I had a feeling I should have put his father's history in a Spoiler I'd like to say while I'm clarifying that my brain kind of turned to mush part of the way through so I apologize for all of the clarifications needed.
In regards to Rosenkov: I haven't read any of the IC yet so I did not incorporate them on purpose, they just seemed like a reasonable company to work for. Originally, I had meant for the assault on Kezna to just be a group of mercenaries who caught wind of a special delivery with Kezna getting blamed for it, but I like the idea of a betrayal. I feel a betrayal would give the story a bit more depth, especially since Rosenkov seems to be involved in the story. I would like to know more about your thoughts on that and insider knowledge through a PM if you wouldn't mind. We should see if we can't work something great out.
And I was not intending to have Kezna just be a rookie agent, this is another brain-mush incident. Thanks for catching that, I'll fix it. I'll also go back and fix the appearance, image, and thermal clip section in the morning. Please send me that PM, I'd love to perfect Kezna's story a little more and any other comments/ideas you have would be great to hear!
Tomorrow I'll try to do a little IC reading to get a feel for the story and make my first post. Hopefully I'll have it up by tomorrow night!