[Continuum 2.0] Character Submission Thread

[Asperser]

@Important Nobody's Midow Saleuport

Echolocation- Using ultrasound waves he can sense exactly where something is, given that the waves can bounce off the object and return back to him. It works best within 30 feet before it starts getting "fuzzy". By 80 feet it's so bad that he can hardly tell where anything is unless it's huge.

How does he create ultrasound?

Sonic Boom- It creates a pressure wave as thick as a forearm that can knock away objects as heavy as 200 points if used at close range, but looses power the further away it goes, becoming negligible 20 feet away. The attack can come off anywhere on his body and doesn't need an already existing sound or movement in order to create. This goes for all of his sonic attacks unless otherwise stated

It creates a pressure wave that can knock objects as heavy as 200 points? I did not know points was a measure of weight. There are also no set-up or time needed to power this ability and all his abilities can be used instantly on thought. This is unacceptable. You must also state for clarity how soon he gets tired from using his powers. He should not be spamming sonic booms left and right.

Sonic Blast- A pressure wave extending outwards from all sides of him as powerful as his Sonic Boom attack, working up to a radius of 20 feet. This move obviously uses a more energy then the Sonic Boom and takes a second to charge. He cannot keep an Amplification/Reduction Sphere up when using this move.

A second is not as charge. It takes a second to react and move. No ordinary human can block something that works the instant you decide to attack. Tone your powers down.

Sonic Beam- A concentrated pressure wave fired forward in the form of a beam. It's a much more powerful move then a Sonic Boom, retaining it's full power for as long as 50 feet and knocking back objects up to 300 pounds and possibly tearing objects apart. This takes way more energy then any of his other moves, and requires around five seconds to form his energy into a large pressure wave shaped into a ball in front of both of his outstretched hands. He cannot do anything else during this time or else he looses all the energy put into it up until that point. When fired this creates a very loud sonic boom. He cannot keep an Amplification/Reduction Sphere up when using this move.

Five seconds is not a charge. Five seconds is the time it takes for someone to realize you are doing something and decide to do something to stop you. Also, if it is possible for this attack to tear something apart you must state how it tears things apart and what it can tear apart since it doesn't tear things apart all the time.

EX: My wind slasher attack is a magical spell that sends out a gust of razor sharp winds that tear apart unarmored foes. This attack requires a thirty second incantation to be used. If the person struck by this attack are wearing plate armor or are as hard as a rock this attack simply pushes them back. (Note: That I explain exactly what my attack is. It is a gust of razor sharp winds created by magic. I explain how it is used. It is a thirty second incantation spell. I explain the limits to the ability. It cannot tear apart anything harder than a rock. So anyone reading this ability knows that they can stop me from attacking them from either influencing the magical spell, the current of the wind, my incantation, or hiding behind something as strong as a rock. This is what you call a well explained attack and no one should complain about you cheating or that you are being unfair since they know EXACTLY how it works if they read your sheet. There shouldn't be any guessing games.)

Sonic Bomb- He can send out small ball shaped pressure wave out of his body, control it, and have it explode with a lot of outward pressure and a very large sonic boom. It's as powerful as the Sonic Beam, but shorter lived and a smaller radius of around 5 feet. It also has a charge time of 3 seconds when forming the pressure wave ball in front of a single hand. He cannot keep an Amplification/Reduction Sphere up when using this move.

Three seconds is not a charge. The reasons are the same as the other two. How far can he control the sonic ball?

Matter Vibration- He can vibrate his matter or any matter that he touches, but has yet to develop significant uses for this due to the limit scale that he can use this on, besides helping his swords have more power through vibration.

No guessing games. If it is useful state how it is useful. Swords having more power is too vague.

[Asperser]

@Crazy Scion's Carl the Zombie

Genius. Everything makes sense.

