Home Sweet Home ~ A poem written on an airplane.

[Turtlicious]

Back to the brown tinged sky
the cracked black streets
and the fetid stench of the lonely
My Home Sweet Home

Back to where souls die
their wretched lives puttering
the wretched ashes
of Home Sweet Home

Back to crime
nickels and dimes
the torturous passage of time
the retarded wrapping in rhymes
Sounds like Home Sweet Home

No more sunny days
or happy faces
or easy jobs
in my Home Sweet Home

Only, terrible tests
and ridiculous tribulations
the prove the mettle of those
living at Home Sweet Home

[Jorick]

Not bad for freeform poetry, but...

[Antarctic Termite]

Generally I'd put a random, pointless, waste-your-time comment here, but I felt I might as well just say that I liked it.

On a similar topic I wrote a sixty stanza ballad a week or two ago.

[Turtlicious]

Not bad for freeform poetry, but...

ANGST ANGST ANGST ANGST ANGST ANGST ANGST ANGST

;D

Generally I'd put a random, pointless, waste-your-time comment here, but I felt I might as well just say that I liked it.

On a similar topic I wrote a sixty stanza ballad a week or two ago.

Jesus, that took me like an hour, that must have taken you forever. I'd love to read it if you're willing to share.

[Ozymandias]

lolpoems

[Herzinth]

lolpoems

lolenglishmen

[Antarctic Termite]

Jesus, that took me like an hour, that must have taken you forever. I'd love to read it if you're willing to share.

Sorry for a late reply.

I'll let you read it, but probably tomorrow (because I have to present it then and that way if it's terrible I'll find out before sending it to anyone). It's a school projecty thing.

[Ozymandias]

lolenglishmen

Who are you calling English?! D:

[Herzinth]

Who are you calling English?! D:

Do you not speak English?

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As your primary language that is.

[TP]