The Devils Prime OOC

[Valerium Therme]

Name: Neige. Real name: Asuka Langley
Age: 28 years old
Gender: Female
Height: 155 cm
Weight: 90 pound
Appearance: Neige has a slender body posture with long black wavy hair that goes to her shoulder. Her pale complexion is often mistaken as a sign of severe illness rather than a fact that she is seldom get touched by the sunlight. Being a "hybrid" has blessed her with a pair of greenish blue eyes rather than having her mother's black eyes. She is very often seen in a neat black khaki trousers and a white long-sleeves shirt that fit her body posture perfectly. She likes to wear it because she always claims that she needs to be as neat and maybe neater than her partner. Plus, it gives her a sense of pride, despite her being a woman compared to her partner.
Personality: Neige likes cats and almost will always react everytime she sees a cat. Other that that, she is someone others can call "an ignorant brat". Most of the time, she doesnt respond to unimportant remarks or people. Plus, she can be someone difficult to amuse, especially if people try to make her smile with jokes. However, she will be more mild if being given her favorite strawberry milkshake that she can drink more than 3 times a day.
History: Neige, or previously known as Asuka used to be a cheerful young girl, living a normal life together with her parents in a small house. Her father, being a good cop had taught her some basic skills on how to defend herself. But a case made her father got caught in a bigger problem that changed Asuka's life. One night, some people came into the house and tortured both her parents in front of her eyes before decided to lock her inside the house with tied hands and burned the house. Asuka was being saved by a fire fighter but her parents didnt make it. Evee since then, she didnt want to be known as Asuka anymore. She is nobody but Neige....the snow.
Neige's only purpose on being a detective is to find her parents' murderers and give them the same treatment her parents got from them.
Flaws: Neige is claustrophobic due to her past where she was locked inside the burning house. She is also very afraid of fire and tends to tremble and paralyze when seeing one.
Others: Neige's favorite place to sleep is her office

There you go the age and uniform is much better Neige! Nice work. I'll get to work on my character's history tonight and make sure to have it done for you tomorrow. Luckily, and sadly at the same time, my contract at work has expired so I've got tons and tons of free time again. Well at least I've got more free time after college and personal matters then I did when it was college, personal matters, and work.

And yeah Buio is right Alucard is one of my favourite anime character's. But just one of them there's still a few others that are at the top of my list alongside him. Also don't worry about sounding childish it does not. I started roleplaying as a child as an escape from the dreary events I faced every day in my life and even now it still plays as an escape for me from time to time. So if there is anyone who understand using writing as an escape it's me!

[Neige]

*bows* thank you for your guidance and suggestion.
Thats a relief....that it is better for you

*hugs* I am sorry for the expired contract
but I do hope that it at least ease your tiredness and lack of sleep you have been having
and i do hope it brighten your day a bit

*smiles*

[Valerium Therme]

*bows* thank you for your guidance and suggestion.
Thats a relief....that it is better for you

*hugs* I am sorry for the expired contract
but I do hope that it at least ease your tiredness and lack of sleep you have been having
and i do hope it brighten your day a bit

*smiles*

Ah we'll see and I always have a lack of sleep. It's my own fault that I never get any sleep to be fair.

Anyway finished my CS go take a look at it when you have a chance and tell me what you think. The only thing I added was the history so you can just skip to that if you've read the rest.