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    Seven Deadly Sins OOC (SDS)

    We have our OOC up, so we can start planning ideas and developing characters before we start.

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    There will be an antagonist, but I don't want to reveal too much just yet. Once I have enough interest, I will reveal the idea for the plot. (if you would be interested in playing the opposing force, message me and I will explain.)

    The main theme of this RP will be the criminal conduct, the sins that they commit. So the characters will be tied into this theme. Each character will have a sin that their personality embodies.
    For example, Gluttony is a player and extremely wealthy. Lust is attractive, and is constantly going after women- Or perhaps a certain woman.

    This will be at high casual level. So please post multiple paragraphs (though I understand that if you are within a dialogue, it can be tough.) I also require participation in plot building, communication, and commitment. It's very annoying when a RP is going well, and then half the people drop out.

    -The Sins-
    -Lust: Reserved by Julia
    -Gluttony: Heretic209
    -Sloth: Reserved by CommunistZed
    -Wrath: Unpredictable
    -Envy
    -Pride: Unpredictable
    -Greed: Wenzhog

    Other Characters:
    Rival Criminal Organization
    -Leader
    -Right hand
    LAPD
    -A good, clean cut cop who is bent on cleaning up the streets.
    -A crooked cop who is under the payroll of the Crime Organization Leader, and does his best to keep evidence and witnesses out of the courtroom.

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    Name: Lawrence Uric(Eric) Samuel Twist
    Age: 25
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    Personality: Lawrence is just dripping with sexuality, and he knows it. He is very sarcastic, but charming, smooth, suave, and just about everything else that a woman fantasizes about. He can adapt to situations well, being able to seduce and play his way out of any situation. He is also quite the actor, needing it for his way of living. However, if he gets focused on something, it consumes his thoughts and he cannot function until it his finished. He also has an addiction to cigarettes in which he is trying to break, but it makes him very easily agitated in stressful situations.

    Biography: Born in the college town of Colombia, Missouri, Lawrence was raised in a poorly structured home with an alcoholic mother and a workaholic father. At the age of 4 when he began his schooling, Lawrence started to play with his father's lighters and light his toys on fire. When his mother began to beat him for it, the habit was quickly stopped.

    When his baby sister Rita was born, Lawrence became her protector. He spent his years from the age of 7 until he went to college raising Rita and being more of her parent than her big brother.

    Lawrence committed his first felony at the age of 13, when he discovered that the new girl in his 8th grade class was loaded. Wooing her and making her fall at his feet, practically begging like every other girl who knew his charms, Lawrence set his first crime into motion. He took her to a few nice dinners, bought flowers, and soon the money began to flow like a river from her hands to his pockets. He got bored quickly, and tossed a match into her room as she slept. The family escaped, excluding the dog. The affair only lasted until a few months.

    His crime was discovered, and he was convicted. But, because he was an adolescent, he was only sentenced to 3 years in juvenile detention.

    When Lawrence graduated from high school, he found no desire to go to college, but an LA college offered him a scholarship, and he accepted. Nothing wrong with free schooling, he thought, and moved out that way. Once he graduated from college with a masters in computer technology, he began his big leagues of criminal work. He discovered the wonders of hacking and arson.

    Crime Specialty:
    Lawrence loves to hack for his personal gain as well as to "watch the world burn" and arson to literally watch the world burn. He also does a bit of black widowing for fun.

