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[Major Ursa]

For Black Dragon's Request

Second Is Up Side Down, With Original Colouring

[Black Dragon]

For Black Dragon's Request

Up Side Down, With Original Colouring

Looks really good so far as a prototype. It just needs a longer hilt, it's meant to be a hand-and-half sword.

[Major Ursa]

Redraw

[Black Dragon]

[FONT="Book Antiqua"]Redraw

Okay:

1. Let's make the handguard resemble the wings more instead of having them imbedded in it.

2. The blade needs to be longer as well. You can use this as a reference for the blade-hilt proportions


3. There's a character that's supposed to be on the blade near the hilt, it's on the original diagram I posted in the request topic.

4. Lastly, we should try making the orb in the handguard a bit bigger.

[Major Ursa]

This the idea?

[Black Dragon]

This the idea?

Almost, just need the hilt... Let's say an inch longer. After that I guess we can start cleaning it up so we can color. It's coming out well so far though.

[Major Ursa]

Errr....add an inch? Which proportion?
XD

[Black Dragon]

Errr....add an inch? Which proportion?
XD

You can keep the handguard as it, the hilt should just be a little longer. In this pic, it only looks long enough for one hand.

[Major Ursa]

For tobiax's Request

[tobiax]

Pretty cool. I like the wild, wolf-like look. Honestly, I can't remember if the legs are armored, or if I just failed at drawing the legs in the reference image. Anyway, the sword is really cool, and if I had him under a different theme, I'd keep it like that, however, could you maybe make the blade shorter, and a bit thinner near the hilt/guard, if not thinner overall? Maybe make the eyes bigger, add his headband, and perhaps put his scabbard and shield upon his back as well? Overall, really good, thanks. However, a little more intelligence/less were-wolf attribute in the design would be nice, if that's not too much to ask...