When charged into shots, it can deliver waves of momentum in the form of giant spheres of about 5 feet in diameter that are capable of knocking things around. The sphere’s travel at about 30 miles an hour, but despite their speed, this attack is fairly short rang due to the air molecules that are hit by the blast, slowly eating away at the momentum energy. After a distance of only 10 feet, most of the energy is converted entirely into 30 mile an hour wind currents. The Momentum Key in contact range is capable of knocking a stationary object 100 pounds 10 feet through the air after a 1 sec. charge. Anyone hit by momentum force won't feel like they've been hit by anything. It is more like there body just picked up speed in the direction they were hit. One can resist being blown away by the momentum force the same way they would deal with a punch. By braising for it, dodging it, or even overpowering it. A fully charged shot at blank range can deliver enough force to propel an object of 100 pounds 150 feet through the air, or propel an object or person 1500 pound 10 feet through the air and everything in between.

One second is not a charge. One second is the time it takes to pull the trigger of a gun. I am, however, comfortable in letting you have a ten second charge. Ten seconds for your gun to gather enough energy to shoot at someone. Alternatively, you can always say that your gun can fire five times before it has to be "charged" again and that it takes thirty seconds to be fully charged. That way you can fire at least five shots consecutively before having to rewind the gun. The weight sounds fine, seeing as anyone or anything can resist it as long as they are moving in the opposite direction.

Edit: I did not notice this before, but if the sphere travels at 30mph it will only take three seconds to send someone 150 feet into the air. That is too fast. 150 feet also happens to be the rough equivalent of a 15-story building. That is too high. Reduce the distance and state additional restrictions.

If the user amplifies their body’s forces, they’ll have enough force in a punch or kick to crack stone on impact, if they don’t weigh over 200 pounds they can add 15mph to their speed, and are able change the direction of their body’s movement almost instantaneously.

Remove "almost instantaneously". It can be used to change the direction of your character's movements, but it shouldn't be used as a justification to dodge things you would have otherwise hit from going at some ridiculous speed.

Everything else looks good. Like a whole different character all together. Genius. Everything makes sense.

[MelonHead]

Name: Liu Sho

Alignment: True Neutral

Age: 30

Gender: Male

Race: Pandaren

Physical Description: Pandaren as a whole look incredibly similar to humanoid pandas, sporting powerful stocky builds and five fingered hands with opposable thumbs and claws. Liu Sho is no exception, standing at five foot five inches and with a wide body with deceptive muscle under his furry form. He weighs one hundred and twenty five kilos, but moves with trained grace and carefree stride. He usually wears the traditional garb of his people (see reference) and carries a large flask on his back.

Personality Description: Pandaren are carefree individuals who enjoy every day as it comes and live their lives carefree and happy. They prefer to avoid conflict, and Liu Sho adheres to this almost religiously hence his neutrality. However, when angered a Pandaren loses themselves in battle which can make them a dangerous foe, and ally.

Natural abilities: Physically as strong as a bear, Liu can lift four times his weight with effort. His claws can rip through flesh and his fangs have enough bite force to tear out a man’s throat with ease. On all fours, he can sprint at thirty five miles per hour, on two feet he can manage twenty. He’s agile for his size, through a life of training in martial arts and spirituality, although his drunkenness usually mars this grace slightly. He can move about as fast as a peak human, and his reflexes are at human peak, despite being drunk most of the time. He is also physically robust, allowing him to take hits but also giving him significantly above human stamina.

His sense of smell is heightened significantly and his hearing, his eye sight is about the same as the average humans but is only half as effected by the dark.

His body is as durable as a panda’s thick fur protects him from the cold and elemental attacks to some degree. Arrows struggle to pierce his hide and sword strikes thrown with the strength of an average human are only capable of minor grazes.

Adapted skills: Liu spent his young life in the ritualistic and spiritual monk training of all Pandaren, developing masterful unarmed fighting skill. This accounts for his unnatural grace, even under the influence. He is fond of a style of drunken fighting, where his senses are numbed yet his fluidity in battle becomes completely unpredictable.

He’s also an adept stave fighter, and can use a wide multitude of other weapons at an apprentice level, only modern weapons are completely unusable in his hands, and he’s not a particularly good marksman either.

He has a moderate amount of acrobatic skill and climbing ability, exceptional when considering his build and bulk. He’s also very good at making beer.

Magic.

Magical ability

Liu is an elementalist. He must manipulate the elements with his hands, therefore he can only control two elements at the same time and only with significant concentration. Manipulating the elements takes significant time and effort, which can exhaust him over time.

