If you've ever wanted to scribble a comment in the corner of a book and shout at a character, you'll know why I'm posting this thread. Also, I'll be posting chunks of a short story I'm writing, based on the Death Note universe. Feedback is welcome, as are your own scribblings! (Not stories, that's my thing. )
"You know a bartender at the '21' club in New York invented this?" queried Parker as he pulled the cork from the bottle. "Benedictine liqueur and cognac. It became so popular that the French started bottling the combination themselves. The guy never saw a dime of the profits. God, I hate the French."
Context: Taking a lunch break while attempting to track down a terrorist.
Sasha's Scribbling: DUDE! Talk about the terrorist threatening to kill hundreds of people, not the drink! THE LIVES, NOT THE DRINK! Besides, I like the French.