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    Quote Originally Posted by Asperser View Post
    Name: Claus Weismann
    Alignment: Neutral
    Age: 12
    Gender: Female
    Race: Human

    Physical Description:
    Claus is a young girl about the age of 12. She wears a lab coat, eyeglasses, and a simple white watch that has no numbers on it. She has brown hair and black eyes. She has the physique of a normal twelve year old girl and cannot sustain any rapid movements other than running for more than two minutes. It takes ten minutes for her to get tired from running and about ten minutes for her to recover her stamina if she is exhausted.

    Personality Description:
    Claus is a cheerful, optimistic, inquisitive, and individualistic person who loves discovering how things work. She is driven by her desire for knowledge and will often pause in a conversation should she see something that interests her. Her goal in life is to remove the limitations imposed by the natural laws on science so that one day anyone may create their ideal world.

    Skills, Powers, and Abilities:
    Genius: Claus is a genius. She has photographic memory and can process mathematically complicated equations within a few minutes. She can mimic any particular task as long as she’s been shown once, since she has photographic memory, and is physically capable of doing it, though it takes a few days for her to become completely proficient in the task.

    Programmer: Claus loves machines. They are the mankind’s greatest inventions; impervious to small-arms fire and far more efficient than the average human. She looks at machines with the awe and wonder. The possibilities for such creations are limitless. As such, the girl is a talented programmer, well-versed in programming languages and code. She can hack and interface with the common desktop within a few minutes and hack more complicated missile defense algorithms within an hour or two.

    Combat Savy: Claus isn’t the most well-trained of child soldiers, but the girl knows the basics of hand-to-hand combat through actual combat and manuals. Her physique as a child, however, greatly impairs her when paired against an adult of similar or greater skill.

    Equipment:
    AK-47
    9x19mm Walther P99, German semi-automatic pistol

    Character History:
    To be added later. Just know she’s a child soldier.
    Yeah, accepted in my opinion. I'll let Khan or Tantalum or whoever else is actually accepting make the final decision.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Asperser View Post
    Name: Claus Weismann
    Alignment: Neutral
    Age: 12
    Gender: Female
    Race: Human

    Physical Description:
    Claus is a young girl about the age of 12. She wears a lab coat, eyeglasses, and a simple white watch that has no numbers on it. She has brown hair and black eyes. She has the physique of a normal twelve year old girl and cannot sustain any rapid movements other than running for more than two minutes. It takes ten minutes for her to get tired from running and about ten minutes for her to recover her stamina if she is exhausted.

    Personality Description:
    Claus is a cheerful, optimistic, inquisitive, and individualistic person who loves discovering how things work. She is driven by her desire for knowledge and will often pause in a conversation should she see something that interests her. Her goal in life is to remove the limitations imposed by the natural laws on science so that one day anyone may create their ideal world.

    Skills, Powers, and Abilities:
    Genius: Claus is a genius. She has photographic memory and can process mathematically complicated equations within a few minutes. She can mimic any particular task as long as she’s been shown once, since she has photographic memory, and is physically capable of doing it, though it takes a few days for her to become completely proficient in the task.

    Programmer: Claus loves machines. They are the mankind’s greatest inventions; impervious to small-arms fire and far more efficient than the average human. She looks at machines with the awe and wonder. The possibilities for such creations are limitless. As such, the girl is a talented programmer, well-versed in programming languages and code. She can hack and interface with the common desktop within a few minutes and hack more complicated missile defense algorithms within an hour or two.

    Combat Savy: Claus isn’t the most well-trained of child soldiers, but the girl knows the basics of hand-to-hand combat through actual combat and manuals. Her physique as a child, however, greatly impairs her when paired against an adult of similar or greater skill.

    Equipment:
    AK-47
    9x19mm Walther P99, German semi-automatic pistol

    Character History:
    To be added later. Just know she’s a child soldier.


    Looks fine, just barely T3 though. :K

    A little info on Equipment would be nice to, like ammunition, range, etc.

    Everything else looks fine. ;I


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    Removed Carl The Zombie for being T4. CrazyScion resubmit the sheet if you wish to reuse the character. There are a few things that need to be adjusted.

    In particular,

    Carl also has the ability to recover from injuries after a battle depending on the level of damage. About an hour to recover from getting all his limbs cut off, half a day if he is smashed, or blown to bits, and 2 or more days if he is nearly vaporized.
    You can't regenerate from battle this quickly. It must takes weeks or months, relatively the same amount of time it would take for a normal human being to recover from such injuries.

    Being a zombie comes with the usual zombie benefits meaning: He never fatigues, has no limit on muscle restraint(might break his own arm cause of this), unaffected by sickness, and pain affects, can't be critically hit( has no living vital organs), and is very resistant to nonlethal damage. Zombies also come with a wide array of immuneities like: mind-affecting effects, poison, sleep, paralysis, stunning, ability drain, or energy drain, and death effects.
    Immunities are not allowed. No fatigue is not allowed. Moving requires energy regardless of whether you are dead or alive. You must have fatigue. You must have critical damage allowed to your character, regardless of whether you don't depend on organs to survive, otherwise, you are no longer T3.

