lol i was tired as hell im sorry it'll be an easy fix@darkness alright, i looked it over, he's as good as accepted, I'll put him in the roster soon
@hikari alright, the edits are good but i see you added in another active ability in there. Heavenly force seems like it would be a bit too op, your blade is already versatile enough that avoiding getting his at all would be hard to do, if you turn every small cut into a dismembering strike then your character would be unbeatable. if you want a second power that's fine, but make it a passive ability please.
@zio For the powers, please convert them to the same format that everyone else is using where you give each power a name and a short description. As for the powers themselves, I'm fine with your character having a 'spidey sense' that warns them of danger, but I can't accept a perfect defense type of power that will block absolutely anything, even things that would be completely impossible for the user themselves to block through their own physical limitations. i know you highlighted how the ability itself can injure its user since it can push them beyond their limits, but still, that is simply too overpowerd of an ability, please change it to something else, preferably an active ability since your 'danger sense' is already a passive ability.
@kestrel alright, while I'm sad to hear that i do understand your decision. i hope you do come up with another cs before all the spots are filled my friend.
@Kingpanda first off, your link is broken lol, might want to fix that. Secondly, your blade can't have switched families; your character has to be a direct descendant of a disciple for him to wield one of the 10 weapons. Also, please specify that the weapon is a nodachi and not a katana in the weapon section proper as well.
Now, for the powers; as i have stated before, these are meant to be holy weapons and while I'll be willing to work with people who want to have somewhat more brutish or dark powers, there is a limit as to how far the boundaries can be pushed. A blade that feeds on the death of those you slay is most certainly a demonic weapon. Similarly, the necromancer ability that relies on him absorbing the souls of the dead then bringing them back would not be possible. The best i can do for you is give you an ability where the blade can control nearby souls and spirits. as for the third ability, well as a rule of thumb I only let people have 2 abilities to begin with (the only exception so far has been blandman, whom i know personally and have rped with several times, and with whom i discussed his powers through skype before he even posted the character) but since you'll be taking out the first ability i guess that's inconsequential now. Still, I'm not exactly a fan of senbonzakura-type abilities, since they often complicate things in roleplays, and I'm not seeing how this ability fits in with the theme of your character at all. I'll ask that you find another ability to replace this one please.
as for the history... i'm usually not really that uptight about typos, lord knows i make my fair share, but please, work on your grammar, i'm thinking that English must be your second language but if not, please try and clean up your writing. it would be 'invision himself' not 'themselves', 'Most strongest' is not a term, it's just 'strongest', 'the weak were to be destroyed' since it's plural. I assume you mean being IN a happy family?
Also, prince of blades? Really? That's not a grammatical error but it's just kind of... pretentious. firstly that's not exactly a title they would give to anyone in the 21st century, really kind of outdated terminology and remember that nearly everyone else in this rp has been practicing with weapons their whole lives as well, and they all have the blood of the disciples running through their veins just like you character does. While your character would be impressive by regular human standards, there's no way he would be so superior to the other disciple families that he alone would shine as 'the prince' in the art of swordsmanship.
*sighs* ok what? he touched the blade and instantly learned about everything? No, just no. Your character will have to have learned about their legacy and the legend of massamune and muramasa by having their parents teach it to him and teach him about their holy duty just like everyone else.
also, your character doesn't need to kill his father, his father is a foreigner who doesn't have the blood of the disciples in him, he would be incapable of becoming the next head anyways. If your character was given the nodachi to touch then he would be guaranteed to be the next head anyways, and unless his mother is some sort of lady-of-war that has trained in the nodachi's use and refuses to make him the next head until she herself is dead, as a prodigious son there really should be no need for him to force her to give up her position, it's guaranteed to him anyways, seriously.
Needless to say, the whole "absorbed his family's power into his blade" bit needs to go as well as i already stated that i wouldn't let that be your sword's ability.