Fire: Liu can use his ability to spark up a flame in either hand and throw it a moderate distance. He can also manipulate fires already present in a brutish way, such as curling it into a ball and throwing it untidily towards an opponent or spraying it forward as a wave of flame. (Thirty feet manipulation range)

Earth: Liu can throw rocks of around half his weight or the earth mass equivalent. He can also shatter the earth or make it unsteady under an opponent’s weight so long as they are less than ten feet away.

Air: Liu can use the air to only a small degree aggressively, using it to fuel his fire or disperse alcohol for the fire. Passively he can hear words spoken from a significant distance away and feel significant breakage of a body of air.

Water: Liu most prefers his manipulation of fire and water. With the water he can manipulate liquids (so long as they are predominantly made of H20) and heal wounds. He can manipulate liquids of a weight up to twenty kilos. The magical healing qualities of water are near boundless, however Liu is currently only capable of healing light grazes and the like in battle, and must work hard for long periods of time and concentration to deal with serious wounds. (After battle) (Thirty feet manipulation range)

Character Equipment: Chen’s Flask, a casket carried on his back which fills with any beverage Liu wishes. This could be water, or alcohol of any kind. There are also three magical alcoholic beverages which can be produced in the flask. The Flask was an artefact long lost by an ancient Pandaren adventurer and brew master. Chen adopted the role of its guardian after finding it by what he believed as chance in his wanderings. The cask is incredibly difficult to damage or pierce, but not impossible, any damage done to the flask magically repairs itself after a period of time directly proportional to the severity of the damage. Something like a bullet hole for example would take an hour to repair. The flask only works for Pandaren and is bound to Liu’s soul, which in the strange world he finds himself in is renewable. This allows him to track the flask no matter where it is taken, and it takes enormous power to completely destroy.

(Liu can only have the benefits of one magic spirit at a time, and the flask takes time to refill so swapping instantaneously is impossible)

Xian’s Steadying Ale: Provides Liu with resistance to fear and magic, it also makes him incredibly difficult to unbalance by force.

Lian’s Supple Brew: Provides Liu with an added grace and agility, allowing him to move roughly twice as fluidly and fast as before. It also heightens his reflexes to twice human peak.

Warrior’s Spirit: Forces Liu into a beserker rage with doubles his strength and endurance, and allows him to use his magic more forcefully but less gracefully.

Named abilities: Will add more in the future, for now.

Breath of fire: Takes a long drought of ale and uses a mix of air and water magic to spit it out in an arc or cone. After it's launched he sparks into into fire, so it burns intensely for a few moments.

Character History: Liu set out at the age of twenty as was custom. Twenty marks a quarter of one’s life, with the Pandaren’s average lifespan of eighty years. He wandered the world looking for ingredients for brews and experiences, not particularly bound by morale’s and happy to take each day as it comes. His trials lead to a strange occurrence however as he happened upon Chen’s flask, an ancient Pandaren artefact which greatly enhanced his powers while also giving him a sudden insight into his purpose in life. He still wanders, but he is bound to protect the flask at all costs.

[Crazy Scion]

The idea was to make shots function with duration, but I could just said shots cost 3 seconds each, which totals to 10 shots before rewind. The point of the shots was for them to be like gun shots after all, and winding the keys I should have stated, already takes about 10 seconds. Also wanted to state that the keys charge is now 20 seconds for a full powered shot.

I also mentioned that I fixed the infinite ammo issue, by requiring the Wind Up gun to need to be re-charged on a charging bench after using 5 keys. If you feel I need to reduce the amount of keys used before charge, then I will. However Carl still has to run back to his motorcycle, and weight 4 and a half minutes to charge it already. Then there is the chance his bike will run out of gas and the battery dies.

As for the movement. The gun can add momentum to make Carl move in different directions. If he isn't using to much force, he would able change the direction of his body movement in unnatural ways. I will say that this is more for his arms or legs, and less effective if it's his whole body.

I halved the speed, but I said the momentum key already had a range limit of 10 feet. "After a distance of only 10 feet, most of the energy is converted entirely into 15 mile an hour wind currents." I stated that it is less effective at distance, and that in contact range. Meaning I'm poking you with the gun that it is capable of knocking a stationary object of 200 pounds, 10 feet through the air, with one shot.

