Page 161 of 203 FirstFirst ... 61111151159160161162163171 ... LastLast
Results 1,601 to 1,610 of 2028

Thread: Allaria: Chapter 2 - The Apotheoses' War(OOC)

  1. #1601
    Melon Oracle MelonHead's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jul 2011
    Location
    England
    Posts
    7,456
    Quote Originally Posted by Rilla View Post
    Nope. Mmmm delicious important plot piece

    - - - Updated - - -

    100 years or do and that depends on whee you are setting the story. I will give you a definitive answer later, on an iPod now
    It's not set in one place, but the start was just going to be in some unnamed forest.

    I need a city to visit for the second chapter, which will basically be Baldun chasing down an ancient Dwarven treasure, finding and interrupting a criminal ring completely by accident when trying to find the Dwarf he's looking for.

    The third chapter will be him venturing back out into the wild again, somewhere preferably nearby, where he will find a shrine to the Dwarven god which coincidentally is the one Forsoff finds. There he is given the chance to create a weapon and armor by a mysterious dwarf (he doesn't know it's the god.)

    The fourth chapter finds him find the treasure pretty early on, but then happen upon a fledgling dwarven settlement under siege by goblins. He helps protect the village (after some prompting)

    I won't say what happens in the fifth, as it doesn't matter, but I assume that's enough info for what I need to know.
    MelonHead does not give out free Melons.

  2. #1602
    Dewdrop on the fire fades mbl's Avatar
    Join Date
    May 2011
    Location
    The Void
    Posts
    3,086
    Quote Originally Posted by MelonHead View Post
    I can only summarize it was the evil guy with a knife.

    Khan... how could you.
    And here is where everyone realizes how the hunter found steak when he went off hunting in the middle of a forest... and why the minotaur never showed up for dinner


    Don't know about Doodlequest? Well fuck you, come and check it out.

  3. #1603
    Melon Oracle MelonHead's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jul 2011
    Location
    England
    Posts
    7,456
    Quote Originally Posted by mbl View Post
    And here is where everyone realizes how the hunter found steak when he went off hunting in the middle of a forest... and why the minotaur never showed up for dinner
    I regret nothing.
    MelonHead does not give out free Melons.

  4. #1604
    Khan The Magnificent GrievousKhan's Avatar
    Join Date
    May 2011
    Location
    In your nightmares...
    Posts
    8,569
    Who wants ground beef, steaks, pot roasts, and hamburgers?


    ^^Credited to Silux, the Mighty God Emperor!!^^

    “Life is change, chaos, filth and suffering. Death is peace, order, everlasting beauty.”





  5. #1605
    Dewdrop on the fire fades mbl's Avatar
    Join Date
    May 2011
    Location
    The Void
    Posts
    3,086
    Quote Originally Posted by MelonHead View Post
    It's not set in one place, but the start was just going to be in some unnamed forest.

    I need a city to visit for the second chapter, which will basically be Baldun chasing down an ancient Dwarven treasure, finding and interrupting a criminal ring completely by accident when trying to find the Dwarf he's looking for.

    The third chapter will be him venturing back out into the wild again, somewhere preferably nearby, where he will find a shrine to the Dwarven god which coincidentally is the one Forsoff finds. There he is given the chance to create a weapon and armor by a mysterious dwarf (he doesn't know it's the god.)

    The fourth chapter finds him find the treasure pretty early on, but then happen upon a fledgling dwarven settlement under siege by goblins. He helps protect the village (after some prompting)

    I won't say what happens in the fifth, as it doesn't matter, but I assume that's enough info for what I need to know.
    Most dwarven culture is in the middle regions of Allaria and there is also a lot of forests there so it would probably work as a setting for all your shitz. For the parts with the village and the dwarven shrine, most of their civilization is underground but they would probably have small towns and such (Not big enough to be marked on the map) above ground if you want to have the whole thing set above ground. If you are wanting to have the village and such below ground, Goblins may not be the best choice as, as far as they have been written out, they are the more the foresty types... so you might want to use some other sort of antagonist.


    Don't know about Doodlequest? Well fuck you, come and check it out.

  6. #1606
    Khan The Magnificent GrievousKhan's Avatar
    Join Date
    May 2011
    Location
    In your nightmares...
    Posts
    8,569
    Bah, bot goblins always run amok under ground. Not many would suffer their ugly hides above.

    That and they can live just about anywhere. Freedom for all goblins!

    Are these forest Goblins by any chance based of the red goblins in goblin commander? Those guys were awesome.


    ^^Credited to Silux, the Mighty God Emperor!!^^

    “Life is change, chaos, filth and suffering. Death is peace, order, everlasting beauty.”





  7. #1607
    Dewdrop on the fire fades mbl's Avatar
    Join Date
    May 2011
    Location
    The Void
    Posts
    3,086
    You'd probably expect Drow to be wrecking shit underground too... but unless I am remembering wrong, they are not that way either.

    - - - Updated - - -

    He might have said the dragonoids live underground, they could be causing problems


    Don't know about Doodlequest? Well fuck you, come and check it out.

  8. #1608
    Gothic Nightmare Skallagrim's Avatar
    Join Date
    Nov 2010
    Location
    The ghoul-guarded gateways of slumber
    Posts
    3,170
    If you are waiting on me I will try and get something up today/tonight.
    The writer who cares more about words than about characters, action, setting, and atmosphere is unlikely to create a vivid and continuous dream; he gets in his own way too much; in his poetic drunkenness, he can't tell the cart- and its cargo- from the horse.

    -John Gardner



    "Grieve not, wise warrior. It is better
    to avenge one's friend than mourn too much.
    Each of us must one day reach the end
    Of worldly life, let him who can win
    glory before he dies: that lives on
    after him, when he lifeless lies."

  9. #1609
    Melon Oracle MelonHead's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jul 2011
    Location
    England
    Posts
    7,456
    The village is above ground, but it's only a settlement built in the forests at the time of the story. It has a mine however, which is where I was going to have the goblins originate.

    I can always have them come out of the forests at night instead.
    MelonHead does not give out free Melons.

  10. #1610
    Melon Oracle MelonHead's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jul 2011
    Location
    England
    Posts
    7,456
    Damn, I love it when writer's block clears.

    I HAVE ALL THE POSTS ALL THE POSTS BITCHES
    MelonHead does not give out free Melons.

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •