[Continuum 2.0] Character Submission Thread

[Asperser]

@Crazy Scion

I've been busy these last few days so I haven't had a lot of time to look at things lately. There was only one thing I recall seeing wrong with your character and it was the wording of this particular paragraph. The rest of it reads fine.

The Momentum Key in contact range is capable of knocking a stationary object of 200 pounds, 10 feet through the air, with one shot. A fully charged shot at blank range can deliver enough force to propel an object of 200 pound 150 feet through the air, or propel an object or person 1500 pound 10 feet through the air and everything in between.

You can't propel a person one-hundred and fifty feet into the air.

[Crazy Scion]

The Momentum Key in contact range is capable of knocking a stationary object of 200 pounds, 7 feet through the air, with one shot. A fully charged shot at blank range can deliver enough force to propel an object of 200 pounds 70 feet through the air, or propel an object of 2000 pounds 7 feet through the air and everything in between.

Reduced the power. I understand actually. I'm having finals week right now, and it seems so are many others, but I hope after this week or next week that things will pick back up.

Carl the Zombie
Name: Carl
Age: 80
Species: Undead
Alignment: chaotic good
Appearance:

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Physical Traits:
Carl is fairly tall and stands at a solid 6 feet. His body amplifies his tall appearance being of a slim built with thin, but tough arms and legs. When Carl was alive, he preferred to do work outs that strengthened his muscles rather than bulk up. He was stronger than he looked, and could run like a track star. His clothes are his casual street clothes with the exception of his jacket being the same he wore when he still attended school. Carl’s hair appears black, but is actually a really dark brown that one may notice if they parted his hair. His eyes are an orangish brown eyes color, and even seem to burn brightly in pitch darkness.
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Personality Traits:
Carl is a generally carefree guy who worries little about his personal appearance or the opinions of the people around him. He acts like a goofball most of the time, but displays a very serious persona when it is needed. He is dedicated to his morals and views of the world, and truly believes no one is beyond saving. He displays perverted traits towards women, but this usually doesn’t get passed verbal abuse. Lastly Carl has an unnatural loves of cute things, and this is even reflected in his taste in women.
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Super Natural Physical Traits:
After dying some of Carl’s physical characteristics were altered. His body acted more like it was dying, then actually dead. It withers at a very slow rate, but is not completely dead. The magic used to resurrect him still utilized his some of his existing functions to keep him going.
His brain was still somewhat active and ran his five senses for his body. This made his head a weak point, because if it got damaged then all of his sense would become dull and his thoughts would be hazy.
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His muscles still functioned as well, but were now triggered trough magic instead since motor nerves were damaged when he died. He also lost his since of pain after being resurrected, but he did manage to retain some of his sense of touch and can still feel things somewhat throughout his body, but more normally with his more sensitive parts like his hands or lips.
His skin is still active, and as well as still allowing him to feel, keeps bugs and bacteria from freely making residents in his body, but not as well as before.
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Carl’s brain didn’t retain its regulations on muscle restraint and this gave Carl access to his body’s full potential. The human mind usually only allows us to use a 1/10 to 1/15 of are total strength. This is to prevent the human body from tearing its self apart through its own power. This allowed Carl to jump to the top of a 2 story building, comfortably run at almost 30 miles an hour on a flat surface with no obstacles, and lift 300 pounds over his head. As impressive as his abilities have become his body was still human, and exerting to much force will cause his body to rip apart. Muscles would tear and weaken as well as his bones being at risk of snapping under the pressure. Carl tries to limit himself to normal activities to keep his body from being destroyed to quickly.
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Carl’s body doesn't fatigue since his body no longer runs on air or food, but he can run out of energy and collapse. Carl often doesn't have enough energy for more than a few of hours of strenuous activity before his magic runs to low.
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Supernatural Abilities and Magic:
Carl was revived through nature magic instead of through standard necromancy. His body was flooded with nature magic as a way to grant his body life. This caused him to become part of nature and able to regenerate his body much the way a plant grows back its limbs. Carl doesn't need to sleep, but if his body is running low on energy or if he is damaged, then he can regenerate his body and recharge his magic by sleeping in soil. His body draws in nutrients and minerals to recover the ones lost, as well as absorb life energies from earth its self to regenerate his magic supply. Carl can’t recover unless he is completely submerged in dirt, and the dirt has to have minerals and life in it.
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Carl can sink into the earth and freely move about as fast as a normal person would be able to run (15mph), but this costs him twice as much energy as running normally, and will cause him to run out of magic faster than if he were to simply walk. Carl cannot burrow through solid rock nor can he go through cement, but he is able to loosen and move rocks if they don’t weigh more than 300 pounds.
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Equipment:
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Weapon Exterior Appearance: The wind up Gun has a similar shape to a toy gun a stereo typical SiFi alien would wield. The head of the gun is a small grey cone shape attached to the end of a rectangular body. The back of the gun looks like that of a normal pistol, but the hammer seems to have been removed. The body is a rusted brown color, and there are to bronze rings on the side of the gun where the bullet chamber would be. The original grip for the gun looks like it was sawed off and in its place was welded an iron grip, like the kind one would see on a rifle with a piece of electrical tape rapped around it. In the place of the trigger is a nub similar to a switch on a flash light.
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Weapon internal Workings: The Wind up Gun can be opened by twisting the two for mentioned bronze rings as well as the cone counter clock wise and popping them off. This reveals a series of screws with star shaped heads that need a special screw driver to remove. After removing the screws the gun can be pulled into two halves revealing an intricate internal working of watch gears and music box guts, but the unusual thing about the gun would be that the music box wheel is a dark shifting rainbow in appearance it glows lightly, vibrates, emits a quiet sound, and will even shock on contact.
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Chaos Crystal: The fore mentioned wheel is a Chaos Crystal. This crystal was created as a way to store several different types of energy in one place. It collects all kinds of energy from its surrounding and converts it to chaos energy, a shifting energy that is constantly changing from one energy type to another.
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Random Functionality: The wind up Guns handle can fold behind the gun so it can be held like a bladed weapon. The switch on the watch is similar to a light switch, can be pushed either forwards or backwards to activates the keys and springs back in place.
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The Wind up Keys: The Wind up Keys were created as a way to take the stored energy in the chaos crystal and convert it into usable energy. Each key represents a natural energy type, the types being momentum, heat, sound, light, electricity, magnetism, nuclear, gravity, and static. Each key is imbued with an entity of each type of energy. The entities are like the essence of the energy or a being of that energy, they aren't sentient things though, but are simply used to control the energy. When a key is applied to the Wind up Gun the entity inside it starts converting the stored power in the Chaos crystal and uses it to grant the user control of its energy. An example would be that a being of pure force resides in the momentum Key and when applied to the Wind up Gun converts stored energy to momentum, and can be used to manipulate force.
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Rules of the wind up pistol:
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Keys can only be used for duration of 30 seconds at a time before needing to be rewound, and take 10 seconds to wind.
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At the cost of 3 seconds of duration, each key can fire up to 10 shots.
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The power of additional shots can be added, by charging for 2 seconds for every additional shot added. (This is to add a bigger affect to a single shot)
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Only 5 keys can be used before recharge is needed
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The charge station for the Wind up Gun is set in Carl’s bike He sticks it in a slot in the dash and it will start charging while a music box song plays.
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The Bike: Created by the Police engineering departments Richard Homily. It was a bike made in combination with a strange device almost the size of a fridge that was given to Carl with the Wind up Gun to help recharge it. It was too big to carry, but ran on a simple electrical current. Richard designed the bike to disguise the device and to give it mobility so Carl could use it in the field. The bike has slow acceleration due to the weight, but can get up to a 120 miles on a long stretch of road.
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Wind up pistol Keys:
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The Momentum Key: The Key with a fist engraved on it is the control of momentum or specifically force. Momentum is the name given to the amount of force an object in motion has. The Momentum key is a control of moving forces, and it can be used to augment the user’s movement or the movement of objects.
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When charged into shots, it can deliver waves of momentum in the form of giant spheres of about 5 feet in diameter that are capable of knocking things around. The sphere’s travel at about 15 miles an hour, but despite their speed, this attack is fairly short rang due to the air molecules that are hit by the blast, slowly eating away at the momentum energy. After a distance of only 7 feet, most of the energy is converted entirely into 30 mile an hour wind currents.
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The Momentum Key in contact range is capable of knocking a stationary object of 200 pounds, 7 feet through the air, with one shot. A fully charged shot at blank range can deliver enough force to propel an object of 200 pounds 70 feet through the air, or propel an object of 2000 pounds 7 feet through the air and everything in between.
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Anyone hit by momentum force won't feel like they've been hit by anything. It is more like there body just picked up speed in the direction they were hit. One can resist being blown away by the momentum force the same way they would deal with a punch. By braising for it, dodging it, or even overpowering it.
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If the user amplifies their body’s forces, they’ll have enough force in a punch or kick to crack stone on impact, if they don’t weigh over 200 pounds they can add 15 mph to their speed, and if they aren't using too much force, are able change the direction of their body movement in unnatural ways, this is more for his arms or legs, and less effective if it's the whole body.

[Bloodbayne]

I'll edit.whatever i need to. I know there a lot of unnecessary periods. But I type a lot.on my phone.

Name: Aero

Age: 31 Bodily Appearance: 20

Race: Cursed Elementalist

Alignment: Neutral Evil

Personality: Cold and indifferent. The life that has been his torture has brought him to turn his back on society. This has been known to lead to uneasy and awkward moments with more than most people.

Appearance - Aero stands at a height of 6'0 and weighs approximately 300 lbs and has a medium athletic build. He has onyx black hair which reaches to his shoulders and piercing dark red eyes. His mouth a nose are covered by a leather strapped metallic facial mask. The mask holds no designs upon its front save for thick vertical stripes embedded.within the metal. His upper body is often covered in a form fitting black cotton shirt which covers halfway down his upper arms. His left arm has a slab.of.metal which covers his forearm between the elbow and wrist on the topside. His legs are.adorned with plain black slacks.and.his feet thick soled black boots into which his pant legs are fed. He carries.no weapons as he is able to create his own when he.needs them.

As a child, Aero was born into an elite clan of elementalists which fought in the name of the their god, the light diety Milena. Aero showed a superior affinity to the natural elements as a child, which was taken to mean his connection to Milena was stronger than most. This came as both a blessing as well as a curse and each in their own time as time grew on, battles were fought and men were lost. The clan was at a point of desperation, coming to a joint belief that if they were to simply sacrifice the most holy of their people. By this point Aero was a young child, only 8 years old but already much further along with his teachings than the rest of the clans younger members. The clan elders snuck into his house one dark night, binding him up before taking him away into forest and its darkness, in search of what would remain of an old church that had once housed praisers of the dark lord Razza

Inside of this church they unearthed what remainied of a secret tunnel beneath the preachers podium and dragged the boy along with them. At the end of this tunnel they found a sacrificial chamber, which held a stone podium at its center. There they layed the boy upon the stone slab and fastened his hands and feet to its surface, trapping the boy in place. One by one they began to chant and pray as their leader produced a knife from his robe, a thin dagger with a black diamond pressed into the center of the hilt. Aero cried out constantly in protest, tears staining his cheeks as the men simply continued with their ritual, bring the knife to his right wrist. A sharp cry rang through the air as the edge of the knife tore through Aeros wrist and artery, before the same was done to his left. The blood which poured from his body was captured within two which had been carved into the stone, the official spot for the blood offering. The fight was drained from Aero as fast as the blood from his body and soon he lost consciousness before the life faded from his body.


As the boy died on the slab, Razza grabbed ahold of the offered soul with little to no delay, basking in the sheer power the soul possessed and its connection with Milena. Rather than devour the soul he nurtured it, holding its connection with Aeros body to keep it alive for the moment. Razza.forced his chaotic energy upon Aeros soul to remove whatever would remain of the boys former self. The thoughts and feelings he would have would no longer be his own and his powers would resemble his as well, though they would grow on their own. Following this Razza returned the boys soul to his body and the power it now held caused the elders to halt their leave and turn back to look at the boys body.

They watched in joint silence as the boys body twitched and jerked lightly on the stone slab and upon closer inspection they found the bowls of blood had begun to boil and slowly crawl back to the open wounds on his body. As the last droplet of blood found its way home Aeros eyes suddenly reopened, no trace of any color but black as a single pulsation sounded from his body and seemed to shake the earth. The elders felt the negative.presence within the boy and prepared to fight him, though as the boy showed while tearing free of his restraints, the men were doomed. The boy still seemed well aware of the training.he had previously had, as his control over the elements was shown. What made it different however was the energy that seemed to lace every attack, a dark energy that seemed to permiate the Mena bodys. The man that died last had the will sapped from his body, and as the boy towered over his cowering form he only shut his eyes before crushing the man's skull beneath his foot, and.passing out on the floor.


the boy woke to find himself on the floor and surrounded by a puddle of blood with no memory, he fled into the darkness of he night; he was alone but unafraid. There were always voices.in the back of his mind, telling him to do bad things and other times good things, a.mixture of the light and dark presences in his body.

As the years passed word finally began to spread around about what had happened and while the details were skewed the results were abundant none the less. He was labeled as a demon and a bounty was placed upon his head at age 14, though he looked to be 10 now, and his days soon became dedicated to traversing the shadows.


At age 16 Aeros health began to take a drastic turn for the worst, feeling on a daily basis as though his body was simply devouring itself. The Chaos.energy within his body had begun to grow in power over the years and had evolved slightly. Aero found that it had a knack of overpowering and/or overwhelming other energy he faced with the bounty hunters after him. Because of this it was attempting to overtake Aero completely, attempting to.replace all his blood cells with pieces of itself, which sped up the comparable decay Aero was faced with. After some nosing around Aero.caught word an old wizard who could help his situation, Mitsurashi was his name and he was said to be knowledged enough to help Aero and.so he sought.him out.

The wizard Mitsurashi told Aero the procedure to save his body was not guaranteed to work and would kill if it did not succeed, something inside him told him he would be fine. The procedue began with Aero lying on a large crystal slab for energy magnification and the wizard produced an empty crystal ball the size of a coconut. He explained that the orb would absorb every bit of energy within Xaviers body within the orb and free him of its ill effects, but the old man did not fully understand the situation in which he had.gotten himself. The orb was.placed upon Aeros bare chest after the wizard had put him to sleep and he began to channel his own powers between the orb and Aero to help their connection. At the very moment he did this he was.overwhelmed by a feeling of sadness and despair before he could feel the energy being sucked from his body.


The wizard had attempted to grasp and pull Aeros.energy into the orb and had unknowingly opened a 2 way door, through which the chaotic energy reached out and grasped hold of the wizards power to draw it out. Slowly both their energies slipped into the orb before the energy began to heat the orb enough to melt into Aeros chest, repairing the damage once it positioned itself behind his sternum. Over a period of 3 days Aeros body grew and changed around this new life source, connecting nerve endings and veins to provide the new power to the body. It caused a much faster decay process to overtake Aeros body as his organs slowly dwindled away to nothing.

Aero awoke a week later, 3 days after the process had finished and noted how warm it felt comared to the day before as well as the fact that he seemed unplagued by the need to breathe. This.brought about a smile and he decides take in a breath anyway, which caused him to curl over in pain before reeling back at the sight of the dead wizard. His body was shriveled and sunken in as though he has been dead for months, the sight churned his stomach and reminded him of the first day he can remember and it brought a shiver down his spine. The pain brought him to look towards a chest in the wizards home, one he had told him stored the pieces his body would now require.

Reaching into the box Aero first took out what appeared to be a black facial mask made of a single sheet steel, the back of the mask was solid and formed to cover his nose; designed to restrict air flow to the body. Using a leather strap and metal clasp Aero fastened this piece of equipment to his face, it restricted his jaw to a certain point but still allowed him to speak. The next piece he removed was a plate of black steel armor which was lines on the bottom with several thin needles designed to feed off the energy in his body. Upon placing it on he grimaced slightly but the pain left quickly as his body adhered to the new piece of equipment. The last object within the trunk was an icicle shaped crystal which resembled the material the orb within his chest was made of. Doing a bit of research in the wizards home revealed it to be a type of energy focusing crystal, to be used to introduce new energy into the orb or focus what's already there. He took these items and disappeared into the night after setting the house ablaze.

15 years later down the road, Aero age 31 and constantly training himself, the two conflicting factions had continued to assault one another and grow as more and more were recruited to each side. War was now at hand, and Razza had the advantage of having Aero on his side of the battle. With the aid of a large army at his side Aero struck down the opposing forces in mere hours, laying waste to their kingdom and homes before returning home.

It was in the midst of their victory celebration that something began to go very wrong. The ground beneath their feet began to tremble and quake like never before as a blinding light shone through the darkness of the night, before a fissure opened beneath their castle and plunged them into darkness. Aero awoke with a start in the middle of a forest, surrounded by thick woodland and a nearby stream. Something about this forest seemed different to him, even the air had a different smell and the voices that had once gnawed at the back of his mind plagued him no longer. It was his time to go down the path he chose.

Physical Advancements

Energy Orb Life Support System - This orb which resides directly beneath Aeros sternum has helped to change his body in many ways, as it has allowed the energy to join with most if not all blood cells in his body. It has allowed his body to be conditioned to move at speeds an average human fighter would find highly difficult to replicate. The energy slowly permiated every muscle and tendon through out his body, improving everything considerably.

Strength - With the energy coursing through his veins and seeping into the muscles, Aeros physical strength is able to top a humans strength 3 fold while appearing in the shape of medium sized toned muscles.

Speed - Due largely in part to his superior strength Aero is able to move with great ease and nimbility. His fastest capable speed is 50 mph on flat ground.

Enhanced Senses - With the energy in his blood stream it was not long before it settled in to Aeros mind, where it helped to nurture the natural response time and overall effectiveness of his sight, hearing and touch, leaving them as well 3 times above average





Energy Description/ Enhancement & General Abilities


Elementalist - Due to his birth into a clan of elementalists Aero possessrs control over the earth, fire, water, lightning and wind. Most of the abilities suffer drastic changes to their form and effects, but wind and water remain the same.

Dread Energy - The energy itself is mainly comprised of Chaos energy, giving it a natural ability to gradually diminish the general form of an object it comes into contact with. It also has a higher chance of forcing its way through different energy forms with ease. Because of this the base form is more or less harmless and is used mainly to deteriorate armor or weapons. The other energies and skills which Aero possesses merely hold a piece of Dread Energy joined with them, giving them all a light red hue. Without even making contact with a person the energy has the capability of inducing hallucinations and possibly making the.victim go mad. Both of which require prolonged exposure.

Dread Fire - This dark red flame holds many of the same attributes as a normal flame, able to be extinguished with the proper amount of water and the total absence of oxygen. Each flame produced burns at a temperature double what one would expect of a flame of its size. The flames do not spread upon contact, they merely burn on one central area until there is nothing left.

Dread Metal - The process through which Aero acquired this ability was painful and extensive, but well worth the outcome. Utilizing the focusing crystal taken from the wizards home, Aero spent 5 years buried beneath the ground with the crystal embedded into his chest to make contact with the orb while touching the earth. Using his.control over the earth he pulled upon the granules of dirt and extracted their earthen energy signature, forcing it into the orb and his body. Slowly his body began to grab ahold of the new energy and followed the masters.commands as he aligned the energy signature of the earth to that of metal. At the end of the 5th year his blood had morphed to.resemble the form of a reddish liquid metal that could be called.upon at all times, through the pores of his skin. It caused his weight to increase to 300lbs, but it was a burden barely felt and.easily worked with. It also doubled his skin and bones ability to receive damage, almost like wearing thick leather armor at all times and bones of steel. The liquid state of the metal allows an almost limitless number of possibilities for both offense and defense.

Chaotic Stone - When Aero chooses to manipulate the earth around him his Dread Energy is inadvertently transfered into the earth and changes it to Chaotic Stone. The only additional effect this presents the stone with is the ability to radiate the Dread Energy within it as though it were an energy amplifier. If one is within 4 feet an object made of.Chaotic Stone.they will feel the same effects that Dread Energy can cause.

Dread Lightning - Drawing the lightning energy from the orb in his chest Aero is able to channel it almost instantly to.any other part of his body and create a bolt or an orb of red lightning. The bolt is only half the power of a natural lightning bolt, but the energy released into the.body upon contact attempts to attack the brain directly. Because of this the attacks from the lightning bolts Aero creates make the target more susceptible to hallucinations.

[Valeric]

Whoever who is still responsible for accepting characters, please do continue.

[Bloodbayne]

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