Carl the Zombie
Name: Carl
Age: 80
Species: Undead
Alignment: chaotic good
Appearance:

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Physical Traits:
Carl is fairly tall and stands at a solid 6 feet. His body amplifies his tall appearance being of a slim built with thin, but tough arms and legs. When Carl was alive, he preferred to do work outs that strengthened his muscles rather than bulk up. He was stronger than he looked, and could run like a track star. His clothes are his casual street clothes with the exception of his jacket being the same he wore when he still attended school. Carl’s hair appears black, but is actually a really dark brown that one may notice if they parted his hair. His eyes are an orangish brown eyes color, and even seem to burn brightly in pitch darkness.
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Personality Traits:
Carl is a generally carefree guy who worries little about his personal appearance or the opinions of the people around him. He acts like a goofball most of the time, but displays a very serious persona when it is needed. He is dedicated to his morals and views of the world, and truly believes no one is beyond saving. He displays perverted traits towards women, but this usually doesn’t get passed verbal abuse. Lastly Carl has an unnatural loves of cute things, and this is even reflected in his taste in women.
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Super Natural Physical Traits:
After dying some of Carl’s physical characteristics were altered. His body acted more like it was dying, then actually dead. It withers at a very slow rate, but is not completely dead. The magic used to resurrect him still utilized his some of his existing functions to keep him going.
His brain was still somewhat active and ran his five senses for his body. This made his head a weak point, because if it got damaged then all of his sense would become dull and his thoughts would be hazy.
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His muscles still functioned as well, but were now triggered trough magic instead since motor nerves were damaged when he died. He also lost his since of pain after being resurrected, but he did manage to retain some of his sense of touch and can still feel things somewhat throughout his body, but more normally with his more sensitive parts like his hands or lips.
His skin is still active, and as well as still allowing him to feel, keeps bugs and bacteria from freely making residents in his body, but not as well as before.
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Carl’s brain didn’t retain its regulations on muscle restraint and this gave Carl access to his body’s full potential. The human mind usually only allows us to use a 1/10 to 1/15 of are total strength. This is to prevent the human body from tearing its self apart through its own power. This allowed Carl to jump to the top of a 2 story building, comfortably run at almost 30 miles an hour on a flat surface with no obstacles, and lift 300 pounds over his head. As impressive as his abilities have become his body was still human, and exerting to much force will cause his body to rip apart. Muscles would tear and weaken as well as his bones being at risk of snapping under the pressure. Carl tries to limit himself to normal activities to keep his body from being destroyed to quickly.
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Carl’s body doesn't fatigue since his body no longer runs on air or food, but he can run out of energy and collapse. Carl often doesn't have enough energy for more than a few of hours of strenuous activity before his magic runs to low.
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Supernatural Abilities and Magic:
Carl was revived through nature magic instead of through standard necromancy. His body was flooded with nature magic as a way to grant his body life. This caused him to become part of nature and able to regenerate his body much the way a plant grows back its limbs. Carl doesn't need to sleep, but if his body is running low on energy or if he is damaged, then he can regenerate his body and recharge his magic by sleeping in soil. His body draws in nutrients and minerals to recover the ones lost, as well as absorb life energies from earth its self to regenerate his magic supply. Carl can’t recover unless he is completely submerged in dirt, and the dirt has to have minerals and life in it.
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Carl can sink into the earth and freely move about as fast as a normal person would be able to run (15mph), but this costs him twice as much energy as running normally, and will cause him to run out of magic faster than if he were to simply walk. Carl cannot burrow through solid rock nor can he go through cement, but he is able to loosen and move rocks if they don’t weigh more than 300 pounds.
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Equipment:
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Weapon Exterior Appearance: The wind up Gun has a similar shape to a toy gun a stereo typical SiFi alien would wield. The head of the gun is a small grey cone shape attached to the end of a rectangular body. The back of the gun looks like that of a normal pistol, but the hammer seems to have been removed. The body is a rusted brown color, and there are to bronze rings on the side of the gun where the bullet chamber would be. The original grip for the gun looks like it was sawed off and in its place was welded an iron grip, like the kind one would see on a rifle with a piece of electrical tape rapped around it. In the place of the trigger is a nub similar to a switch on a flash light.