    Other: Enjoys the use of poisons for jobs he wants done quickly, and his favorite thing to hack are FBI records and the IRS.
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    Name: Desmond Burke
    Age: 30
    Appearance: Desmond is a handsome man, standing just at 6 feet. His skin is lightly tanned, and his face is covered with light dirty blonde stubble. His dirty blonde hair is slightly unkempt, but intentionally kept that way. His features are handsome, but ruggedly so. He is muscular, but not to the point of a body builder. It’s toned, and not overstated. He typically wears custom tailored slacks, a fitted t-shirt with some sort of graphic (bands, logos, ect), and a blazer jacket. He has a tattoo of a tattoo of a shamrock on the outside of his right wrist, and wears a silver cross around his neck. On his left wrist, he wears a braided leather bracelet.
    Personality: Desmond is the opposite of his sister; he is quiet, he is withdrawn, and he is calculative. He only speaks when he has something he finds valuable, and he thinks through every single possibility before he acts. He is prideful, which is why he enjoys being in control of the Seven Deadly Sins. The only person he cares about in the world is his sister, who he would protect with his life. But when it comes to anyone else, he would watch them die without blinking. He is an overachiever, and he strides to keep his organization as the best.
    Biography: Desmond Burke was born on April 12, 1983 in Northern Ireland to Arthur and Marianne Burke. He was six years old when they brought home Juliet from the small hospital, and though he refuses to admit it, it was a day that was better than Christmas. They were typical siblings, but he always tried to protect her. When his father died, Desmond swore he would always look after her, even though he was only eleven.
    When Thomas moved the two to Dublin, Desmond was taken under his wing and started learning the ways of the “family business”. At first, it was simple. He would clean up in the back of Thomas’s bar and run errands. But the older he got, the more he learned the truth. He wasn’t in the business of shop keeping; he was in the business of crime. His uncle distributed guns and forged money, and was going to teach Desmond how to do it without getting caught. He learned quickly, and eventually he spread into other illegal areas. He pulled off cons, heists, started distributing drugs and the like. But things took a bad turn, and Thomas screwed over the wrong people. They took a contract out on his head, and he was killed in a bad accident.
    After that, Desmond devoted his time to avenging Thomas, and killing whoever had a hand in the death. He spent night and day looking, which put a distance between him and his sister. Eventually he found the person, and he slaughtered them. He didn’t flinch at the blood, he didn’t even realize what he had done til his sister found him with the blood on his hands. The questions she had after that were hard to explain, and it broke his heart when he had to take her away from Ireland. He was guilty, but eventually that guilt faded and turned into pride.
    When the two came to Brooklyn, Desmond trained his sister the way Thomas trained him. He taught her how to kill, lie, and steal to make her way in life. He taught her apathy, endurance, and how to push the pain away. She learned well, too well. Eventually she outgrew Brooklyn, and left the country and her brother behind. He never lost touch with her, but he started to feel lonely. So he formed an organization he called the Deadly Sins, a small group of five criminals that pulled off small scale conjobs. They stayed off the radar, or tried to. But they grew too big, they crossed the wrong people. They were looked at as a bug, a small little thing on the radar that was easily squished. And they were. A contract was taken out, and everyone but Desmond was killed. Those events ran him out of Brooklyn, and eventually into Los Angeles where the Seven Deadly Sins are now located.
    Crime Specialty: Desmond is a jack of all trades, which is one reason he is successful as the leader of the SDS.
    Other: N/A

