Reply With QuoteYour character is fine, just don't go opening oblivion gates, or something lol It's fine, she's waiting for the right opportunity to come out and a glowing man, speaking in a demonic tone isn't the right one
Nope, he is kinda like a puppet/mouthpiece but if his enemies THINK he is about to unleash hell all the better.
But yeah if you want me to change/add anything to make it clearer or more cohesive lemme know. I wish more people would crit my writing so I could get better.
Sorry I didn't acknowledge you in the post Sadie, I think Silas is a bit preoccupied trying to say Orin's soul from Molag Bal. But yes the edits are better
Your character is fine, just don't go opening oblivion gates, or something lol It's fine, she's waiting for the right opportunity to come out and a glowing man, speaking in a demonic tone isn't the right one
Last edited by Sadie; 11-19-2012 at 10:41 PM. Reason: Grammer
No, he has no daedric powers himself. He is simply a vessel. Not to say he isn't deadly, he is.Originally Posted by Sadie
You're character is fine, just don't go opening oblivion gates, or something lol It's fine, she's waiting for the right opportunity to come out and a glowing man, speaking in a demonic tone isn't the right one
Yeah, not a great time o come strolling into camp. But Rinn did just spill all sorts of valuables onto the ground there. Jus' sayin'
I wasn't sure if I'd be able to see them without coming out. I'll see what Jack does first
Lol or a torn up smoking/bleeding man with a knife screaming at her don't help much either.
Nah your good silas. Just confused me a bit. I'm clear now. No problem man I'm weird when it comes to writing anyway. So I'm not one to criticize. Otherwise your welcome to comment on my posts as well.
Last edited by Jack Rinner; 11-19-2012 at 11:19 PM.
Kay, for starters: Don't call me thatLol or a torn up smoking/bleeding man with a knife screaming at her don't help much either.
Nah your good silas. Just confused me a bit. I'm clear now. No problem man I'm weird when it comes to writing anyway. So I'm not one to criticize. Otherwise your welcome to comment on my posts as well.
I'm too what now? Busty? I am a gentleman, good sir. LOOOOLLLL. Making me laugh, Rinn.Lol or a torn up smoking/bleeding man with a knife screaming at her don't help much either.
Nah your good silas. Just confused me a bit. I'm clear now. No problem man I'm weird when it comes to writing anyway. So I'm not one to criticize. Otherwise your welcome to comment on my posts as well.
I really do like constructive crit, and I try and give it out when possible but even though I need it and ask for it it makes me so paranoid everytime, haha.
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I'm intoxicated and sha-ll ref4rain from posting xD
Well. Glad you are having a nice evening Mr. Ewok. LOL
Jack's only teasing
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