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Weapon internal Workings: The Wind up Gun can be opened by twisting the two for mentioned bronze rings as well as the cone counter clock wise and popping them off. This reveals a series of screws with star shaped heads that need a special screw driver to remove. After removing the screws the gun can be pulled into two halves revealing an intricate internal working of watch gears and music box guts, but the unusual thing about the gun would be that the music box wheel is a dark shifting rainbow in appearance it glows lightly, vibrates, emits a quiet sound, and will even shock on contact.
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Chaos Crystal: The fore mentioned wheel is a Chaos Crystal. This crystal was created as a way to store several different types of energy in one place. It collects all kinds of energy from its surrounding and converts it to chaos energy, a shifting energy that is constantly changing from one energy type to another.
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The Wind up Keys: The Wind up Keys were created as a way to take the stored energy in the chaos crystal and convert it into usable energy. Each key represents a natural energy type, the types being momentum, heat, sound, light, electricity, magnetism, nuclear, gravity, and static. Each key is imbued with an entity of each type of energy. The entities are like the essence of the energy or a being of that energy, they aren't sentient things though, but are simply used to control the energy. When a key is applied to the Wind up Gun the entity inside it starts converting the stored power in the Chaos crystal and uses it to grant the user control of its energy. An example would be that a being of pure force resides in the momentum Key and when applied to the Wind up Gun converts stored energy to momentum, and can be used to manipulate force.
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Rules of the wind up pistol:
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Keys can only be used for duration of 30 seconds at a time before needing to be rewound, and take 10 seconds to wind.
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At the cost of 3 seconds of duration, each key can fire up to 5 shots.
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The power of additional shots can be added, by charging for 2 seconds for every additional shot added. (This is to add a bigger affect to a single shot)
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Only 5 keys can be used before recharge is needed
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The charge station for the Wind up Gun is set in Carl’s bike He sticks it in a slot in the dash and it will start charging while a music box song plays.
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The Bike: Created by the Police engineering departments Richard Homily. It was a bike made in combination with a strange device almost the size of a fridge that was given to Carl with the Wind up Gun to help recharge it. It was too big to carry, but ran on a simple electrical current. Richard designed the bike to disguise the device and to give it mobility so Carl could use it in the field.
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Wind up pistol Keys:
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The Momentum Key: The Key with a fist engraved on it is the control of momentum or specifically force. Momentum is the name given to the amount of force an object in motion has. The Momentum key is a control of moving forces, and it can be used to augment the user’s movement or the movement of objects.
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When charged into shots, it can deliver waves of momentum in the form of giant spheres of about 5 feet in diameter that are capable of knocking things around. The sphere’s travel at about 15 miles an hour, but despite their speed, this attack is fairly short rang due to the air molecules that are hit by the blast, slowly eating away at the momentum energy. After a distance of only 10 feet, most of the energy is converted entirely into 30 mile an hour wind currents.
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The Momentum Key in contact range is capable of knocking a stationary object of 200 pounds, 10 feet through the air, with one shot. A fully charged shot at blank range can deliver enough force to propel an object of 200 pound 150 feet through the air, or propel an object or person 1500 pound 10 feet through the air and everything in between.
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Anyone hit by momentum force won't feel like they've been hit by anything. It is more like there body just picked up speed in the direction they were hit. One can resist being blown away by the momentum force the same way they would deal with a punch. By braising for it, dodging it, or even overpowering it.
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If the user amplifies their body’s forces, they’ll have enough force in a punch or kick to crack stone on impact, if they don’t weigh over 200 pounds they can add 15 mph to their speed, and if they aren't using too much force, are able change the direction of their body movement in unnatural ways, this is more for his arms or legs, and less effective if it's the whole body.