    Name: Juliet “Jules” Burke
    Age: 23
    Appearance: Juliet stands just at 5’7, and carries herself with good posture and a demeanor that broadcasts attitude. Her body is slender with curves in the right places, her arms and legs are toned. Her hair is naturally red, streaked with blonde and brunette (though she constantly changes the color/uses a wig to disguise herself on the job). The slightly curled hair hangs at shoulder level, framing her face. Her side-swept bangs go to the left, though is typically pinned back . Her features are soft, but they give a sense of intimidating beauty, scattered here and there with freckles. Her eyes are almond shaped, the color a hazy green with blue and hazel specks (and when she is upset, they turn to a deep green color.) She has two piercings on her right lobe, and three on her left (two in the lobe, one at the outer top curve of the ear), and has a stud in her right nostril. Juliet typically wears minimal makeup unless required; sticking to eyeliner on days she just has to go into the office. She likes to wear form fitting clothes in monotonous colors, and typically keeps a rosary on her person at all times (even though it might not be visible.) On her body, she has three tattoos. On the inside of her left wrist she has the Chinese symbol for endurance, on the bottom of her right heel, she has the outline of a Gaelic cross, and on her left ankle is a small outline of a rose.
    Personality: Juliet is a firecracker; she is impulsive, ruthless, and passionate. When she is calm, she thinks through her actions, but when her temper kicks in she goes in the mode of “shoot first, ask questions later.” She is patient, yet sarcastic when she becomes annoyed with someone. She has a wrathful sense of vengeance when someone close to her is hurt; and a kill or be killed instinct. Her apathy during hits helps her sleep at night, though she still remembers every single person she has harmed since the beginning. But through all this, she also has her biggest insecurity. She is afraid to open up to others, and getting hurt by those she lets in. She sees love as being out of the option, and shrouds herself in apathy.
    Biography: Juliet was born on Dec 17th, 1988 in Northern Ireland to Arthur and Marianne Burke, two shop keepers who worked day and night to support their children. They gave them a decent life until a bad investment put the family in debt. When things became drastic, Arthur went into business with a man named Thomas, who became like an uncle to Juliet and her brother Desmond.
    When Juliet was 5, Arthur fell ill and passed away, leaving Marianne to raise the children alone. Thomas moved the family into his home in the middle of Dublin, and Marianne slipped into a crippling depression that ended with her being admitted into a mental institution. Within a year, Marianne committed suicide. By the time Juliet was eight, she was left an orphan. But she had Thomas to look after her, who became a father figure. She was sent off to a private school while Thomas took Desmond under his wing.
    Life was never simple, but it was not riddled with tragedy like the past years had been. Or at least it was until the day that Thomas died. It was ruled a suicide, but Desmond believed differently. Juliet was fourteen at the time, and Desmond was 20. Things became hectic, her brother was rarely home, and when he was his mind was elsewhere. But nothing compared to the day when he arrived home, covered in the blood of another man.
    Things changed after that day. Desmond finally spilled the family secret, the business that Juliet had thought innocent was a front. The true family business was that of a crime ring, and after avenging the death of Thomas, Desmond had crossed the wrong people. There was a target on both their backs. If they didn’t run, they were sure to die. So they left. But they didn’t just leave the city; they left the country and the continent. They left everything behind, and took a flight to New York to start a new life that existed outside of Crime.
    But, sometimes things don’t turn out the way you intended. Desmond found himself in the criminal underworld of Brooklyn, and he had dragged Juliet into it with him. By the time she was seventeen; Juliet was trained in hand to hand combat, was fluent in four languages, and could shoot a man down at 400 feet with one shot. She had killed fifteen people by the time she turned 18, but she wasn’t proud.
    After her eighteenth birthday, Juliet left New York to travel the world. She first went to England, and ended up making a name for herself with the quality of her kills. She ended up making a good sum, and was able to travel the globe on the money she made. It wasn’t a perfect thing, but blood money was still money. She never lost touch with her brother, and would come back for visits and the occasional favor to her brother.
    When her brother left New York for Los Angeles, she ended up giving up on her travels and following him a year later. He had already made a decent team of criminals, and they were beginning to make a small name of themselves in dark corners, and back alleys. But within the two years of her being there, they had come of the wood works. They controlled the shadows, and Juliet took her place among them. She still lives day to day with a sense of loneliness, but she has at least made a friend in a man they call Juan.
    Crime Specialty: Juliet is known for her skills of the kills, as some people say. She makes her money from the blood she spills.
    Other: N/A

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    Name: Juan Ramiro Medina

    Age: 27

    Gender: Male

    Sin: Gluttony

    Appearance: A handsome man by anyone's standards, Juan Ramiro stands at 5'10". He is muscular, though not too bulky, and is swift enough to flee the scene if a job goes south. His dark brown hair is often overgrown past his ears, and curls slightly at the ends. He has pale blue, disarming eyes, and is almost never seen not wearing a suit. Custom tailored, always black, despite the warm Los Angeles weather, and always Italian made. 'Because the Italians do it best'.

    Personality: Juan is one of those people who performs best in crowds, but when alone can become severely introverted. Undoubtedly a product of his scarred childhood. He has been known to be sincere, genuine, and genuinely whimsical, although these probably should be taken with a grain of salt, seeing as large part of his job involves tricking people for personal gain. His close friends, however, know him as one who will crack a joke to lighten the mood, but will be serious when the situation demands it. A person who likes to talk but is able to listen, and listen well. This being said, next to nobody can even claim to have been Juan Medina's close friend. He certainly has many acquaintances, but is often very reluctant to open up to people.

