HOMLESS SUPERPOWERS RP

[Coolsey]

Just clarifying, my post was assuming that Jack followed Geoff away from the scene. If Jack decides not to then I'll edit my post making Geoff sound like a crazy man shouting everything to the Cat. Also, yes I'm dragging Austin with me. He's a cat, and I jst man handled him. Lol

[RutulianJoe]

I don't really think it's possible for you to have closed the door on Lex's head; in that he slid through a guy's legs to get to the door, and thus there is shown to be a guy standing with his back to the door at the time when you're leaving it, if the door were to close it would hit the guy first (As in order to hit Lex's head it has to open inwards, as he slid out feet first). Further, it doesn't fit with what I or AAB have posted to say the door was closed at any point, so it doesn't make much sense for you to have opened it. If you could edit out the 'to open it' and 'let go the door' this problem would be fixed.

Apart from that, good post.

[Coolsey]

Ahh, ok I was confused about the door situation. I will definitely edit it when I get home from work tonight because editing on an iPhone is the worst torture you can go through. Also, I apologize about the ginger comment if I made anyone offended. X) lol

[RutulianJoe]

Mogtai: You're a Scotland-dweller; offended much?

[Mogtaki]

Nope! We're well aware that we have the highest number of gingers per population ratio in the entire world x)

And they're not becoming extinct, that's for sure.

[Coolsey]

And they're not becoming extinct, that's for sure.

I'm so sorry to hear about that.

[AAB]

"He leapt up from the couch filled with surprise and terror"

I got the impression that even the furniture was reacting to the mayhem.

[RutulianJoe]

OK, more problems. Mogtai, these guys are stated to be using semi-automatic rifles. Please adjust the post to reflect this. Second, you clearly haven't payed attention to the description of the bar in the setting description at the start of the OOC: the bar is the basement- the abandoned basement of the actual bar upstairs in which Jones set up a squatting bar. The floor is not described beyond a mention of second hand carpets, though in a basement it would probably be made of concrete. The alcohol is all kept across the room, either on the bar (now smashed onto the floor) or behind Jones' plywood partition. As such, you need to change how you've described your leap onto the guy.

Also, your power-level is a little high. I realise my definition of your strength may have been misleading- but the idea of "Able to overturn a large van" included the fact that you'd be using your whole body to push it, and the leverage that you'd be able to use as well. If you hit the guy against the wall, it would hurt him pretty badly, but not above the level of fractured bones. The concrete wall would not have been impacted by the person made of meat hitting it.

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AAB- it's stuffed with evil!

[Mogtaki]

Ah okay, I'll blame adrenaline in the next post x) And change things around too in the other. I was just using imaginative text with similes, but maybe they're not wanted.

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Why are you calling me Mogtai all the time D:

[RutulianJoe]

Nooooo... that's not what I meant about powerlevels...

To hit a guy hard enough that the wall would dent you would need to hit him hard enough to turn him into jelly. And that's not the kind of strength Snark has- that level of pure strength would be an entirely separate power. Snark's strength comes entirely from the fact that in monster-mode he is a huge beast practically made of muscle.

The problem wasn't with the similes- in my defence here I didn't realise one was being used, and "you could swear [that]" is a possibly misleading entry to a simile. If you were to have written "as if hard enough" that would have been more obvious- but the issue is that the specific simile used makes it seem like you haven't payed attention to the way the setting has thus far been described, which is a) confusing for all concerned, and b) makes me feel sad inside :'(

Imaginative text rich with description, character and general amazing-ness, is however, positively encouraged.

(The Mogtai thing is because, as we have established numerous times, I am bad at reading. Sorry! XD)