[ImportantNobody]

How does he create ultrasound?

He was going to snap his fingers and a ultrasound wave would travel outward in all directions.

It creates a pressure wave that can knock objects as heavy as 200 points? I did not know points was a measure of weight. There are also no set-up or time needed to power this ability and all his abilities can be used instantly on thought. This is unacceptable. You must also state for clarity how soon he gets tired from using his powers. He should not be spamming sonic booms left and right.

I have no clue where "points" came from. I meant pounds. He'll get tired after five sonic booms. Charge times will be explained lower down.

Five seconds is not a charge. Five seconds is the time it takes for someone to realize you are doing something and decide to do something to stop you. Also, if it is possible for this attack to tear something apart you must state how it tears things apart and what it can tear apart since it doesn't tear things apart all the time.

EX: My wind slasher attack is a magical spell that sends out a gust of razor sharp winds that tear apart unarmored foes. This attack requires a thirty second incantation to be used.

It would tear things apart by having differences in pressure inside the beam spiraling around inside the beam, but that effect I'll save for later tiers. His sonic boom attack can be around 10 seconds and he'll make it more obvious that's what he's doing by both visual and audio clues. I can't wait 30 seconds like your example because there's no way he can pull that off midbattle without allies protecting him.

How far can he control the sonic ball?

20 feet

No guessing games. If it is useful state how it is useful. Swords having more power is too vague.

The power is removed for now.
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His updated sheet. I also added in a slightly silver glow to all of his attacks with "Sonic" in the name, which is explained right above his ability list. I also mentioned that people can brace themselves for the sonic boom, so won't get knocked back no mater what if they are under 200 pounds: http://roleplayerguild.com/showthrea...=1#post7815410

[Asperser]

The idea was to make shots function with duration, but I could just said shots cost 3 seconds each, which totals to 10 shots before rewind. The point of the shots was for them to be like gun shots after all, and winding the keys I should have stated, already takes about 10 seconds. Also wanted to state that the keys charge is now 20 seconds for a full powered shot.

The function of the gun's momentum keys is the same as a magical spell and needs a duration or charge in between to prevent someone from firing magic-like attacks as quickly as they would a normal gun. This is akin to someone wanting to fire magical spells (i.e. a fireball) in rapid succession leaving someone little to no chance of defending themselves.(Because as soon as they dodge or counter the attack they are hit with another spell.) Alternatively, you can probably think of other restrictions for this power to be fair.

I also mentioned that I fixed the infinite ammo issue, by requiring the Wind Up gun to need to be re-charged on a charging bench after using 5 keys. If you feel I need to reduce the amount of keys used before charge, then I will. However Carl still has to run back to his motorcycle, and weight 4 and a half minutes to charge it already. Then there is the chance his bike will run out of gas and the battery dies.

The chaos crystal is no longer an issue.

I halved the speed, but I said the momentum key already had a range limit of 10 feet. "After a distance of only 10 feet, most of the energy is converted entirely into 15 mile an hour wind currents." I stated that it is less effective at distance, and that in contact range. Meaning I'm poking you with the gun that it is capable of knocking a stationary object of 200 pounds, 10 feet through the air, with one shot.

The thirty per mile winds are not an issue. That is a strong breeze that can knock down tree branches. The issue is that anyone struck directly by the gun goes way off into the distance because it says,

A fully charged shot at blank range can deliver enough force to propel an object of 200 pound 150 feet through the air, or propel an object or person 1500 pound 10 feet through the air and everything in between.

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At point blank someone hit by the gun goes one hundred and fifty feet into the air or up a fifteen story building with a velocity of 30mph, the speed of the sphere. If the gun does not send someone flying up one hundred and fifty feet into the air, but stops at ten feet because of air resistance it must be clear so as to not confuse people.

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@ImportantNobody's Midow Saleuport

Sonic Bullet- Pressure waves that are as small, fast, and powerful as bullets. It creates a sonic boom sound as loud as a silencer. These bullets are fired off of his fingers or possibly his toes (but obviously much harder to aim that way so is rarely used). They also have the dull ringing sound while charging up for five seconds. He can use about twenty of them within the hour before getting tired.

Ten seconds.

[LOTO]

Melonhead's Liu Sho Accepted

[Crazy Scion]

Air resistance was already mentioned, but that is a fully charged shot, and will require the full 20 second charge to perform. As for the whole potential to "spam fire balls as you call it". That was the reason why I made the range only 10 feet. However I realize it is significantly powerful, and like a character that carries armor rounds. I will reduce the amount of ammo to 3 keys if that'll be enough of a limitation.

As for the sphere speed. That has nothing to do with the momentum, but how quickly it is delivered to a target. The point was the amount of momentum added to a target at range was significantly less then being close up. I'm afraid you have confused the sphere for a kinetic ball. Yes it functions like one, but instead of hitting things it simply gives it energy in the direction it is going. The speed was not meant to be a function of the attack. I screwed up when I painted that picture.