    Biography: Juan Ramiro Medina was born in Mexico City, and lived in the town of Teoloyucan, Mexico until he was 20. His father, Manuel, was a firefighter, and his mother Teresa a waitress. his little sister, Gabriela, was born two years later, and the family lived in a small, near-destitute ranch style home on the outskirts of the town. Despite his family's situation, Juan immediately stuck out in public school. He was nearly always the brightest child in each of his classes, and excelled specifically in mathematics. His other major talent was in fact that he was a fantastic speaker, often being the one to mediate any situation (and occasionally, the one that was able to talk his way out of a detention or two). All the signs pointed to Juan having a bright, legitimate and successful future. Until the night when his parents were both killed in an explosion that leveled their house.
    Seventeen year old Juan and fifteen year old Gabriela were both at school. When they learned of their parents death, they were told it was an accident - that the likely cause was ignition of the gas in the stove. Juan was skeptical, but kept this feelings to himself, not wanting to worry his sister. He moved into an apartment and began to raise his sister by himself. Quickly, however, he realized he could not manage to live on a part time job's salary, and dropped out of school his senior year. The potential employers, however, were not looking for high school dropouts, so Juan was forced to go into crime. For awhile, he traversed the streets of Mexico City running short-cons and pickpocketing. But by the time he was twenty, his skills grew to include rudimentary safecracking, and knowledge of how to pick any sort of standard lock.
    After his sister graduated third in her class, twenty year old Juan decided he would pursue larger targets. Though he now lived comfortably in Teoloyucan, he could not imagine the wealth he would obtain in the United States. His destination, after much deliberation, ended up being the City of Angels - Los Angeles.
    Once in L.A., Juan found himself making more money than he knew what to do with. At first, much of it he sent back to Gabriela, but he still could afford many luxuries. luxuries he Had never before had in Mexico. A new car, a wardrobe full of suits - store bought, at first, but they were eventually replaced with custom tailored one - and, eventually, a large manor in the city. He worked solo for a few years, doing jobs for employers that needed something stolen. He was always careful to make sure there was no trail to lead back to him or his clients. "Anonymity," he once said, "Is just about as important to me as my appearance." Seeking to make even more money to finance his luxurious lifestyle, and honestly believing that there is strength in numbers, he soon joined the Sins, which he now considers his family, and where he has stayed since.

    Specialty: High End Robbery, Cons

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    Weapon of Choice - Beretta 92G Elite 1A, though he prefers to get out without shedding any blood

    Accommodation - Juan lives in a two story house in one of the high end areas of L.A. The house has a gate with a key card, as well as a large pool on the left side and a full bar in the interior first floor

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    Name: Detective Nathan Slater.

    Age: 36

    Personality: Slater is a very conflicted character. An incorruptible idealist with deep beliefs in justice and an abiding love of his city, he is also a committed cynic whose knowledge of human nature constantly reminds him how far off those ideals are. He can be short tempered, but always prefers to take his target down alive. A member of the financial upper classes through money left to him by his father, he still has an innate dislike of hereditary wealth and the horror of social inequality. Before he passed away, Nathan's father observed that Slater is anti-authoritarian even though he is, himself, an authority figure, "Which is practically Zen". The conflict within Slater is between his virtuous nature ("the Watchman") and what he calls "the Beast", an almost unstoppable urge to take revenge on the criminal world at large for the unsolved murder of his wife and son.


    Biography: Still working on this, I'll edit it in soon. (Perhaps one of the sins could turn out to be behind the murder of his family?)

    Crime Specialty: Robbery and homicide. (In my case I assume this means crime he specializes in solving?)

    Other: Since the death of his family, Slater has become a heavy drinker.

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    I really like Slater!

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    Thank you

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    I might have to leave the rest of the CS until tomorrow though mate. It's 3:30 am here.
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    That's fine, I'm hitting the sack anyways. Take your time, mate.

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    Will have a bio up alittle later tonight sorry for the delay was out all day today with some friends hanging out.

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    You planning on being Envy or the corrupt cop Seth?
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