    Wind up pistol: The wind up pistol is a sort of strange gun that utilizes different forms of energy. The gun appears to be a toy at a glance. The head of the gun is a fog Grey cone, and the back is circular with two bronze rings on each side with holes in the middle. It has an iron grip with a piece of electrical tape tied around it, and a nub that acts as a trigger. Instead of ammo it uses bronze colored wind up keys, with engravings on them that represent the different forms of energy control. Each key functions differently, but is controlled by the users intent. The different keys supply the pistol with a specific kind of energy to control. For example the key with fire engraved on one side and ice on the other would be the control of heat energy. The pistol could be used to heat or cool something, and any other applicable uses of heat control, for example creating shifting air currents by utilizing hot and cold area's, but that's just an example of it's potential. There's a key for every natural energy like momentum, sound, light, electricity, radiation, heat, gravity(lost), magnetism, nuclear and static. A maximum of 2 keys can be used at once allowing for interesting combinations, and if to many are used to quickly the gun will over heat and experience a 4 and a half minute cool down period, accompanied by a nice music box song during the wait. Most keys either have a limited amount of shots they can make, 10 being the most common, or a time limit for use,30 sec. being the most common. Through some kind of good fortune he obtained this weapon from a strange man he encountered on his travels. He has a small pouch to carry the many keys tied to his leg, and usually keeps the pistol in his pocket, tucked in his pants, or even tries to keep it in his sleeve with tap.
    A wind-up pistol that shoots a wide variety of raw energy is not T3. Gravity and Nuclear manipulation is specifically not T3. Also, static energy needs to be defined. There is no such thing as "static energy". There is potential energy, the energy state of resting objects, Ex: A rock leaning over the edge of a cliff has energy pulling down on it from gravity. a.k.a. potential energy.
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    Turned all immunities to resistances, and added his head as a critical point, and increased his healing to current RP standards. If you didn't notice Asp I said the Gravity key was (lost). I added the tag to Nuclear to. As for multi use energy. How is this any different from a multi elemental mage beyond being more specific and explained on the energy used.

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    You can't regenerate from battle this quickly. It must takes weeks or months, relatively the same amount of time it would take for a normal human being to recover from such injuries.
    While I ultimately have little to no say - I don't think this should apply, honestly.

    If you're allowing in fantasy characters(and not just restricting them to being human), the healing restriction should be removed; or just tell everyone to be human and that there will be some big event that'll turn everyone into their chosen race once they level up.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Rilla View Post
    While I ultimately have little to no say - I don't think this should apply, honestly.

    If you're allowing in fantasy characters(and not just restricting them to being human), the healing restriction should be removed; or just tell everyone to be human and that there will be some big event that'll turn everyone into their chosen race once they level up.
    Rilla's opinion is denied, but more seriously it's because such healing powers are above the tier. If you want to be a ghastly ghoul who happens to traverse "dimensional warps" and be immune to every type of damage. I'm going to deny you regardless. Doesn't matter what race you are. You have to be toned down for this RP.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Crazy Scion View Post
    Turned all immunities to resistances, and added his head as a critical point, and increased his healing to current RP standards. If you didn't notice Asp I said the Gravity key was (lost). I added the tag to Nuclear to. As for multi use energy. How is this any different from a multi elemental mage beyond being more specific and explained on the energy used.
    I don't know what (lost) means. I'm not sure why you would think that means anything. lol. If he can't do it don't add it to the character sheet. Look at my character sheet before and after. If I'm not using a power I take it all out so people reading it do not get confused.

    For your "energy" gun. It's denied because it's too powerful. An Nuclear/Atomic reaction creates explosions on the level of an atom bomb. You can't be exploding over a kiloton of explosives with every shot. Static Energy being able to break molecular bonds = I can kill anyone with one hit because I can break the molecular bonds of anything with my gun. Your gun is too powerful. Magnetism = I'm as powerful as Magneto and I can destroy the entire earth because I can control magnetic fields with my gun. That's too powerful. You have not put in limits or accurately described anything your gun can do. You've only said it has power over pretty much all matter and energy in existence.

    Since I have no idea how your gun works or what limits these power are. It is denied. It also makes no sense to me why a zombie would have such an overpowered gun. Zombies I remember tend to have hatchets and machetes not energy guns. It doesn't fit your character.


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    Quote Originally Posted by Asperser View Post

    I don't know what (lost) means. I'm not sure why you would think that means anything. lol. If he can't do it don't add it to the character sheet. Look at my character sheet before and after. If I'm not using a power I take it all out so people reading it do not get confused.

    For your "energy" gun. It's denied because it's too powerful. An Nuclear/Atomic reaction creates explosions on the level of an atom bomb. You can't be exploding over a kiloton of explosives with every shot. Static Energy being able to break molecular bonds = I can kill anyone with one hit because I can break the molecular bonds of anything with my gun. Your gun is too powerful. Magnetism = I'm as powerful as Magneto and I can destroy the entire earth because I can control magnetic fields with my gun. That's too powerful. You have not put in limits or accurately described anything your gun can do. You've only said it has power over pretty much all matter and energy in existence.

    Since I have no idea how your gun works or what limits these power are. It is denied. It also makes no sense to me why a zombie would have such an overpowered gun. Zombies I remember tend to have hatchets and machetes not energy guns. It doesn't fit your character.

    THank you, glad i'm not hte only one that finds a zombie using such a uber hecks gun is out of place. >.>

    Talk about plot hole.


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