I broke up the momentum sheet to make it easier to read.

Carl the Zombie
Name: Carl
Age: 80
Species: Undead
Alignment: chaotic good
Appearance:

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Physical Traits:
Carl is fairly tall and stands at a solid 6 feet. His body amplifies his tall appearance being of a slim built with thin, but tough arms and legs. When Carl was alive, he preferred to do work outs that strengthened his muscles rather than bulk up. He was stronger than he looked, and could run like a track star. His clothes are his casual street clothes with the exception of his jacket being the same he wore when he still attended school. Carl’s hair appears black, but is actually a really dark brown that one may notice if they parted his hair. His eyes are an orangish brown eyes color, and even seem to burn brightly in pitch darkness.
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Personality Traits:
Carl is a generally carefree guy who worries little about his personal appearance or the opinions of the people around him. He acts like a goofball most of the time, but displays a very serious persona when it is needed. He is dedicated to his morals and views of the world, and truly believes no one is beyond saving. He displays perverted traits towards women, but this usually doesn’t get passed verbal abuse. Lastly Carl has an unnatural loves of cute things, and this is even reflected in his taste in women.
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Super Natural Physical Traits:
After dying some of Carl’s physical characteristics were altered. His body acted more like it was dying, then actually dead. It withers at a very slow rate, but is not completely dead. The magic used to resurrect him still utilized his some of his existing functions to keep him going.
His brain was still somewhat active and ran his five senses for his body. This made his head a weak point, because if it got damaged then all of his sense would become dull and his thoughts would be hazy.
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His muscles still functioned as well, but were now triggered trough magic instead since motor nerves were damaged when he died. He also lost his since of pain after being resurrected, but he did manage to retain some of his sense of touch and can still feel things somewhat throughout his body, but more normally with his more sensitive parts like his hands or lips.
His skin is still active, and as well as still allowing him to feel, keeps bugs and bacteria from freely making residents in his body, but not as well as before.
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Carl’s brain didn’t retain its regulations on muscle restraint and this gave Carl access to his body’s full potential. The human mind usually only allows us to use a 1/10 to 1/15 of are total strength. This is to prevent the human body from tearing its self apart through its own power. This allowed Carl to jump to the top of a 2 story building, comfortably run at almost 30 miles an hour on a flat surface with no obstacles, and lift 300 pounds over his head. As impressive as his abilities have become his body was still human, and exerting to much force will cause his body to rip apart. Muscles would tear and weaken as well as his bones being at risk of snapping under the pressure. Carl tries to limit himself to normal activities to keep his body from being destroyed to quickly.
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Carl’s body doesn't fatigue since his body no longer runs on air or food, but he can run out of energy and collapse. Carl often doesn't have enough energy for more than a few of hours of strenuous activity before his magic runs to low.
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Supernatural Abilities and Magic:
Carl was revived through nature magic instead of through standard necromancy. His body was flooded with nature magic as a way to grant his body life. This caused him to become part of nature and able to regenerate his body much the way a plant grows back its limbs. Carl doesn't need to sleep, but if his body is running low on energy or if he is damaged, then he can regenerate his body and recharge his magic by sleeping in soil. His body draws in nutrients and minerals to recover the ones lost, as well as absorb life energies from earth its self to regenerate his magic supply. Carl can’t recover unless he is completely submerged in dirt, and the dirt has to have minerals and life in it.
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Carl can sink into the earth and freely move about as fast as a normal person would be able to run (15mph), but this costs him twice as much energy as running normally, and will cause him to run out of magic faster than if he were to simply walk. Carl cannot burrow through solid rock nor can he go through cement, but he is able to loosen and move rocks if they don’t weigh more than 300 pounds.
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Equipment:
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Weapon Exterior Appearance: The wind up Gun has a similar shape to a toy gun a stereo typical SiFi alien would wield. The head of the gun is a small grey cone shape attached to the end of a rectangular body. The back of the gun looks like that of a normal pistol, but the hammer seems to have been removed. The body is a rusted brown color, and there are to bronze rings on the side of the gun where the bullet chamber would be. The original grip for the gun looks like it was sawed off and in its place was welded an iron grip, like the kind one would see on a rifle with a piece of electrical tape rapped around it. In the place of the trigger is a nub similar to a switch on a flash light.
