I guess there's been some editing or something, because there was a post in the IC thread as they were taking the cargo ship that just the grammar and pacing were bad. Like it literally gave me a headache from how disjointed it seemed. Now everything seems fine and readable to me so I don't know what to tell you. I need to make a post but I'm not sure the fate of this RP and how it is.
Great minds discuss ideas. Average minds discuss events. Small minds talk about people.
Imagination is the preview of life's coming attractions.
Chance favors the prepared mind.