Hey Soldier,
This is a sort of "sketch to show you the direction I might be going with it. I wanted to get your opinion on it. This BY NO MEANS the final product, haha. It's very very rough at this point.
I took out a lot of the fiery dots stuff to show off the bodies in the water more, darkened the statues at either side and tried to add more depth and texture to the red. I also darkened the glass window and the light coming through. I upped the exposure a bit to bring out the entirety of the room better, so let me know if you like that or rather it be darker then this.