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Weapon internal Workings: The Wind up Gun can be opened by twisting the two for mentioned bronze rings as well as the cone counter clock wise and popping them off. This reveals a series of screws with star shaped heads that need a special screw driver to remove. After removing the screws the gun can be pulled into two halves revealing an intricate internal working of watch gears and music box guts, but the unusual thing about the gun would be that the music box wheel is a dark shifting rainbow in appearance it glows lightly, vibrates, emits a quiet sound, and will even shock on contact.
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Chaos Crystal: The fore mentioned wheel is a Chaos Crystal. This crystal was created as a way to store several different types of energy in one place. It collects all kinds of energy from its surrounding and converts it to chaos energy, a shifting energy that is constantly changing from one energy type to another.
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The Wind up Keys: The Wind up Keys were created as a way to take the stored energy in the chaos crystal and convert it into usable energy. Each key represents a natural energy type, the types being momentum, heat, sound, light, electricity, magnetism, nuclear, gravity, and static. Each key is imbued with an entity of each type of energy. The entities are like the essence of the energy or a being of that energy, they aren't sentient things though, but are simply used to control the energy. When a key is applied to the Wind up Gun the entity inside it starts converting the stored power in the Chaos crystal and uses it to grant the user control of its energy. An example would be that a being of pure force resides in the momentum Key and when applied to the Wind up Gun converts stored energy to momentum, and can be used to manipulate force.
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Rules of the wind up pistol:
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Keys can only be used for duration of 30 seconds at a time before needing to be rewound, and take 10 seconds to wind.
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At the cost of 3 seconds of duration, each key can fire up to 10 shots.
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The power of additional shots can be added, by charging for 2 seconds for every additional shot added. (This is to add a bigger affect to a single shot)
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Only 3 keys can be used before recharge is needed
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The charge station for the Wind up Gun is set in Carl’s bike He sticks it in a slot in the dash and it will start charging while a music box song plays.
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The Bike: Created by the Police engineering departments Richard Homily. It was a bike made in combination with a strange device almost the size of a fridge that was given to Carl with the Wind up Gun to help recharge it. It was too big to carry, but ran on a simple electrical current. Richard designed the bike to disguise the device and to give it mobility so Carl could use it in the field.
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Wind up pistol Keys:
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The Momentum Key: The Key with a fist engraved on it is the control of momentum or specifically force. Momentum is the name given to the amount of force an object in motion has. The Momentum key is a control of moving forces, and it can be used to augment the user’s movement or the movement of objects.
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When charged into shots, it can deliver waves of momentum in the form of giant spheres of about 5 feet in diameter that are capable of knocking things around. The sphere’s travel at about 15 miles an hour, but despite their speed, this attack is fairly short rang due to the air molecules that are hit by the blast, slowly eating away at the momentum energy. After a distance of only 10 feet, most of the energy is converted entirely into 30 mile an hour wind currents.
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The Momentum Key in contact range is capable of knocking a stationary object of 200 pounds, 10 feet through the air, with one shot. A fully charged shot at blank range can deliver enough force to propel an object of 200 pound 150 feet through the air, or propel an object or person 1500 pound 10 feet through the air and everything in between.
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Anyone hit by momentum force won't feel like they've been hit by anything. It is more like there body just picked up speed in the direction they were hit. One can resist being blown away by the momentum force the same way they would deal with a punch. By braising for it, dodging it, or even overpowering it.
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If the user amplifies their body’s forces, they’ll have enough force in a punch or kick to crack stone on impact, if they don’t weigh over 200 pounds they can add 15 mph to their speed, and if they aren't using too much force, are able change the direction of their body movement in unnatural ways, this is more for his arms or legs, and less effective if it's the whole body.

[ImportantNobody]

@ImportantNobody's Midow Saleuport
Ten seconds.

Deal.

[Crazy Scion]

@Asp: I'm still looking for further judgment on Carl's updated CS I posted above. Please look at it sometime soon. I've been waiting a few days now, and am wondering if you have somehow missed it.