patrols. Any job worth having, I'd take it. I didn't have a goal, I didn't have a mission, there was no grand prize. My business was the same as everyone elses. I was surviving.

    The darkness was perpetual, I was deep in the trenches of the Underworld, this was my life now. Home was gone, the life of a sheltered farmers boy was one I would never fufill. I've shed no tears on the matter, I accept my lot in life. I embrace the darkness, I breathe it in like black smoke and spit it back out. The progression forward gained so much momentum, that I found myself forgetting my own name, memories of home were fading. I had become a different person, switched from the body of a petrified boy, into that of a grissled mercenary.

    I bought and stole the best weaponry, trained with veteran soldiers in exchange for favours and honed my skills in pursuit of a career. A few bad deals with some reputable Crime Lords in the Void ended with six years in Purgatory, the prison station orbiting a dying world. I've still got the ink cut into my neck, never did get the stamp lasered off. Bastards caught me in the central systems trying to get through customs, got my fingerprints on some black market weaponry. I ensured that I wouldn't make that mistake again, as the guards found my naked and hunched over the cell toilet. Chewing off my fingertips to avoid any future failures.

    After the slammer I tried my hand at tournament fighting on Hellhan Station, even won myself a few rounds against some godly champions, regular titans in the arena. The last guy proved to be the most difficult, the guy was a Cipher alright, bastard had flamethrowers for arms. I've still got the burns on my hands, reminders of a swift and bloody victory. I finally used the money to help me craft my own armour, managed to 'commander' some sturdy metal from the Satellite over the city I was raised in back on Providence, it seemed fitting. Noone recognised me, and if they did, they didn't dare speak a word. Melted down and shaped into some of the highest quality gear available. They taught me well. But becoming a man wasn't my true vistory, making a home for myself holds that title. After winning an old Cargo Freighter from a blue-skinned Alternate in a game of cards, I stepped aboard my new life. It was confirmation of something greater, something better than what I'd been before. I was a survivor now, just like my mother. But I was different. I was free....not lost.
    Last edited by Kaeb; 08-04-2012 at 04:14 PM.

    “Continuous eloquence wearies. Grandeur must be abandoned to be appreciated. Continuity in everything is unpleasant. Cold is agreeable, that we may get warm.”
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    Wasn't aware character sheet spaces could be claimed >< but if so MINE!
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    That's the spirit!

    I have all of the NPC images fully edited now. Working on more detailed write ups for the races and such. Just thought I'd get the basic layout/bones of the OOC up for everyone.

    “Continuous eloquence wearies. Grandeur must be abandoned to be appreciated. Continuity in everything is unpleasant. Cold is agreeable, that we may get warm.”
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    Reserving. Mess with it, and I will bring my Scottish Paratroopers on you ass.
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    Also, going back to the last post on the interest check, WE'RE GONNA HAVE SOME DRUGGED UP FUUUUUUUN ^^
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    Working on the write ups for the drugs right now actually heh, drugs and weapons drive the criminal underworld in any nation, just as they will in AfterEarth.

    “Continuous eloquence wearies. Grandeur must be abandoned to be appreciated. Continuity in everything is unpleasant. Cold is agreeable, that we may get warm.”
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    My sheet will be up tonight, as well.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Panquake View Post
    My sheet will be up tonight, as well.
    No it won't, because I haven't posted the layout yet. Information will be updated both tonight and tomorrow night, with the roleplay expected to begin either Sunday night or Monday night.

    “Continuous eloquence wearies. Grandeur must be abandoned to be appreciated. Continuity in everything is unpleasant. Cold is agreeable, that we may get warm.”
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