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    Dusk Washing over Heaven Buio DiAngelo's Avatar
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    fine, i can respect that
    the problem with awesome roleplays is they attract awesome players, and the problem with having awesome players is they usually fuck up in awesome ways, and require awesome explanations to correct their awesome mistakes.



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    ooooooh, noxx, why you hurt me so? I love wukong lore, but bladman already has a quarterstaff weapon, so i can't allow your character to have one as well (even if it does change size). also, the rp will be taking place n tokyo so the jungle sense ability would be pretty much useless.

    other than that though, i love the character
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    I could change her into a spear user (if not how about a giant crossbow or a fist type weapon user)
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    Ana is already a spear user sadly. We yet to have anyone using either a crossbow or fist weapons though ^^. maybe give her a pair of tonfa? they seem to fit with her general style and you could keep the extending/retracting ability that way, even if you can't keep the sun wukong myth behind the ability
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    Nah iv already got a completely new character in mind with a fist weapon (it involves a panda)

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    ... *blinks... pinches the bridge of his nose* please tell me you aren't a WoW fan
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    I hate WoW XD but in not above saying the Mist of Pandaria cinematic wasn't awesome...Btw i didnt put this in the Bio but Poma is sealed within a talisman on May's hip so theres not a six foot tall kong-fu panda walking with her all the time she chooses when to release it

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    I like the character, but a few things, firstly, her powers. this is just personal opinion but wouldn't a name like Fangs of the Earth or even Rising Earth be more appropriate for the first ability? It doesn't really seem to make anything 'tumble', but again just personal opinion, secondly, you said the earth spikes 'chase' after the enemy, do you mean that they home in on the enemy if they try to dodge? if so, then I'm going to have to ask you to limit the range of the ability to a few meters, ten at most. If they don't 'home in' on the enemy, then I'll allow you to remove that limit, letting her attack anyone with the ability as long as she has a clear line of sight on them.

    as for her history there is nothing 'wrong' with it, but it does need to be expanded on. Only people with blood of the disciples in them can A: wield the weapons and B: know about their existence. If the monks at the temple (since it isn't japanese it wouldn't be called a dojo), were guarding the gauntlet then that means they were one of the ten families, so then which one of her parents was part of their clan, her mother or her father, if her mom, why wasn't she made aware that she was part of their family? if her father, then why did the then head of the clan (since May would have to be the head to wield the weapon, or at least a close cousin, with the supposed head having passed away) do something like rape a brothel girl without consequence, especially if he is from a family of monks?

    Also, the big panda, I'll allow your character to possess him only on the explicit condition that he be a spirit animal only, he can be seen by others if you want, but not felt, she can't have him helping her out in a fight (not directly anyways).
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    Its from her mothers side, the thing i was trying to get at (and failed at doing) was that the family and the weapon were separated at some point in time which is why the gantlets are embedded in stone and the temple was simply built around it once the monks realized just what they were. They figured the day would come when someone with the same aura as the weapon would appear, which is what Poma is for i wanted Poma to be the spirit of the owner of the gauntlets. Its fine if Poma only serves as a guide to her a teacher of sorts. The thing about the first attack it doesn't home in on the target it will continue in a straight line but don't think that makes it an easy dodge the attack travels fast

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    I'm just posting this to reserve the weapons. I'll finish history later. Have to stop starting on things when I'm already half asleep. Don't you just hate people like me? :P






    鋼鉄に咲く華は罪の味
    そして悪の華咲き乱れるとき




    鋼鉄に咲く華は蜜の味
    咲かないで華、惡の蕾を摘む


    咲けよ華 罪の芽をだして
    咲けよ華 支配されていく蕾
    咲けよ華 罪の根をはって
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